The Escapist Posted June 15, 2009 Share Posted June 15, 2009 thankyou. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted June 15, 2009 Share Posted June 15, 2009 Ari I can't wait! the other parts are loaded here and here. i hope you enjoy them and give me your opinion :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 Well well, today i woke up pretty early, just had a coffee, revised for the exam, and wow in 30 minutes i wrote 4 poems (and had to stop for the 5th one), after so long time. I'll post each one on a different post, and in the order those came. Let the shine come in Let the fire glow Let the sun rise Leave the dark pit Break the old cave* Free yourself from the chains Let yourself to see again Rise your hands up and talk Free your mind and walk Come on in, let it shine Leave the slaving past behind Broken memories that get you stuck Worries that rise carving in your soul Impressions that make you stop and drop the path is not easy but is yours Come on in, let it shine again Lost in a forest you've been Looking for yourself in a mirror maze Seeing your different faces, left you dizzy Break the chains that slaved you Get out of the dark, wake up and fight Your destiny is about to come, the bright you need See the fire burn, see the blossoms grow Wasted and renewed, everything change but you You keep stuck, stopping yourself from your gift Forget your mistakes, dark memories that come in Lay your faith in it, Keep the hopes you have Everything will be fine, keep trusting yourself Mistakes vanish as a dune sand traces we leave, that disappear behind us don't doubt it, don't fear it, and let the fire glow let the feeling grow, like the water flows let the bright guide you, like the lighthouse in the harbour let the hopes be your bright, let your will build your future come on in, don't fear it, just let the shadows go open yourself to the world, let them know you more don't mind what they may say, just let the season hold you Ice is cold but it can burn, flowers cure but can harm too don't fear it at all, just enjoy the ride, just let the shine guide you Ariadna Squire Damique (25/06/2009) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahlem Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 no alarms and no surprises Bea your poem are always great and amazing we just appreciate them a lot you already have lots of fan here :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 Everybody Who are we, Where are we? Everybody hurts, someone said was him right?, was him wrong? I don't care, i just live life Everybody cry, everybody smile Is it good, is it bad? I don't mind, I just walk my way Should i deny them, do I join them? Noone can hurt most than you do noone can change you but your own will you are the one that decides, wrong or right. nothing is grey at all, nothing is as colourful everybody guides you, everybody mind you who have the last word, whose are their advices? take it right, just to mend it when it is bend keep walking on your way, go back just to next step never doubt of yourself, never trap on your back everybody tell you what is on their mind you are opposite, you speak from your heart everybody hurts, someon said, was he right? don't let the doubts stop you from decide come on, keep on going, keep digging in we all cry, you are not alone not all us can do it all, as you do gifted you are, but you feel left aside noone understands you, you may think noone is around you, you believe at times we all need our space, just time can cure you don't dig in your wound, let them heal wait a minute before you jump that bridge are you ready for what is to come? at times is not to understand it all but we all feel the same everybody lies, everybody prays everybody cry, everybody smile as much as we breath, but some may deny brave you are to show yourself, clear slave they are from hidding their truth, trapped you can be the day and night, the noon and eve you decide what it is, right or wrong, everybody hurts, everyone heals. Ariadna Squire Damique (25/06/2009) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 Ok originally that was one poem, but as is pretty long i cut it in two. :p Daydream My mind slips from myself I let myself rest, while i dream when i have you in my arms when we are just one heart that beats rhythm we choose, life we write, together take me to an island, we all alone let it all mix, mind, heart and soul, be one my deep wish is it, i want we daydream forever A season of changes comes, time of chances is catch the train we've wanted for, let it take us home let the flowers caress your soul, mellow to heal, to forgive i dream when i am awake, sweet it makes me feel i let my mind escape, in a different life i live i let myself hurt, just to follow you, to let us be together dark storms i'll cross, just waiting for the sky to shine up me i let myself be divided, i don't care, it'll heal my body mind, soul, heart, body, separated and together, i fly up to you just hold me in your arms, the only form to save us, to be one is it too soon to say it aloud? is it time to say it all? words i wait to listen, coming from you, open yourself to me i daydream, i fix myself, i escape from the maze keep me wonder, make me good and save me, amaze me i don't care what they will say, which bridges we'll cross i don't mind how deep it'll get, i just want it be with you pieces that fix themselves, the past is over i'm a puzzle completed, dozen sides i have but i don't hide in the back, you gave me hope i don't hurt myself, now i am complete, we together lay, i want to lay in the grass with you watch the clouds move, let myself fly up walk in the woods, just us together, forever dreaming the earth can tremble, i don't mind, i escape to an island i am not selfish, i am not mean, not doubful i just keep fighting, to make it work, to let the time work