Sorry for this Beita, but i think you deserve a new thread dedicated to your poems. And dont worry coz i'll keep bumping this :P

:blush: oh bro, thanks a lot. :kiss: :kiss:

*hugs*

it´s great 'cause i get the idea about others 5 more news (i must write them complete yet) :embarrased:

thanks a lot REN. :kiss:

Spiders

They are hidden in every corner

they could come from up to down

they can climb from down to up

 

They have too many feets

they have too many eyes

they are looking at you everyday

 

They spun their webs in everywhere

They hide at the top of it

and wait you stuck there.

 

They go down and see you around

They open their mouths

They´ll eat you alone.

 

Even if you try to espace

Never you´ll can, they are clever

They open their mouth and divide you

 

They are liars, they are hide.

They are in every place

even if you don´t see them

 

they are there at the top of your head

they are waiting you fall in their web

they just come and divide you in two.

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

(20/01/05 Thursday)

 

:)

awww what a great idea Ren!!! :blush:

 

 

el es tan especial, no?? :wink3: enjoy it Ari.. sorry I didnt get back to your pm before.. I had to run out of the office! :kiss:

awww what a great idea Ren!!! :blush:

 

 

el es tan especial, no?? :wink3: enjoy it Ari.. sorry I didnt get back to your pm before.. I had to run out of the office! :kiss:

Yes he is so especial :kiss:

No problem camile, sis. ;)

:blush:

:thumbsup: thanks a lot about what you did. (i think i didn´t tell you this yet :embarrased: )

poetry is kewl :cool:

poetry is kewl :cool:

thanx. ;)

:stunned: good poem! :)

You girls are making me blush :blush:

 

Ahh new poem! luv it! :D

Sorry for this Beita' date=' but i think you deserve a new thread dedicated to your poems. And dont worry coz i'll keep bumping this :P[/quote']

Mee too. :)

:stunned: good poem! :)

:blush: thanks a lot sis Eva :kiss:

You girls are making me blush :blush:

 

Ahh new poem! luv it! :D

:blush: thanks a lot Ren, bro :kiss:

Sorry for this Beita' date=' but i think you deserve a new thread dedicated to your poems. And dont worry coz i'll keep bumping this :P[/quote']

Mee too. :)

:blush: :kiss: thanks a lot Daryl, bro.

*bump* :D

Oh yes! New thread :cool:

Ari is so fantabulously poetic :D :cool:

Oh yes! New thread :cool:

Ari is so fantabulously poetic :D :cool:

:blush: thanks a lot fifi :kiss:

hello ari can I send one of your peoms to a frined... :)

hope u ok any sis ! pleased to see ya !

A Leaf on the forest

Come on friend sit next the tree

it shadow will care you.

Come on friend don´t you cry

the wind will tell you.

What you realy need

is sit and see the leafs falling

 

You really feel as a leaf

you are only a leaf on the forest

ants pass over you, walking

rain pour on you, heavy

no one cares, friend.

 

Look around baby

there´re loads of leafs

Somo little pets are cold

they try to warm on the leafs

 

Oh but all still the same

you feels lonely

like a drop on the desert

it falls and ends in the sand

sometimes if make good

it make grown the flowers

others is just a drop.

 

You really feel as a leaf

you are only a leaf on the forest

ants pass over you, walking

rain pour on you, heavy

no one cares, friend.

 

Like a fish on the water

in the bigger ocean

there´s no one to talk with

and the sea is dangerous

no one could advice you

how to be safe

 

you are hide on your cave

just waiting the storm pass over

you´re waiting for the rainbow

you know it always come back

but this time its so later

 

You really feel as a leaf

you are only a leaf on the forest

ants pass over you, walking

rain pour on you, heavy

no one cares, friend.

 

the light won´t come again

flowers don´t find any water

leafs stopped falling since so long

pets are getting freezing

and no one can change it

 

only wind can change a thing

it make that leafs change their places

they can fly trought countries

they can stop on a river

they can go to a city

they can meet others friends

 

You really feel as a leaf

you are only a leaf on the forest

ants pass over you, walking

rain pour on you, heavy

no one cares, friend.

 

only if you allow the wind

if you want the wind come next to you

it´ll come trought the windows

you can´t stop it with a door

it´ll come and change you world

if yo are ready, catch it

and won´t let it go.

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

(22/01/05 Saturday)

That poem is so sweet :cry:

:)

That poem is so sweet :cry:

:blush: thanks a lot Ren :kiss: :cry:

How be you Beita? :kiss:

hello ari can I send one of your peoms to a frined... :)

hope u ok any sis ! pleased to see ya !

Yes you can, but i´ll be glad if you mention the author (ariadna squire) (it´s a pen name=pseudonim) :rolleyes:i know i won´t be famous hehe, but... anyways i´m curious about which poem you´ll send. :)

I´m doing good, well i reckon that the poem is a bit sad, but the end make we have hopes, and remember we always must still have hopes even when we see all dark, awlays a light can come and change the things.

;)