aww :blush: it's a very nice song :kiss: thanks a lot bro... mm does Ian Brown use to sing in spanish more than in english? :idea2: ...

 

*goes to seach sun mail*

no I not really but a lot of his tunes have a spanish infulence. I think he has a spanish/ mexican girlfriend !

i love it! he sings it in spanish with a mancunian accent! :lol:

yesss I know I know someone who found it very funny !!

no I not really but a lot of his tunes have a spanish infulence. I think he has a spanish/ mexican girlfriend !

aww that's so sweet :blush: :nice:

Mountains

You wonder how you get there

how difficult it seems

but one day you get there

 

go down, go down

quickly friend

go down go down

carefuly mate

 

you get by yourself

to the top of the sky

and are sitting now

 

looking at the images

all seems so small now

seems you can get all

 

go down, go down

carefuly friend

go down go down

quietly mate

 

but you aren't right

you woke feeling so high

and you slip down the hill

 

you are hurted by plants

you are bleeding now

your arms are broken

 

go down, go down

quickly friend

go down go down

quietly mate

 

but you seem been cool

i just need crawl on the beach

but nothing can't change it

 

you went down in a second

you broke your soul now

you keep smiling today

 

go down, go down

quickly friend

go down go down

quietly mate

 

but wait and see tomorrow

you'll woke up crying

you'll can fill a pool

 

but nothing will change

you still been hurted

by yourself desires.

 

go down, go down

quickly friend

go down go down

slowly mate

 

please don't damage

yourself again

try to change things now

 

there nothing best i can told you

i'll be round you everyday

i'll keep helping you to go on

 

go down, go down

quickly friend

go down go down

quietly mate

 

i no matter if you hide

i won't get angry if you blame me

the best i can do is stand as stones

just to help you when you'll go down

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

(Wednesday 24/03/05)

I really like the lines

"go down, go down

quickly friend

go down go down

quietly mate" because it's meaning kinda changes throughout the poem

Another great poem Ari :)

thanks a lot fifi. :kiss: ... me really i'm going down now.. :(

You're more than welcome :)

Awww Ari, what's wrong? :( :/

i don't know... that's the main problem i don't know why... :/ may be it's cause the weather... i'll go out tomorrow so i hope i'll feel better.. :)

 

how are you doing fifi ? :kiss:

:/ well I really hope you feel better tomorrow :)

Did you talk to the people about the band thing? :)

 

I'm good thanks. I'm going to stay with my cousin for a few days so that should be fun :cool:

yes i'm talking now with a friend... (Jose, she wants to play the electric guitar..).

 

aww :blush: how old is your cousin? :cool:

Oh that's really great! I hope it all works out :cool:

 

Oh my cousin is nearly the same age as me and she's more like a friend than a cousin really :lol:

oh so lucky. :D i hope i have cousins as old as me... :/

Oh some cousins who are the same age as me are just really annoying! :stunned:

They're too serious! :stunned:

oh i know.. :/

What to do?

What to do, friend

when you feel so down

and you are sure you are alone

 

when you tried hard to change

but life have other rythm

when you feel your chances

aren't on your hand anymore

 

what to do now?

what to do friend?

how to change it?

let me know a way

 

when you call to your friends

and they don't answer back

when you write letters

and none of them get a back one

 

what to do now?

what to do friend?

how to change it?

let me know a way

 

i'm still thinking hard

what did i do wrong?

what do i have to change

to feel better now

 

how do i must be

if i tried hard

and feel it's hurting me more

feel i'm wasting my time

 

what to do now?

what to do friend?

how to change it?

let me know a way

 

but what to today

when you woke up

and feel you are getting cold

you are becoming a stone

 

you tried hard to change

tried to smile more often

tried to be more friendly

tried to spend more time with world

 

what to do now?

what to do friend?

how to change it?

let me know a way

 

but you call all the gates today

and none of them were opened

you're feeling the world

don't think of you anymore

 

it's hard i know

my heart is broking now

my eyes can't stop crying

my soul is going out forever

 

what to do now?

what to do friend?

how to change it?

let me know a way

 

i won't feel the same since today

i'll change all right now

i'll stop the machine

to built me a new one

 

how to do it, alone?

when you can't find a way

a good way to follow

even if it's the hardest one

 

what to do now?

what to do friend?

how to change it?

let me know a way

 

i can`t do anymore

i can`t keep walking

don't look back at me

and just follow your way.

