[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HRFzZnGkssM]Viva la vida - YouTube[/ame]

 

ENJOY COMMENT LIKE ! :P

2 Hours Practice.

I just took a listen to this cover and was not surprised by it at all.

The complete arrangement of this cover isn't so well.

 

Tell the drummer to stop playing his hi-hat all over the song. It's way over the top and mostly irritating.

Also, turn the the volume up of the guitar.

The vocals are out of the singer's reach, try to expand the reach of the voice and try again without hi-hats, more guitar and better vocals.

Also, try to keep the timing right wich is often very off.

 

I'm not saying it's very bad, but according to the title it should've been a very good cover, what it's obviously not. With some changes it could be a lot better!

Yeah i kinda agree with him ^ the drumming is very annoying...

I just took a listen to this cover and was not surprised by it at all.

The complete arrangement of this cover isn't so well.

 

Tell the drummer to stop playing his hi-hat all over the song. It's way over the top and mostly irritating.

Also, turn the the volume of the guitar.

The vocals are out of the singer's reach, try to expand the reach of the voice and try again without hi-hats, more guitar and better vocals.

Also, try to keep the timing right wich is often very off.

 

I'm not saying it's very bad, but according to the title it should've been a very good cover, what it's obviously not. With some changes it could be a lot better!

 

I agree about every single thing. Wow, really.

I'm think I'm gonna throw up a hi-hat :\

After being so enthusiastic in the title I thought "hmm...that looks like a good cover, maybe?" but not. Not at all. Sorry to say that dude.

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Where were the choirs? They do a lot for this song.

Also the singer didn't show that much on piano, it looked like if he knew only one pattern when there are a lot of them in the song.

The ending was quite...weird? Your keyboard guy appears to me as an immature teenager

 

I want the same thing as PianoRocker.

NO HI-HAT. More guitar. Better vocal, more piano/violin parts. Not just a main viva riff all over the song. + Keyboardist and drummer - grow up.

I think it's a good start, really. Don't be afraid to belt out the singing - sing in the shower if need be, getting more range helps, record and listen back, but singing is a brave thing to do, so hats off to the singer! Keyboards - violin synthesizer I liked, could be a little more sustained, but all in all a great start. Drums - need a farm bell! Some tom toms maybe, percussion crescendos like thunder or cannons but not overpowering the other musical parts, but the beat was well kept, so for a start, you did alright! Don't let the naysayers get you down, you did pretty good for 2 hours practice, so with more work and more polishing, getting the qualities up, adding some backgrounds, I think you'll sound great!

;)

i need to kno where to find sheet music for viva la vida on the violin does anyone kno where i could get some??

Folks here can be quick to the guns but don't let them discourage you, it takes great courage to put yourself out there like this and I think you guys have achieved a lot.

 

There's definitely still a long way to go - refer to above comments! - but A for effort :)

^ you my friend,

you've just one the Nice Guy of the day Award :)

 

 

I don't have much to add to previous comments,

but please don't add the "2 Hours Practice"

it makes it look like you don't care much for the music itself.

Thanks for the feedback guys ! I agree my cover of the Scientist is alot better and i will take it as constructive critisism :)