hey wow, you're a good writer!

those are some pretty good poems :)

:blush: thanks a lot amanda, sis. :kiss:

 

sorry i have to go now, see ya all. take care. ;)

 

yes those are better mixe narrative and lyrics i think, i use to do one or other style...i think i improved, but i must keep learning and improving. ;) i have to learn a lot yet. :)

That's really great about your teacher saying those things! :P :cool:

I'm gonna have another read of this thread :D

That's really great about your teacher saying those things! :P :cool:

I'm gonna have another read of this thread :D

Yes it it, thanks a lot fifi. ;)

Freaky feelings: wrath

Be calm my friend

don't worry too much

just take it easy

be calm it's best for you

 

When your eyes become red

just take a deep breath

When your hands become strong

just write on a sheet

 

It's best for you

it'll care your health

better than any pill

just relax, change your mind

 

get this chance, mate

try to live more calm

it's easier to do

 

When the angry blind you

just go and lye on your bed

when you want to shout

just look back at your memories

 

don't worry to cry, friend

it's better than go mad

i won't laugh about this

feels comes from deep souls

 

deeply feels are the hardest to say

just hugs me on your warm arms

i'm so sorry about what i did

i want to change what i said

 

does i have any chance yet?

what i must to do, now?

if i'm totallya alone now

what i'll can do to change it?

 

I promise i'm not like this

i was blind of wrath

i didn't want to hurt you

forgive this lonely soul

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

(06/02/05 Sunday)

Now that one is very suitable for me at the moment! :stunned: :idea2:

Now that one is very suitable for me at the moment! :stunned: :idea2:

could be. :)

Shy deep love feel

I can't believe my eyes yet

i wonder why yours were like that

looking so sweetly at mines

 

that's beginning of my troubles

that wonderful shy shight

thos shinning warm eyes

they are stuck on my head

 

why you hide to me

whenever i'm on your place

oh please dear, tell me anything

i wanna hear you voice

 

that's the trouble man

i really want to know you better

but i'm too shy and feeling so unsafe

i wanna be rounded by your warm hands

 

oh babe i really can't hide this now

i know i must move, it's my turn

i must play that game, dear love

i wanna wait for you, you shy king

 

come on, climb to my castle

and recue me form my one jail

oh babe i'm as yours, i feels the same

so come and sing on my balcony, like a singer bird

that comes to help me to live

 

you make it comes again

it knoneck at my head again

i can't forgot you now, sweetheart

kind sweet man, tell me anything

 

it's like playing chess

i must move now, why love?

you can do anything too?

don't you? oh babe i'm waiting for you

 

but the king hides when feels it too

he's too shy to say a word, oh babe

be sure of your feels and tell me what you feel

it's only me who feels that near you?

 

just answer me that, sweetheart

i wanna let you know how i feel

but how? if you hide from me, cause your feels

if you don't leave me a note with your address, love?

 

what to say youmy love?

i must know you better friend,

i can't still be waiting and crying for you

i must take my coat and go to meet you now.

 

that's what i must tell you now

if i can talk only with you today

i want to meet you no matter where

i really want to do something right now

 

I don't want to keep feeling that sad now

i don't worry if i can't get you say me a word

i'm sure i won't forget you on my mind

i'll always be glad to get those words from it

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

(12/02/05)

:stunned: wooow it's great! :stunned: i like it!

hey, you save these poems, don't you? :idea2: you can write a good book! :stunned: :wink:

yes i save them... i want to publish one with an editorial (versalbooks) but i need money.

i don't want to translate them yet.. i think it pierde su esencia... o puede perderla y temo que eso ocurra, aunque puede que los traduzca algun dia cercano. :)

 

muchas gracias :blush:

in english they really work, i think :confused: hehe

in spanish they can change... :stunned: and get another meanings, you know bah :P hehe

yes i know.. well i think they msut be grammaticaly and make sense... most of you like them. and hehe my eng teacher asked me if i ever try a competition. i said him i'm too shy and i'm not sure if are good. :) so if he had a look on those ones i finally gave him (accidentaly) may be he said me that because he also like them.. :idea2:

That's so touching :cry:

If someone wrote a poem as sweet as beas, i'd melt down right away :blush:

:blush: thanks a lot ren bro. i hope that if i ever show them to the guy i love he thinks the same. :kiss: and i hope he won't be jealous 'cause them. :stunned:

if i was him i'd blush like this --> :blush:

That was one of the sweetest poems ever! :D

I tried to write something to my special one a few weeks ago but i suck at it so i recorded a song instead..haha

good to hear bro. :D

 

i think that if he read it he blush too, in fact he blush when he saw me near him. :blush:

 

so that's the proof that those poems never where to you know who.. the d. you know ren, muchas gracias por descubrirnos la doble cara que tenia.

 

always wher to guy i know in person. and those last ones (since november/ december) were most of them to Sun. :smug:

ahh that's cute, maybe he's just shy .. just give him some time .. but hey dont forget to post your new poems here so we can read them sis :P

 

Bene, gracias a dios ya se fue y no creoq ue vuelva, eso espero, pero si fuera insistente y vuelve .. esta vez yo me pongo la condenada capa de superman y lo fulmino de nuevo :D

muchas gracias ren bro. :kiss:

estoy hablando de Sun con una amiga puede que mañana haya noticias nuevas sobre el.. :rolleyes:

seguiré posteando poemas aquí pase lo que pase con Sun, sois mis amigos como herman@s. :thumsbup:

 

*hugs* :kiss:

aw, creo que hablo a nombre de todos cuando digo que puedes contar con todos nosotros para lo que seas.. adema ya te considero mi hermanita wooo! esto de ser hijo unico es horrible a veces pero hey :lol: *hugs* :kiss:

muchas gracias ren :kiss: lo mismo digo aqui a pesar que me llevo bastante bien con mis padres a veces se añora que haya alguien mas por casa. :/

 

muchas gracias, sé que me apreciais mucho todos, os aprecio mucho tambien a todos :kiss:

 

*hugs them all*

:blush:

 

Si, te entiendo.. como cuando hacia travesuras de pequeño y como no tenia hermanos a quien culpar , mis padres sienpre sabian que era yo el que rompia las cosas :lol: :lol:

 

Bueno, una vez trate de culpar a mi perrito pero no funciono :P

jeje yo ni tengo perrito :( jeje bueno si :idea2: mi peluche :D

ahh pero es mejor, el perrito de peluche no tienes que hacer sus "cositas" por toda la casa y no comen nada asi que son economicos :lol:

sipi jeje una vez me iban a haber comprado uno pero no me porté bien el tiempo suficiente :(

de todos modos sigo queriendo tener una ardilla pero es mas dificil. :)

ahh ya veo :P

Yo tengo 2 perritos, uno ya tiene 13 años y el otro 4 :stunned: