VIVALAMUSICA Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 Hey Guys! New to the site!! I'm a massive Coldplay fan and they've inspired me more than any other band to play music. I would be so appreciative if you could give a song I wrote a listen and give me any comments/suggestions. [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1vVwS1v3uA]YouTube- Debutante.mp4[/ame] I'm sure you'll hear the CM influence in there, although my voice sucks compared to the great man himself. Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawberry Swinger Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 it's really nice. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RunForTheHills Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 Very U2ish, I love it! How long have you been making music? :smiley: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VIVALAMUSICA Posted January 30, 2010 Author Share Posted January 30, 2010 First song I've ever written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Batman Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 You have a wonderful voice :blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahlem Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 wooow it's amazing! :stunned: myspace??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnnaElisabeth Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 Wow, it's awesome! :D Reminds me of Arcade Fire! :) :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eriks_b Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BerrymanGirl1 Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 ooo its nice!! I like it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cascais Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 I like it too, it's nice :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VIVALAMUSICA Posted January 30, 2010 Author Share Posted January 30, 2010 Thank you!!! Wow, this means so much to me - you never really know if what you do sucks or not. I don't have a myspace or anything as it literally is the first time I've recored anything. I just spent a bit of time learning garageband, which is a great program. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dreamt_too_late Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 I thought it was great and you have a great voice as well. It's different. :) Could you post the song lyrics? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VIVALAMUSICA Posted January 30, 2010 Author Share Posted January 30, 2010 I thought it was great and you have a great voice as well. It's different. :) Could you post the song lyrics? Sure! On the Sea you take me By the shore don’t break me Hold me in your fever so that I can see you Lie your fear down. Lie your fear down, Down. On the Sea you take me By the shore don’t break me Hold me in your fever so that I can see you Lie your fear down. Lie your fear down, Down. Hand me down my number Let me steal the thunder from the sky (musical break) I hum a hymn to a time that was I tip my hat and raise a glass to love Heavens above! I count the minutes between the hours I change the water in this vase of dead flowers As she sings from her tower. Because there’s nothing really I can do I’m getting close but I will never get close to you There’s nothing really I can do to save me from the sea. I would be beside you, you would be beside me If I thought you’d stay here, staying would be easy I would wait, I would wait For this fever to rush over me I would wait, I would wait For this fever to rush over me For this fever to rush over me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wherrwhfer Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 This is not bad... Not bad at all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rainyday42 Posted January 31, 2010 Share Posted January 31, 2010 Wow! This is amazing. :) Did you say you were in a band or just you? You should get a myspace (even though, I've never been :/). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flickahidalgo Posted January 31, 2010 Share Posted January 31, 2010 Wow. I like it! I like it a lot! :smiley: Reminds of something like U2. :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VIVALAMUSICA Posted January 31, 2010 Author Share Posted January 31, 2010 Wow! This is amazing. :) Did you say you were in a band or just you? You should get a myspace (even though, I've never been :/). I might put one together. For the moment it's me, my bedroom and a few beers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nam42 Posted January 31, 2010 Share Posted January 31, 2010 Great job, you're a very talented person, don't let it go to waste Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pink Posted January 31, 2010 Share Posted January 31, 2010 Very nice. Seriously, you should get some more stuff together and market yourself via Myspace, etc. I'd buy the mp3. Do you have any formal training or play any instruments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don't Shiver Posted January 31, 2010 Share Posted January 31, 2010 I like it. I like it alot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
getithom Posted February 1, 2010 Share Posted February 1, 2010 This is really good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cele Posted February 1, 2010 Share Posted February 1, 2010 Well done! I liked it, yes I did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VIVALAMUSICA Posted February 1, 2010 Author Share Posted February 1, 2010 Very nice. Seriously, you should get some more stuff together and market yourself via Myspace, etc. I'd buy the mp3. Do you have any formal training or play any instruments? That's really nice folks! No formal training, but I played all the instruments myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karenc Posted February 1, 2010 Share Posted February 1, 2010 Wow. That was really good! You've obviuosly got a lot of talent, too much not to do something with it. I agree about the myspace thing. Get yourself a page and get some more people listening, I'm pretty sure you'd get a fair few listeners ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Track Posted February 1, 2010 Share Posted February 1, 2010 When it started off I doubted a little, but as it progressed I really liked it. Had I not liked this I would have told you, kudos (and keep us posted ;)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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