Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 yes thats the main reason, but it's good if people also like them. :) specially when if you want to be a professional writer. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 Of course, but what I meant was, just don't let anyone change what you think about your poetry :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 I know fifi. i keep writing and don't mind a lot about what people say. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 Good :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 just i mind what my teacher said, she said me i msut read more poetry, 'cause it's a younger style and i must improve it, well i'm young so :P but she also told my "keep writing, never quit writing". :) anyways i didn't show her the best poem so.. :) i thought to tranlate the english poems into spanish and show her it. :idea2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 Good idea :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 yeah, last year i show my french teacher a some poems she like them, anyways she's married with a nephew of a spanish writer (Miguel Hernandez), that's so cool. :) and some teachers knows that i write but i never show them any poem.. i'm too shy :embarrased: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 Miguel Hernandez sounds really familiar..... :thinking: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 he is a poet. i didn't study him a lot at high, well as good as i wanted but i know about him, i saw a film about him on tv. his dad didn't allowed him to study, they lived in a town and he had to care the sheeps they have, so he spent most of the time reading books that a friend give him, and writing poetry so he use to don't know where some sheeps are... so his dad argued with him and stuff... i think he end on jail on the dictature or ended killed on the war... i don't remember well how he ends, but wasn't a good ending :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 13, 2005 Share Posted March 13, 2005 Too many questions what to do when your head is so crazy cause loads of ideas? questions, ideas, theories ones so different to others then sit down and listen your heart, oh friend decitions come from soul actions come from brain you guess you'll be wrong why darling, why sweet friend? you want to think positive but you can't now, why? your experience teached you that's the main think now you are sure you'll be wrong again oh love don't think it anymore you went to any beach and throw on the water all your memories letters, photos and sounds this is a new present today live it with no troubles you're a new person you just born again why help you to broke the bubble? just a friend you don't remember just a moment that you remember Love is in the corner lucky is on your side now oh babe be sure you'll get it stand in front his eyes both looks so sweet to other decitions come from soul actions come from mind you are stopped yet thinking what to do what to say now oh babe didn't you rebith? oh try a new way today won't sit and wait for tomorrow cause life is today you make your life very second oh babe don't sit and wait water don't come to the prey you must built it or the drops will go to sea again oh those rivers of sad that you cried so long are past now dear think about it waiting won't help you anymore won't change your life take yourself and go out meet him today or leave him forever it'll hurt you deeper everyday just tell him though your sight. that's love dear, that's the thing that make beats the life only it can't be explained you only both can understand your language those are the words of love the ones that never are listened just two can know it just to soulmates can know it no more days you'll can wait no longer you'll still crying life it's only how we want it'll be things are on your side always just be brave to recognize it to let him know today how you felt all this time no matter what'll happen tomorrow life is with you today his eyes looks at yours and time is stopped just say him a word. Those word just can be listen by your soul in love this shine it's only 'cause it nothing will be dark no more Ariadna Squire Damique (Sunday 13/03/05) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted March 14, 2005 Share Posted March 14, 2005 I like it! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted March 14, 2005 Share Posted March 14, 2005 I like it! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 14, 2005 Share Posted March 14, 2005 thanks a lot fifi, sis :kiss: i show a friend a poem in spanish, called ·esperando verte" and she like it a lot. :) she said me i'm so talented. :) then we ended talking about form a band (i'll be songwriter on it, and she the singer), we both an another friend, that i told about this idea weeks later, so i hope we'll talk about it this weekend. so cool isn't it? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted March 14, 2005 Share Posted March 14, 2005 It really is! I hope it all goes well :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 15, 2005 Share Posted March 15, 2005 thanks a lot, i hope all this works. :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted March 21, 2005 Author Share Posted March 21, 2005 bump for beita :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 21, 2005 Share Posted March 21, 2005 thanks a lot bro :kiss: may be i'll post a poem here... i wrote one in spanish days ago. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reilly Posted March 21, 2005 Share Posted March 21, 2005 Do poems translate properly when done in english? I mean, rhyming scheme wouldnt work, but would anything work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 i know that, that's why i'm afraid to tranlate them :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reilly Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 Well Im sure they're great, if you could write another english one it would be schweeet. I still havent written (Since the last one I gave you ari) so I just need to keep doing that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 oh well the last one i wrote was in spanish... :/ ... i prefer translate them by myself...i think it'll keep more their meaning... :) oh well reilly i know there are times when you write more and times when you write less. :/ i had this times too. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reilly Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 Yeah, only I have times where I write NOTHING at all, oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 aww i'm sure that if you keep writing then you'll have times when you'll write a lot more than you used. :) that's what i did, i keep writing since i was 10 years old more often than years before, so i use to have times when i wrote more since i'm 14 years old. :) (onces i write poetry, others i write short stories..) and i also have times when i don't write (during months) :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bart Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 A song by Ian Brown .... unsure if I sent u before u can give it to sun ! have u heard it yet Que quieres Que quieres Cuando el mundo es tan grande y tan pequeno al mismo tiempo Que quieres Que quieres Cuando El mundo Es tan Grande y tan pequeno al mismo tiempo Que puedo hacer por ti que tienes todo Solo te puedo amar Solo te puedo amar Cuando los dias hayan pasado Y la noche ha empezado Y las estrellas empiezan a caer del cielo Solo te puedo amar Y El soy y la lluvia se juntan para crear El arcoiris Solo te puedo amar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bart Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 A song by Ian Brown .... unsure if I sent u before u can give it to sun ! have u heard it yet Que quieres Que quieres Cuando el mundo es tan grande y tan pequeno al mismo tiempo Que quieres Que quieres Cuando El mundo Es tan Grande y tan pequeno al mismo tiempo Que puedo hacer por ti que tienes todo Solo te puedo amar Solo te puedo amar Cuando los dias hayan pasado Y la noche ha empezado Y las estrellas empiezan a caer del cielo Solo te puedo amar Y El soy y la lluvia se juntan para crear El arcoiris Solo te puedo amar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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