ColdMike Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 Really nice poems, ppl, especially Miro and Janhaw. Here's my last one. It's about my future... hazy, unsure future. It's called Gambled Life Staring at this wheel, turning, I know, now, I can't do anything. I gambled my life, there, I still see the small ball, Jumping on the numbers And I wonder where it's gonna fall. Asking my disordered thoughts, For knowning against what I fought, I found out I was my own enemy, I should have been ready, Ready to bleed, ready to sacrifice, Ready to be carefully cut and sliced. Pushed on the edge of the cliff, I doubt "What if I can't find The necessary bravery, what if I'm able to jump and I die?" The bottom of the abyss remains In the dark, and I'm calling again. All sounds packed, all sounds definitive, It's like I didn't have any other alternative. I want to stop the voices in my head. Will my name be written with red, That warm and flowing red ink? Will it be the last time I'll think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 i have just found an online magazine for writers in my city and i'm going to send them some writings, wish me luck. well the problem is that since a year ago i haven't written anything new... :S only short stories, but not poetry, i'm a bt worried about that. good poem coldmike. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 Good luck :wink: Oh, and to Mike: really really nice poem...a bit sad, but just fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted February 3, 2007 Author Share Posted February 3, 2007 pleasant show she poses they pose nude roses that sway through this field I'm taking pleasure the whithered ones they go the same as the younger ones the difference is only after a while they fall off the stem dying in the middle of this party then the wind picks up and in heat open the sun, they worship no one would dare interrupt this conversation so intimate unles they were young too young to realize that it's wrong to step on one of these bare, red, scorched, brainless, shameless dancers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redundancy Posted February 3, 2007 Share Posted February 3, 2007 my one and only ever written poem :smug: PIZZA ROYAL Pizza oh Pizza, my sweet Pizza, how you are so soft and crunchy, every time we meet i feel so munchy, at night i dream of you sliding down my throat, and after you a dessert, little goat, why oh why does it not rain you every day, so i can throw my umbrella away, you are by far the best invention of the century, thats why i write for you this poetry, i wish the planet was one giant Pizza, so i could eat till the end of the world! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
janhaw Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 Mike and Will (hehe), nice. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 thinker, honestly I think your pictures are better than your poems, sorry. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redundancy Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 :whatever: I like it thinker ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 Dude what the fuck is wrong with you. You seriously annoy me. Is it my bad for being honest? Or don't I have the right to mention my opinion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redundancy Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 did i say anything? why are you always looking for a fight? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 I don't. I really don't. I just thought that you had a problem with my opinion, I can't always lie and I rather be honest! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted February 5, 2007 Author Share Posted February 5, 2007 rather be honest than pretend to like something you don't. I wish more people, including myself were bold enough to say they don't like poems, but also to add why, because just saying "it's bad" isn't nearly as helpful. I respect that you're not a wimp. (though I don't see any reason to get offended at will, but that's not my business, well none of this is :curtain:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 Well, it's true what you said and well now I have to give my reason why ; they don't make sense. Done. And yes, I'm not a wimp and I rather be hated for being honest and maybe a bit too honest than loved for saying omg I like that while I don't. :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted February 9, 2007 Share Posted February 9, 2007 ^please no fight here. My last poem... I wrote it on month ago... thought it wasn't over, but I think there's nothing more to add. Called Empty Sea I wish I had an identity, I feel like an empty sea, Looking for who I should be Nothing could be more disturbing. And again, the darkness are back They feel that huge lack, Turning the colors into black I wish there was a light spark. In the big mess of my thoughts, I'm the one who has been caught Caught by that voice, I feel like having no choice. Questioning my future, Rumbling all about what I was sure I wish my words and my thoughts were safe I wish I could feel that state, being safe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted February 9, 2007 