Hey,

I have an english thingy and I have to write a muder mystery story

everyone has to have a motive the kill the person that was murdered (except the victim and the detectives)

The people that need a motive to kill the victim are:

Phil

Guy

Will

Marianne

Chloe

Gwyneth

 

Detectives- Chris and Jonny :P

Victim- Susannah

 

It is set on a deserted tropical island that they all went to for a holiday and

in the end Gwyneth kill Susannah, but I need a motive for the characters and coz I am brain dead :D

 

Thanks

Who's Susannah and Marianne?.

Marianne is Wills wife and I just made Susannah up

You know this task would be made a lot easier if you just thought of what kind of relationships this Susannah chick had with everyone. That makes you think what could go wrong, etc...

You do realise when you kidnap them all and try and force them to play along you'll be arrested?

I can't even write my own stories.

Susannah is Matt Bellamy, therefore everyone has a motive and five people are gutted they aren't the ones to have succeeded in killing him. The end.

LOL I'M LAUGHING SO HARD I'M CRYING. THAT COMMENT JUST MADE MY DAY A GOOD DAY LOLOLOLOLOLOL.

I say introduce Eminem and his chainsaw from the old days into the mix and be done with all of them.all this thread has done is given me an image of Chris Martin trying to be Columbo:laugh3:.

Susannah is Phil's girlfriend

Phil: Found out she was secretly seeing Guy and planning to leave him

Guy: Had been in jail in the past for an assault on a paparazzi or something (violent past = motive)

Marianne: she lend Susannah a lot of money, for what Susannah said was an art project, but was actually for leaving with Guy to some exotic country.

Will: Will found out that his wife lend a lot of money to Susannah and that it was actually for running of with Guy

Chloe: Has a secret crush on Guy and couldn't handle that Susannah had something to do with him

Gwyneth: Is Phil's best friend and didn't want him to be hurt like that.

 

Something like that?

except the victim[/color] and the detectives)

 

I think that's obvious..

you live all in the privacy of the men coldplay? :surprised:

^ No. :|

you live all in the privacy of the men coldplay? :surprised:

 

What? :lol:

gigglesnort

Think about what your character wants/needs/desires

then think about what the character hates/dreads/avoids

then make the character go through what he/she hates to get what they want

 

 

/general help :uhoh:

Susannah is Phil's girlfriend

Phil: Found out she was secretly seeing Guy and planning to leave him

Guy: Had been in jail in the past for an assault on a paparazzi or something (violent past = motive)

Marianne: she lend Susannah a lot of money, for what Susannah said was an art project, but was actually for leaving with Guy to some exotic country.

Will: Will found out that his wife lend a lot of money to Susannah and that it was actually for running of with Guy

Chloe: Has a secret crush on Guy and couldn't handle that Susannah had something to do with him

Gwyneth: Is Phil's best friend and didn't want him to be hurt like that.

 

Something like that?

 

Thank you :)

Change Susannah to Joe Satriani. Then you have a motive for murder.

God some of the advice in here is shockers

rename the victim to be Lory , and whose dying words were so confusing , she implicated everyone. Then blame the dating agency for hiring her out to date all the boys cause Gwynnie and Marianne and the rest the wives dont put out. Phil is so sexually frustrated his cheeks go pink.....

 

or, nevermind .