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Hey Guys! New to the site!!

I'm a massive Coldplay fan and they've inspired me more than any other band to play music. I would be so appreciative if you could give a song I wrote a listen and give me any comments/suggestions.

 

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1vVwS1v3uA]YouTube- Debutante.mp4[/ame]

 

I'm sure you'll hear the CM influence in there, although my voice sucks compared to the great man himself.

Thank you!

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Thank you!!! Wow, this means so much to me - you never really know if what you do sucks or not.

I don't have a myspace or anything as it literally is the first time I've recored anything. I just spent a bit of time learning garageband, which is a great program.

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I thought it was great and you have a great voice as well. It's different. :)

 

Could you post the song lyrics?

 

Sure!

 

 

 

On the Sea you take me

By the shore don’t break me

Hold me in your fever so that I can see you

Lie your fear down.

Lie your fear down,

Down.

 

On the Sea you take me

By the shore don’t break me

Hold me in your fever so that I can see you

Lie your fear down.

Lie your fear down,

Down.

 

Hand me down my number

Let me steal the thunder from the sky

 

(musical break)

 

I hum a hymn to a time that was

I tip my hat and raise a glass to love

Heavens above!

 

I count the minutes between the hours

I change the water in this vase of dead flowers

As she sings from her tower.

 

Because there’s nothing really I can do

I’m getting close but I will never get close to you

There’s nothing really I can do to save me from the sea.

 

I would be beside you, you would be beside me

If I thought you’d stay here, staying would be easy

 

I would wait, I would wait

For this fever to rush over me

 

I would wait, I would wait

For this fever to rush over me

 

For this fever to rush over me.

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Very nice. Seriously, you should get some more stuff together and market yourself via Myspace, etc. I'd buy the mp3. Do you have any formal training or play any instruments?

 

That's really nice folks! No formal training, but I played all the instruments myself.

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Wow. That was really good! You've obviuosly got a lot of talent, too much not to do something with it.

 

I agree about the myspace thing. Get yourself a page and get some more people listening, I'm pretty sure you'd get a fair few listeners ;)

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