Share Posted February 9, 2007 I like it, Mike... Althoug sad... Anyways...here's a new poem...if you don't get it, I made my point lol DON'T BELIEVE ME Nothing. Just a wink. Just a black colour on your eyelid. Just a purple sky above my dreams. Just a few people that drive me crazy And just a mellow song that will make you cry Absolutely nothing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted February 9, 2007 Share Posted February 9, 2007 ^ a nice one, Miro, really:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted February 10, 2007 Share Posted February 10, 2007 This is for a special someone. SHINING TEARS You do know The Sun is shining just for you The Lightning is playing on the sky only for you The Rain is falling cause of you Everbody is dreaming just so you could smile Just for your smile, Love The Paper is blank only for you The Word is slow just for you The Tear tastes lovely, for you And I am here for you You do know that. Don't you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
janhaw Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 Miro, i like your poetry. Really. *Stvarno je dobro, samo nastavi tako. Mogao bi otvoriti blog, znaš. :sneaky: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 I really loved that poem of yours Miro! :) Guess I ought to write again. I'll Hear You You're on the other side of the window I can't hear the song you sing Whatever you do, please don't leave me Whatever you do, don't go Bet the song's a perfect melody Whatever music you bring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 Miro, i like your poetry. Really. *Stvarno je dobro, samo nastavi tako. Mogao bi otvoriti blog, znaš. :sneaky: :blush: Blog? Neeeee... Mozda zvuci jeftino, ali pisem knjigu (proza) vec duuugo...i planiram to izdati jednog dana. Vjerojatno fakuteltskog :D A pjesme... Uglavnom, hvala :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 I really loved that poem of yours Miro! :) Guess I ought to write again. I'll Hear You You're on the other side of the window I can't hear the song you sing Whatever you do, please don't leave me Whatever you do, don't go Bet the song's a perfect melody Whatever music you bring :nice: Just one q... For whom was it written, if for anyone? :wacko: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 Miro, I love your poem, it's absolutely beautiful. Elsje, I love it too, and I know who she's talking about. You know I wish you the best about this, my twin:) Here's a new one... Quite... I'd say not really poetic... but I needed to write this It's about the accident I had yesterday... It's called Rainy day Spending time together, Enjoying the rain, Feeling we're still the same I'm happy you're here. But we're suddenly floating, Out of control, you scream, Curves, right, left, right. Having no other option, We finally strike Hitting the iron protection, We hear the twisted steel, The screaming wheel. Scared, I closed my eyes, Watching the movie of my life, Playing slowly, silently, I felt like it was the end, You both'd have been The last persons I could see. I could feel the death again. All slowly and carefully stopped, Our lost sights crossed, And I saw your tears, I couldn't even realize your fear. I thought it was a dream, I thought it wasn't real. This rainy day, I saw the death, I looked at it, straight Straight in the eyes, It was ready to take my life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 :nice: Just one q... For whom was it written, if for anyone? :wacko: Your guess is as good as mine. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 Miro, I love your poem, it's absolutely beautiful. Elsje, I love it too, and I know who she's talking about. You know I wish you the best about this, my twin:) Here's a new one... Quite... I'd say not really poetic... but I needed to write this It's about the accident I had yesterday... It's called Rainy day Spending time together, Enjoying the rain, Feeling we're still the same I'm happy you're here. But we're suddenly floating, Out of control, you scream, Curves, right, left, right. Having no other option, We finally strike Hitting the iron protection, We hear the twisted steel, The screaming wheel. Scared, I closed my eyes, Watching the movie of my life, Playing slowly, silently, I felt like it was the end, You both'd have been The last persons I could see. I could feel the death again. All slowly and carefully stopped, Our lost sights crossed, And I saw your tears, I couldn't even realize your fear. I thought it was a dream, I thought it wasn't real. This rainy day, I saw the death, I looked at it, straight Straight in the eyes, It was ready to take my life. :wideeyed: (speechless) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted February 13, 2007 Author Share Posted February 13, 2007 how it never felt next to a normal girl with brown hair too long her head sitting on my chest proving me right proving what lasts forever and what doesn't it hurts, like maybe I wasn't the person who needed to know she said, "thanks" so, did she like me or am I just the same person with no one's hair in my dry hands Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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