twin4life Posted February 6, 2005 Share Posted February 6, 2005 hey wow, you're a good writer! those are some pretty good poems :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 6, 2005 Share Posted February 6, 2005 :blush: thanks a lot amanda, sis. :kiss: sorry i have to go now, see ya all. take care. ;) yes those are better mixe narrative and lyrics i think, i use to do one or other style...i think i improved, but i must keep learning and improving. ;) i have to learn a lot yet. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted February 6, 2005 Share Posted February 6, 2005 That's really great about your teacher saying those things! :P :cool: I'm gonna have another read of this thread :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 6, 2005 Share Posted February 6, 2005 That's really great about your teacher saying those things! :P :cool: I'm gonna have another read of this thread :D Yes it it, thanks a lot fifi. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 6, 2005 Share Posted February 6, 2005 Freaky feelings: wrath Be calm my friend don't worry too much just take it easy be calm it's best for you When your eyes become red just take a deep breath When your hands become strong just write on a sheet It's best for you it'll care your health better than any pill just relax, change your mind get this chance, mate try to live more calm it's easier to do When the angry blind you just go and lye on your bed when you want to shout just look back at your memories don't worry to cry, friend it's better than go mad i won't laugh about this feels comes from deep souls deeply feels are the hardest to say just hugs me on your warm arms i'm so sorry about what i did i want to change what i said does i have any chance yet? what i must to do, now? if i'm totallya alone now what i'll can do to change it? I promise i'm not like this i was blind of wrath i didn't want to hurt you forgive this lonely soul Ariadna Squire Damique (06/02/05 Sunday) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 Now that one is very suitable for me at the moment! :stunned: :idea2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 9, 2005 Share Posted February 9, 2005 Now that one is very suitable for me at the moment! :stunned: :idea2: could be. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 Shy deep love feel I can't believe my eyes yet i wonder why yours were like that looking so sweetly at mines that's beginning of my troubles that wonderful shy shight thos shinning warm eyes they are stuck on my head why you hide to me whenever i'm on your place oh please dear, tell me anything i wanna hear you voice that's the trouble man i really want to know you better but i'm too shy and feeling so unsafe i wanna be rounded by your warm hands oh babe i really can't hide this now i know i must move, it's my turn i must play that game, dear love i wanna wait for you, you shy king come on, climb to my castle and recue me form my one jail oh babe i'm as yours, i feels the same so come and sing on my balcony, like a singer bird that comes to help me to live you make it comes again it knoneck at my head again i can't forgot you now, sweetheart kind sweet man, tell me anything it's like playing chess i must move now, why love? you can do anything too? don't you? oh babe i'm waiting for you but the king hides when feels it too he's too shy to say a word, oh babe be sure of your feels and tell me what you feel it's only me who feels that near you? just answer me that, sweetheart i wanna let you know how i feel but how? if you hide from me, cause your feels if you don't leave me a note with your address, love? what to say youmy love? i must know you better friend, i can't still be waiting and crying for you i must take my coat and go to meet you now. that's what i must tell you now if i can talk only with you today i want to meet you no matter where i really want to do something right now I don't want to keep feeling that sad now i don't worry if i can't get you say me a word i'm sure i won't forget you on my mind i'll always be glad to get those words from it Ariadna Squire Damique (12/02/05) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evori Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 :stunned: wooow it's great! :stunned: i like it! hey, you save these poems, don't you? :idea2: you can write a good book! :stunned: :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 yes i save them... i want to publish one with an editorial (versalbooks) but i need money. i don't want to translate them yet.. i think it pierde su esencia... o puede perderla y temo que eso ocurra, aunque puede que los traduzca algun dia cercano. :) muchas gracias :blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evori Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 in english they really work, i think :confused: hehe in spanish they can change... :stunned: and get another meanings, you know bah :P hehe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 yes i know.. well i think they msut be grammaticaly and make sense... most of you like them. and hehe my eng teacher asked me if i ever try a competition. i said him i'm too shy and i'm not sure if are good. :) so if he had a look on those ones i finally gave him (accidentaly) may be he said me that because he also like them.. :idea2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted February 12, 2005 Author Share Posted February 12, 2005 That's so touching :cry: If someone wrote a poem as sweet as beas, i'd melt down right away :blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 :blush: thanks a lot ren bro. i hope that if i ever show them to the guy i love he thinks the same. :kiss: and i hope he won't be jealous 'cause them. :stunned: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted February 12, 2005 Author Share Posted February 12, 2005 if i was him i'd blush like this --> :blush: That was one of the sweetest poems ever! :D I tried to write something to my special one a few weeks ago but i suck at it so i recorded a song instead..haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 good to hear bro. :D i think that if he read it he blush too, in fact he blush when he saw me near him. :blush: so that's the proof that those poems never where to you know who.. the d. you know ren, muchas gracias por descubrirnos la doble cara que tenia. always wher to guy i know in person. and those last ones (since november/ december) were most of them to Sun. :smug: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted February 12, 2005 Author Share Posted February 12, 2005 ahh that's cute, maybe he's just shy .. just give him some time .. but hey dont forget to post your new poems here so we can read them sis :P Bene, gracias a dios ya se fue y no creoq ue vuelva, eso espero, pero si fuera insistente y vuelve .. esta vez yo me pongo la condenada capa de superman y lo fulmino de nuevo :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 muchas gracias ren bro. :kiss: estoy hablando de Sun con una amiga puede que mañana haya noticias nuevas sobre el.. :rolleyes: seguiré posteando poemas aquí pase lo que pase con Sun, sois mis amigos como herman@s. :thumsbup: *hugs* :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted February 12, 2005 Author Share Posted February 12, 2005 aw, creo que hablo a nombre de todos cuando digo que puedes contar con todos nosotros para lo que seas.. adema ya te considero mi hermanita wooo! esto de ser hijo unico es horrible a veces pero hey :lol: *hugs* :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 muchas gracias ren :kiss: lo mismo digo aqui a pesar que me llevo bastante bien con mis padres a veces se añora que haya alguien mas por casa. :/ muchas gracias, sé que me apreciais mucho todos, os aprecio mucho tambien a todos :kiss: *hugs them all* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted February 12, 2005 Author Share Posted February 12, 2005 :blush: Si, te entiendo.. como cuando hacia travesuras de pequeño y como no tenia hermanos a quien culpar , mis padres sienpre sabian que era yo el que rompia las cosas :lol: :lol: Bueno, una vez trate de culpar a mi perrito pero no funciono :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 jeje yo ni tengo perrito :( jeje bueno si :idea2: mi peluche :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted February 12, 2005 Author Share Posted February 12, 2005 ahh pero es mejor, el perrito de peluche no tienes que hacer sus "cositas" por toda la casa y no comen nada asi que son economicos :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 sipi jeje una vez me iban a haber comprado uno pero no me porté bien el tiempo suficiente :( de todos modos sigo queriendo tener una ardilla pero es mas dificil. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted February 12, 2005 Author Share Posted February 12, 2005 ahh ya veo :P Yo tengo 2 perritos, uno ya tiene 13 años y el otro 4 :stunned: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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