chuck kottke Posted June 27, 2008 Share Posted June 27, 2008 Hmm.. that's pretty, and soulful. Lots of meaning pack in a few words - well done Rachel! ;) Here's one - For the Rough. In a world of never-ending civilizing.. shaving away, paving away, and straitening the meandering "For Safety's Sake" they say. never bank what can be flattened; never bank on depth in a shallow pond. All the Earth's gems lost treasures & adventures once in the rough now cut, polished; set but what is removed is twice the gem that cuts could ever do. Amend. "They wouldn't know a Diamond if they held it in their hands" The things that are precious we really can understand. Time traveled slowly is time stewed and savored Places seen in context show their beauty; a gem in the rough clings to the stone, and feels for the wind and the rain; the Indian grass waves and the blazing star calls under the noon-day sun. Blink and it's gone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss capa Posted June 27, 2008 Share Posted June 27, 2008 ^Ooh! So much truth in that poem. I especially like the line shaving away, paving away, and straitening the meandering "For Safety's Sake" they say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss capa Posted June 27, 2008 Share Posted June 27, 2008 Now, I'm up for some humourous poems; I wrote this one yesterday when I was realllly bored. I can't remeber the name of this type of poem... A plain old cat will still chase mice Yet deteste the taste of pinapple rice Strange I know but I couldn't resist And yes, pinapple rice does exist Although it doesn't taste too nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elyria Posted June 27, 2008 Share Posted June 27, 2008 An Italian sonnet...enjoy :) ~Crimson (sonnet no. 2)~ I stare into this field of sea-green trees Dive in eclectic dream Aquarian fit While in chaotic crimson soul doth sit this fevered mind I know shall never cease In drowning ever slowly love of thee Perpetual your name it scarlet drifts Not even angels' starlit dreams heart lifts With pinioned wings I never shall be free Thine eyes have purple turned and truth be known Lost ever is mine heart within blind sight Yet dreaming soul of lovers is thine own And showers me in Heaven's roses white And though through yours my solemn spirit's grown I'll suffocate no more in torture's delight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elyria Posted June 28, 2008 Share Posted June 28, 2008 Echo... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pseudonym Posted June 28, 2008 Share Posted June 28, 2008 One man had a lock One had a key One burned a forest One planted a tree One woman had brains Another had body One had the money One had a family If all these people come together If they all forget their differences They can help the world in a way That no one else has ever said Was even possible Or even right But together these people hand in hand Can give a trapped child just one more night Fin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elyria Posted June 28, 2008 Share Posted June 28, 2008 sweet. :dozey: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elyria Posted June 30, 2008 Share Posted June 30, 2008 And the sky screamed down/up at me... When I screamed back in quiz... It merely laughed for who...who am I... to question why? I am but of this life no reason why... Yet...yes, as sure as the sands will bring the morrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pseudonym Posted June 30, 2008 Share Posted June 30, 2008 I just wrote this, let me know what you think: Verse 1 No we don’t always see eye to eye We don’t all get along This world is far from perfect That’s the song I’d always sung But when you meet me on hill Or when I see you in a field I know there’s nothing We can’t do If we all just stand together now We can love this all somehow This time we have is way too short So let’s not waste it Chorus Cause life’s what you make it So let’s not waste it And life is for living So let’s live it good Verse 2 We have to stop this fight And make it through another night Why should we hate our brothers? Why should we fear our friends? And why is this life so hard? With no one around thus far And if we all stop and think We can all see the light Chorus Cause life’s what you make it So let’s not waste it And life is for living So let’s live it good Yeah life’s what you make it So let’s not waste it Oh life is for living So let’s live it good Bridge Oh we’ve all seen hate We’ve all seen war All these mistakes We’ve been there before But you cannot give up Cannot