Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 21, 2005 Share Posted February 21, 2005 Sorry this one is in spanish.. :/ Esperando verte Hoy te volví a ver y quise disfrutar ese momento toda una eternidad; pasé cerca de tí y no creo que lo intuyeras. Ví de nuevo tu cabellera ese oro que te ilumina; caminé lenta en tu busca y ante tu mirar volví a rendirlo todo ante ese cielo que albergas. Pero pronto, caí del cielo y me hundí en el suelo; es un quiero y no puedo Un habitáculo me separa de tí aunque te viera frente a mí nada puedo decir. Conservé ese momento que me alzó a la gloria; seguí mi camino esperando verte de nuevo. Ariadna Squire Damique (24/05/04) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reilly Posted February 21, 2005 Share Posted February 21, 2005 Growing When it begins you were so small you were so thin, so sweet then you cried days and nights you cried 'cause pain but you saw smiling faces some hands you didn't recognice yet were protecting you all the day they are warm, they are sweet as they say you are to them the sky was blue, the wind didn't hurt you the stones were moved from your way the walk was easier at it was later then you felt those hand weren't that big those eyes looked at you too much you felt inside a jail you felt overprotected and you don't matter 'cause that most of the time you enjoy that but others you wanted to be free you argued with them no matter why sometimes your heart felt hurts sometimes you didn't care no more those were words you felt more than others and you fix the problem... oh friend don't care 'cause those hands they'll be always warm at you they make you heart be cool don't care you won't see those eyes sad they refuse to be huged when they are sad but your eyes tells them more than a hug you are their reason to live for won't stop to be friends never even if you feel you hurt them they'll be glad to meet you again even if you feel they protect you too much even if you feel their hand not that warm and their hands will be hurt you'll cure their hearts, just meeting them even when you see a sad tear from them they'll be glad that you care them everyday don't worry my friend, those hands always will care for you, be warm to you those eyes will be glad to see you and no matter that one day you realize that those friends that always was there and care for you so much, friend no matter if you realize they are your parents. They'll help on your decisions they'll advice you when you don't as them they'll wait for you to come back they'll forgive you all your troubles. so don't worry to grow up, darling those eyes and hands will be warm they'll realize you are being older they'll help you as best they could. Ariadna Squire Damique (19/02/05 Saturday) I felt like I could relate to every line of that poem, in a sentimental kinda way around my bday. Good poem ari. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 21, 2005 Share Posted February 21, 2005 :blush: thanks a lot Reilly :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reilly Posted February 21, 2005 Share Posted February 21, 2005 No problemo! I used to write actually, about childhood mainly. If I dig one up I'll send it your way Ari ;) Cuz I got to see yours. But mines a LOT shorter and a LOT worse, haha. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 21, 2005 Share Posted February 21, 2005 really mines are good ones? :blush: thanks a lot reily. :) ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 27, 2005 Share Posted February 27, 2005 Chances That will be my last chance to you I won't go on with this feeling, love I won't wait for you to see me a word I won't sit and wait day and night That's the last chance i give to you please don't hide your feeling more oh love you're able to tell me your feel to look at my eyes and give me your soul I'm waiting from you to gave me a sign I won't be the nun that wait for her Don Juan I won't wait a day more, love tell me your soul I won't allow that you'll hide on your corner Those feelings are making me strange I can't stop my eyes crying for your love If you are in my imagination, and i figured all please go forever and don't come back again Don't look at my eyes and say no word I must crowl against the sea to you I will fight all the monsters that wan't end that My heart guides me now, i lose my mind And that's just for you dear I know what you feel from your shy signs your eyes can't stop shinning when i'm round you but you still are mute near me, just looking me. Oh dear i can't guess all your heart wants I want know you better love but i need you help me just once That's the last chance from me to you I won't be waiting you day and night I won't choose between you and my life I'll give you just a day more, to decide Please dear love, show me your feelings. Ariadna Squire Damique (27/02/05 Sunday) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted February 28, 2005 Share Posted February 28, 2005 :embarrased: That was so sad :embarrased: I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 28, 2005 Share Posted February 28, 2005 I know it's different as other but... :embarrased: thanks a lot fifi :blush: :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*Ali* Posted February 28, 2005 Share Posted February 28, 2005 Esperando verte Hoy te volví a ver y quise disfrutar ese momento toda una eternidad; pasé cerca de tí y no creo que lo intuyeras. Ví de nuevo tu cabellera ese oro que te ilumina; caminé lenta en tu busca y ante tu mirar volví a rendirlo todo ante ese cielo que albergas. Pero pronto, caí del cielo y me hundí en el suelo; es un quiero y no puedo Un habitáculo me separa de tí aunque te viera frente a mí nada puedo decir. Conservé ese momento que me alzó a la gloria; seguí mi camino esperando verte de nuevo. Ariadna Squire Damique (24/05/04) aw that's beautiful ari! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 28, 2005 Share Posted February 28, 2005 :blush: thanks a lot ali :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 A sad moment I'm sorry if i did anything wrong i hope we can still fix it If i can do anything to change it just let me know no matter when, where or how i'll sit here and wait for it wait for a letter from you even if it never comes I won't move from here until you said me what was wrong i can't do any more I can't go and party my head is too sad now i can't go and walk ahead the streets i'm to sensitive tonight I can't do any until i meet you i'll be wait for an answer even is cold and dark I won't worry for any more Just i want to explain to you what happened with that don't take it wrongly friend i didn't want to hurt you today i didn't want you said you'll go i felt we were friends that's why i'm so sad now i can't think about any more so i'll sit and wait to talk about it to you i hope we can fix it i won't let you'll go that was my fault no one have to pay for it just me and my mind i'll leave it if you want just 'cause you are my friend and i didn't want to hurt you i can't think about anymore tonight i can't go to party till i talk to you Ariadna Squire Damique (Tuesday 01/03/05) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