 

don't worry at me more

i'll be trying to change myself

but i'm not hiding from my destiny

i'll accept it after i get the answer

 

Never is too late, dear friend (to change)

never is too soon, dear friend(to find a way)

just do the things you want (even if it'll makes you cry later)

and you'll feel happy again, (no matter what others will say)

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

(07/04/05)

Thats really good Ari! But I dont like you being sad like that, at least it leads to good work :confused:

 

I like this verse in particular:

 

how to do it, alone?

when you can't find a way

a good way to follow

even if it's the hardest one

 

And then the closing one. Hehe I always get excited to see a new post in here. :D

well that is what is on my mind those days.. :/

but anyways it have a positive ending. :)

Yes! I do that too, I write a really sad poem that ends with an uplifting feel but one that isnt TOO positive (Because that would be pretending).

 

Poems really help to get out those emotions just like that.

yes, that's the basic thing about why i wrote poems. :)

 

i know some or most of them are sad but.. :(

I know, I know. Besides its way too hard to write a happy poem, even if you are happy, its like impossible.

i just translate myself "Old friends" poem.

 

Viejos amigos

 

hola amigo, hace mucho tiempo

desde que nos vimos

¿que ha sido de ti?

 

Sigues tan callado

sigues preocupado

Ya no me miras más

 

no te preocupes camarada

seguiremos siendo amigos

hasta el fin del mundo

 

lo sabemos desde que nos conocimos

¿porqué lo dudas ahora?

¿porque te ocultas en silencio?

 

amigo, seguimos siendo los mismos

incluso si eliges otro camino

siempre estaré a tu lado

 

mi puerta estará al lado de la tuya

sólo llama cuando lo necesites

y te ayudaré siempre.

 

recibí tu último mensaje

reconociste que erraste

todo este tiempo

 

no te preocupes

aún podemos arreglarlo

sólo llámame cuando lo necesites

 

te aeguro que estaré aquí

no importa cual sea el problema

estaré allí para ayudarte

 

no ocultes tus problemas

hazmelos saber

como hacias antes

no te atemorice volver atrás

 

incluso si fuese el último momento

te perdonaré todo

somos como una familia

debes ya saberlo

 

no puedo culparte ahora

llámame cuando lo necesites

estaré junto a ti siempre

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

(16/01/05)

translated: 07/04/05

I know' date=' I know. Besides its way too hard to write a happy poem, even if you are happy, its like impossible.[/quote']

i know... usually happy poems are harder to write... :/

Guilty mind

I've been all this night crying

Nothing can't help me now, to feel better

I feel so down today, i still wonder why

I still heard the walls going down quickly

 

Just for a few hours

i had the world on my hands

I had the chance to change

and i let all go down

 

Nothing can make me smile again

i noticied that since some months ago

nothing was the same

nothing is clear again, all is dark yet

 

I don't know what did i do wrong

what did i do, and all seems so dark

i can recognize anything near me now

my hands can touch only smoke

 

all the figures i knew are going now

nothing is the same since days before

i don't know yet what did i do wrong

how i can fix all again

 

until the machine broke itself

how i'll can escape from those monsters

once and again i crowl againt them

again the crazy see, i was the best surfer

 

i was so high and happy

sitting down a tree

looking how the world was moving

but since some days the wind has stop

 

i wonder why it won't come back anymore

i can't stop crying day and night

nothing can help me now

i lost the chances i had on my hands

 

Just for a few hours

i had the world on my hands

I had the chance to change

and i let all go down

 

Feel free, go away

i said while my eyes beging to cry

i felt my heart beating

but my hands are so cold now

 

nothing will be the same

while i'll be here seeing the leafs moving

nothing will change yet

till i stand up and feel my heart.

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

(24-04-05 Sunday