yes thats the main reason, but it's good if people also like them. :) specially when if you want to be a professional writer. :)

Of course, but what I meant was, just don't let anyone change what you think about your poetry :)

I know fifi. i keep writing and don't mind a lot about what people say. :)

Good :cool:

just i mind what my teacher said, she said me i msut read more poetry, 'cause it's a younger style and i must improve it, well i'm young so :P but she also told my "keep writing, never quit writing". :) anyways i didn't show her the best poem so.. :) i thought to tranlate the english poems into spanish and show her it. :idea2:

Good idea :cool:

yeah, last year i show my french teacher a some poems she like them, anyways she's married with a nephew of a spanish writer (Miguel Hernandez), that's so cool. :) and some teachers knows that i write but i never show them any poem.. i'm too shy :embarrased:

Miguel Hernandez sounds really familiar..... :thinking:

he is a poet. i didn't study him a lot at high, well as good as i wanted but i know about him, i saw a film about him on tv. his dad didn't allowed him to study, they lived in a town and he had to care the sheeps they have, so he spent most of the time reading books that a friend give him, and writing poetry so he use to don't know where some sheeps are... so his dad argued with him and stuff... i think he end on jail on the dictature or ended killed on the war... i don't remember well how he ends, but wasn't a good ending :cry:

Too many questions

what to do when your head

is so crazy cause loads of ideas?

questions, ideas, theories

ones so different to others

 

then sit down and listen

your heart, oh friend

decitions come from soul

actions come from brain

 

you guess you'll be wrong

why darling, why sweet friend?

you want to think positive

but you can't now, why?

 

your experience teached you

that's the main think now

you are sure you'll be wrong again

oh love don't think it anymore

 

you went to any beach

and throw on the water

all your memories

letters, photos and sounds

 

this is a new present today

live it with no troubles

you're a new person

you just born again

 

why help you to broke the bubble?

just a friend you don't remember

just a moment that you remember

 

Love is in the corner

lucky is on your side now

oh babe be sure you'll get it

 

stand in front his eyes

both looks so sweet to other

decitions come from soul

actions come from mind

 

you are stopped yet

thinking what to do

what to say now

oh babe didn't you rebith?

 

oh try a new way today

won't sit and wait for tomorrow

cause life is today

you make your life very second

 

oh babe don't sit and wait

water don't come to the prey

you must built it

or the drops will go to sea again

 

oh those rivers of sad

that you cried so long

are past now dear

 

think about it waiting

won't help you anymore

won't change your life

take yourself and go out

 

meet him today

or leave him forever

it'll hurt you deeper everyday

just tell him though your sight.

 

that's love dear, that's

the thing that make beats the life

only it can't be explained

you only both can understand your language

 

those are the words of love

the ones that never are listened

just two can know it

just to soulmates can know it

 

no more days you'll can wait

no longer you'll still crying

life it's only how we want it'll be

things are on your side always

 

just be brave to recognize it

to let him know today

how you felt all this time

no matter what'll happen tomorrow

 

life is with you today

his eyes looks at yours

and time is stopped

just say him a word.

 

Those word just can be listen

by your soul in love

this shine it's only 'cause it

nothing will be dark no more

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

(Sunday 13/03/05)

I like it! :)

I like it! :)

thanks a lot fifi, sis :kiss:

 

i show a friend a poem in spanish, called ·esperando verte" and she like it a lot. :) she said me i'm so talented. :)

then we ended talking about form a band (i'll be songwriter on it, and she the singer), we both an another friend, that i told about this idea weeks later, so i hope we'll talk about it this weekend. so cool isn't it? :)

It really is! I hope it all goes well :P

thanks a lot, i hope all this works. :cool:

bump for beita :D

thanks a lot bro :kiss: may be i'll post a poem here... i wrote one in spanish days ago. :)

Do poems translate properly when done in english?

 

I mean, rhyming scheme wouldnt work, but would anything work?

i know that, that's why i'm afraid to tranlate them :/

Well Im sure they're great, if you could write another english one it would be schweeet.

 

I still havent written (Since the last one I gave you ari) so I just need to keep doing that.

oh well the last one i wrote was in spanish... :/ ... i prefer translate them by myself...i think it'll keep more their meaning... :)

 

oh well reilly i know there are times when you write more and times when you write less. :/ i had this times too. :)

Yeah, only I have times where I write NOTHING at all, oh well.

aww i'm sure that if you keep writing then you'll have times when you'll write a lot more than you used. :) that's what i did, i keep writing since i was 10 years old more often than years before, so i use to have times when i wrote more since i'm 14 years old. :) (onces i write poetry, others i write short stories..) and i also have times when i don't write (during months) :/

A song by Ian Brown .... unsure if I sent u before u can give it to sun ! have u heard it yet

 

Que quieres

Que quieres

Cuando el mundo es tan grande y tan pequeno al mismo tiempo

Que quieres

Que quieres

Cuando El mundo Es tan Grande y tan pequeno al mismo tiempo

Que puedo hacer por ti que tienes todo

Solo te puedo amar

Solo te puedo amar

Cuando los dias hayan pasado

Y la noche ha empezado

Y las estrellas empiezan a caer del cielo

Solo te puedo amar

Y El soy y la lluvia se juntan para crear El arcoiris

Solo te puedo amar

A song by Ian Brown .... unsure if I sent u before u can give it to sun ! have u heard it yet

 

Que quieres

Que quieres

Cuando el mundo es tan grande y tan pequeno al mismo tiempo

Que quieres

Que quieres

Cuando El mundo Es tan Grande y tan pequeno al mismo tiempo

Que puedo hacer por ti que tienes todo

Solo te puedo amar

Solo te puedo amar

Cuando los dias hayan pasado

Y la noche ha empezado

Y las estrellas empiezan a caer del cielo

Solo te puedo amar

Y El soy y la lluvia se juntan para crear El arcoiris

Solo te puedo amar