About A Girl Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 why havent you published these yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 From the darkness Here i am, me and my loneliness don't cry for me today Just sit and listen if you want Just go out and close the door Don't look back for me i don't want you lose your chance Don't worry about me I'll be here hide in the darkness Lights don't shine today I'm on a corner trying to be warm but the walls are so cold seems they are more narrow than usual My hands are hurting 'cause the frozen So i made a fire to keep warm i took some papers from a notebook I don't worry about what it's burning a tear come to the floor i can't feel i'm crying i can read your last letter just during a minute all my memory is erased now i don't have any pic of you now your are in the past, finally i can't remember you i tried to picture you being sad but i only imagine that you are laughing lying another poor girl i was a mappet for you. i finally sleep on the floor during some hours till the sun is raising it comes into the room it cares my lips as a sweet kiss the wind blows as a whisper on my neck i don't remember what happened yesterday i just see the smoke of a fire i made All my memories are there there are only ashes now your letters didn't sruvive to it your words were only jokes you left me alone one day you said no reasons you just took your clothes and go nowhere, breaking my heart i don't know if cry or be hapy i finally erase you from my memories i'm just building my new age i locked the door, and destroy the walls I'm as a butterfly now i'll remade myself just because you made me feel so bad i'll cure myself my scars i won't look back for you i won't waste a tear for you you made me cry so many days while i was in the darkness Ariadna Squire Damique (Tuesday 01/03/05) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 why havent you published these yet? Did you like them? 1. i don't know if are good to try it.... 2. i don't know about any english magazines where to publish them (any mag about literature). 3. i publish 4 in spanish at high school magazine 4. i'm waiting that eoi mag publish one or two in english... (my teacher is correting them accidentaly) 5. i know about versal books, they help you to publish but i need money so... :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
About A Girl Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 theyre tres good! if you want i could help you find the right mag :blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 i'll be glad if you can. :blush: my english teacher asked me to ·have you ever tried any competition or try to publish them?" and i answeer him the same, i don't know/think that they are good to try... :/ i show 2 to two different spanish teachers, one of them answer me and said me thet seems so made by a young :stunned: .. i use to show them not the best ones... i'm shy to show them all the poems i wrote... and i write new poems everyday... my dad try to advide me as best as he can and he also told me about publish all them...but which label (that's correct? :thinking:) to choose :stunned: ... there are loads.. and competitions but i don't know a lot about english ones so.. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
About A Girl Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 hmm well how old are you? because the younger the better...teen magazines are always looking for prose from the youth... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 i'm 18 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 4, 2005 Share Posted March 4, 2005 who to change it What to do if you are weak how to do a good thing? what to do to think positive? one day you get up and find you are alone even if you are talking with everyone? one day you can't hide from the storm you find it's over you head now and you have nowhere to be safe the snow it's on the floor you can't walk throught it you can slip on the ice what to do if you can't fight today? just hide and wait for so long just think and think and feel so down what to do if you need a hug and you are mute to ask for it? if you need feel warm but your heart is so icy what to do if you can't fint the answer? how to ask to help your soul today when yourself can't fight today you hear voices round you ´they try to warm you but you can't feel any today what to do to warm yourself to hide from the storm you find so unsafe and guilty how can help to change it just you friend, just yousfelf you make your feels so change them noone can help you if you don't want to so change your mood yourself come out your cave and cry no matter what they'll say be brave to fight against your mind today the battle has just begin you must help yourself care your own scars with your heart. Noone know you as yourslef noone can assume your feelings just yourself and your heart. Ariadna Squire Damique (friday 04/03/05) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 *BUMP!* Ok so i can finally post in this thread again, because I couldn't before...probably because of the hackers. But I just wanted to say that I really liked your last poem and it really reminded me of something I was going through last year :/ But I really enjoyed reading it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 i didn't know it sis. :o may be it's 'cause i couldn't find this thread too. :/ thanks a lot fro bump it. ;) thanks a lot, well a friend said me some days ago "hey do you only write melancholic poetry?" :/ ...well it have possitive endings at all, not? :idea2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 I think possitive poetry isn't as affective as poetry which is melancholy And yes they do have possitive endings. Anyway I think they're great! Don't listen to your friend! :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 well anyways my friends use to read only love poetry with all cool and this stuff "locus amoenus".. well that's always the same i think, those are cool but isn't cool read only this 'cause life isn't always cool. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 anyways i write about what i feel or think so i don't worry if most of them are melancholic or not, just write helps me to feel better. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 Well it should just benefit you and that should be the only reason you write, not for anyone else :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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