hold me in your arms, that's our destiny, i am sure of it the only thing i need, make it real, sweet it will be, daydream. Ariadna Squire Damique (25/06/2009) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahlem Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 ohh the second last one you've post remind me of a song by Keane i think my fave on these is the first one but the third is also great where's the very long one :wacky: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 Elements Mirage, Sand, Castles, Plans do i go too fast, do we be fine? Open ourselves to be one Wish, Hope, Fear, Will, mixing itself As we are, as we want to be Mind, Soul, Heart, Body, it vanishes and creates time of changes it is, death and life rotten flowers, fruits that come i let myself fly, i surf in the sky i don't care them, i don't hear them i just mind to be myself get in me, come on, rip me now carve in my heart again warm my cold fears, fix me recreate me, reload me daydream, sweet wishes bitter is back, so far now i let you again, missed you for so long i was waiting come, fill me, take me far away on an island, we together i don't care what say dig, dig in, like the ink on a paper we live, forever i feel myself fly, free how i missed you, let me down how i need you, to mend me colours come on, lighting it all i built you up, take you in a castle where we live, memories lifes i've painted, you were my hand i just let it flow, as the blood runs all the grey goes, just light no worries i have, hold me your words heal me, stay beautiful secrects and truth, no daydream Ariadna Squire Damique (25/06/2009) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 ohh the second last one you've post remind me of a song by Keane i think my fave on these is the first one but the third is also great where's the very long one :wacky: thanks for your comments :) glad that you enjoy them. The very long one, is that: i cut daydream in two part, so suppousely Daydream and elements are one. ;) But i have so far the title for the 5th one, not completed it yet: Space Shaman. :uhoh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted August 4, 2009 Share Posted August 4, 2009 Elements Mirage, Sand, Castles, Plans do i go too fast, do we be fine? Open ourselves to be one Wish, Hope, Fear, Will, mixing itself As we are, as we want to be Mind, Soul, Heart, Body, it vanishes and creates time of changes it is, death and life rotten flowers, fruits that come i let myself fly, i surf in the sky i don't care them, i don't hear them i just mind to be myself get in me, come on, rip me now carve in my heart again warm my cold fears, fix me recreate me, reload me daydream, sweet wishes bitter is back, so far now i let you again, missed you for so long i was waiting come, fill me, take me far away on an island, we together i don't care what say dig, dig in, like the ink on a paper we live, forever i feel myself fly, free how i missed you, let me down how i need you, to mend me colours come on, lighting it all i built you up, take you in a castle where we live, memories lifes i've painted, you were my hand i just let it flow, as the blood runs all the grey goes, just light no worries i have, hold me your words heal me, stay beautiful secrects and truth, no daydream Ariadna Squire Damique (25/06/2009) there are a few things in this poem which I really like... this is very consistent with the flow, the comparisons of another, like "elements" that make part of a whole individual or a whole relationship to someone.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 18, 2009 Share Posted October 18, 2009 Those luckies like you Can't show me right or wrong I've been here too long Can't know how i am Yet i've seen them, many times Fake smile and empty words vowels are just sounds just a rhythm to confuse i know you are void crashing asteroids damaging my planet space invaders which try to conquer me but i'm not like you those lucky people think life is so easy but sky is not as you think i've learnt it so soon roses do have have thorns as our paths have stones it can break you down but you won't get it on me i'm not like those like you i've grown my way cried for long, when i should smile things i got steal and won't get back thought me how hard life is yet i fight, i keep on just to let you know i'm not like you you'll never be like me you won't understand me our ways are so different i don't regret a thing which make me be myself i don't wish you any best as with your fake you are joyful i just wonder if you notice how plastic you are, just following the flow while i lead my own ocean nothing can compare us no reason will bring us together and i don't care anymore those lucky people, keep your way (Ariadna Squire Damique 18-10-2009 Sunday) ---- Not the best one, but first one since months. Time to take things back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms Magpie Posted October 18, 2009 Share Posted October 18, 2009 I like it a lot. :) Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 22, 2009 Share Posted October 22, 2009 thanks a lot nina. :nice: i miss writing poems as i used to... :\ (i wonder why i stopped writing them :uhoh: ) i've collected all the poems posted (which so far makes +50 poems or may be even +70), i'll put them all on a pdf and upload it on my site soon :) surely i'll upload there too the lyrics i wrote this summer (+20), not sure yet. currently i'm working again on another story projects i had started some time ago. (making the links with ones and others is not as easy as i thought, but is so greatful to do as currently stories are about musicians :D ) i've been suggested to do a play i wrote time ago, we'll see how it ends, i have to show the play script to the group and so yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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