January 23, 200521 yr lovely :nice: :blush: thanks a lot sis, it´s this one i was talking about yesterday :thumbsup:
January 23, 200521 yr Oh yes' date=' I remember :cool: I love your poems :P[/quote'] :blush: thanks a lot...this one is about creation. i mean inspiration, muses.. :cool:
January 24, 200521 yr :cool: I see. It's a very comforting poem :) Yes it is. ;) I thought to send the last ones to eoi mag too, but i think is better wait their answer about the first ones... :)
January 24, 200521 yr Broken keys oh that's deeply sad friend your tears can't be stopped even you wonder yourself why? You look around the key is broken you lose your way you get there too late Now the door is closed and you can't escape walls are thinner, now you can see throught them Walls that are made by you brick by brick you built it and you noticied now that the key is broken you can't escape, now from your own castle the wind will broke it you can't broke it yet your tears seems rivers rivers of sadness your tears won`t stop 'cause your key is broken you tried to open the door and it's still close, dear time is ending, friend walls are nearer, be quiet a bird is singing it brings a note it says how to escape from your own castle was written by your friend the guy you used to love he wrote it been child he used to make you smile oh dear there´s a ladder go out trought the window oh friend be quiet, sad is going out the bricks of you castle, must to broke oh dear there´s a piano one made by your friend it´s on the sand, dear the sand you use for your castle you play it keys and it gives you a tune the best sounds are coming birds are singing, dear it make you smile, now your castle wall's are down oh dear you stopped to cry an eagle look at you it gave you a key oh friend a new way just follow the new path don`t worry now, mate don`t ask for a map 'cause the birds and wind will show you the right one. Memories and joy will make you smile wind and music, your friends will be beside you always. Ariadna Squire Damique (24/01/05 Monday) :)
January 24, 200521 yr Yeah that's probably wise :) I hope they like them :cool: I hope it too. ;) well must like it to my teacher, he said me he have my poems.. :) seems he likes music and poetry so i hope he likes them and publish them :)
January 24, 200521 yr :stunned: :blush: I think that's my favourite one this line sounds like it should be in a song...I can't explain why "your tears won`t stop 'cause your key is broken "
January 24, 200521 yr :blush: yeah last ones i`m trying that they sound more as lyrics so they can be sing. :D i think i'm improving day by day ( i think that listen english music most of the day helps) but i know i must learn a lot yet. ;) i'm just a beginner yet. :)
January 24, 200521 yr You're very welcome ;) I've got to go now ari but keep up the writing :P :cool:
January 24, 200521 yr You're very welcome ;) I've got to go now ari but keep up the writing :P :cool: ^same here sis :kiss: sweet dreams, see ya soon I'll keep writing everyday in my life 'cause writing is the air i breath, the blood that makes beat my heart. ;)
January 26, 200521 yr Outside Be quiet on your steps be careful on your words be calm on your feels friend, cheer your joy it's a nice noon out here be ready to see the beauty be glad to see the noon noone will see it too nomore you'll see it only once, only once don't mind the cold outside your heart keep warm looking the beauty noon listen the wind melodies no worries on your mind just sit and listen the trees just sit and feel the sand just feel you free, friend no matter what will happen world has stop for you, now things are better than they used to be problem can be fixed, no problems Oh dear just lye and dream dream looking the sky dream feeling the sand dream feeling the sea. There's no matter outside your heart still be warm even if the world is freezing you'll cheer your joy a beautiful noon is beside you a wonderful nature is waiting you an amazing melody told you how to be glad, throw the trees look on your side, friend from your magic mirror look the reallity, that you see and remember on your pillow so friend be glad of it just sit and dream, once just sit and close your eyes no troubles are there now. Ariadna Squire Damique (26/01/05 Wednesday)
January 27, 200521 yr oh fi :P ari, :stunned: keep writing girl! wow :wink: :blush: you like them eva? Thanks sis :kiss: i'll keep writing, i must still improve it. :thumbsup: and anyways if any day i'll stop writing in english i'll keep in spanish. :cool:
February 5, 200521 yr be sure i'll told you bro :kiss: i don't know if i posted it here or not... but my eng teacher told me i must one poems (from all i sent to eoi mag) and i choose "gamve over", "no time", "tears" and another that is before tears i think. told him i have more new poems (like the double i sent them) and he said me i must choose bewteen which i sent. :)
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