confide We have to make it We have to decide That these times are precious They’ll never return And stopping this fight Is all that I yearn Chorus Cause life’s what you make it So let’s not waste it And life is for living So let’s live it good Ohhh life’s what you make it So let’s not waste it Yeah life is for living So let’s live it good Yeah let’s live it good Oh let’s live it good Let’s live it good... (Its a song as you can see) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elyria Posted June 30, 2008 Share Posted June 30, 2008 Kudos!! Me likes :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted July 3, 2008 Share Posted July 3, 2008 Now, I'm up for some humourous poems; I wrote this one yesterday when I was realllly bored. I can't remeber the name of this type of poem... A plain old cat will still chase mice Yet deteste the taste of pinapple rice Strange I know but I couldn't resist And yes, pinapple rice does exist Although it doesn't taste too nice And you have obviously never had Polynesian Chicken with rice!:P (lots of pineapple, and it's goood!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted July 3, 2008 Share Posted July 3, 2008 And the sky screamed down/up at me... When I screamed back in quiz... It merely laughed for who...who am I... to question why? I am but of this life no reason why... Yet...yes, as sure as the sands will bring the morrow Thought provoking! Truth often can be harsh, making us seem insignificant at times.. But even the sand does move us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elyria Posted July 3, 2008 Share Posted July 3, 2008 Ah yes...and who do you suppose inspired this, but Poe himself?? Beauty. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss capa Posted July 9, 2008 Share Posted July 9, 2008 This life is simple All we do is breathe All we do is live Still we worry about tomorrow Our hearts are not broken Because we do not know love Because we sprint instead of walking Still we write poems of sadness No idea what to call this one...hmmm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted July 10, 2008 Share Posted July 10, 2008 My fav thread! ^^ My latest poem about my breakup. ''Broken Locket'' Found you in a river Brought by the Great Lake You were the one who controlled my shiver And decided to walk along every road I take I dried you up and kept you in my hands Let my warmth testify Felt like you were the one who truly understands But in the end you had to greet me with goodbye Fell into the water, may the ocean row me away No, I don't need your bridge nor need you to swim across Cos love has its pros and cons, may this be the price I'll have to pay And this'll be YOUR LOSS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elyria Posted July 11, 2008 Share Posted July 11, 2008 ^good stuff...and to think so few people appreciate the beauty of the written word. Hm. As the window bleeds humidity the sun hides in humility... and I know the night is where I belong amid the diamond sky... the fireflies told me so. And in this chaos we call humanity dreams of sunlit days aye, even he cannot protest the night for the stars speak of eternity the moonflower herself in her nocturnal blooms... concurs. (from "Ode to a Diamond Sky") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted July 11, 2008 Share Posted July 11, 2008 ^ I really love your poem. And I so agree with ya. :nice: Keep them coming~! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
delsino Posted July 11, 2008 Share Posted July 11, 2008 Great,you all write great poem. i have tried write poem in English,but my English poems are so baaaaaaaad en......i'll post some of my poems In Chinese, i'm sorry that i can't translate them in English,and it seems as if i translate them,they'll never be called poems .....:P if you can Chinese,or you have Chinese friends,i think they can translate them 4 u..... 1. <今夜,你是否在窗前?> 今夜,你是否在窗前 望见淡红的残月? 今夜,你是否在窗前, 任呓语的清风 亲吻你的耳边? 今夜,你是否在窗前 望着天空淡红的残月, 今夜,你是枕着月光入睡 还是月色下------ 彻夜难眠? 你是想着昨日瞬息的一眼, 还是幻想明天 又如何相见? 今夜你的窗前, 是否也月光点点? 今夜,我望见那淡红的残月, 想那是你的片语只言 如清风呓语般 贴近我的耳边。 今夜,你是在窗前徘徊 还是月光下 在梦中流连? 今夜你的窗前 是否也银辉一片? 但今夜------ 也许你不在窗前 望不见这淡红的残月 紧闭着窗帘 也许你看不见这诗句, 听不懂风的语言, 今夜你的窗前, 有天空的红晕,徘徊云间, 渐渐消散,你的窗前。 而今夜,我在窗前------ 望着那淡红的残月, 听清风呓语在我耳边...... 2. <月 (moon)> 月。 清甚,淡绝。 波似海,味若雪。 阴晴成诗,明灭胜乐。 千年清辉续,万代寂寥约。 及至银丝纠结,方晓流光难却。 年年岁岁皆如此,相逢之时又残缺。 3 《致地震死难者 (to the dead in earthquake)》 寒夜颤抖的提琴, 让天空也洒泪哀泣, 但最震撼的乐音, 是你微弱的呼吸。 夜莺含血的低吟, 在玫瑰间回旋持续, 但最绝妙的诗韵, 是你起伏的心律。 我的姐妹兄弟, 你来自尘土, 又复归去, 留下昨日的思绪 今日的叹息。 清风辗转不已, 是你昨日的呼吸 如今 她已融入松林 永远 也不再远离... 我的姐妹兄弟 你来自尘土 缘何 又复归去? 山石起伏高低 是你昨日的心律 如今 她已凝入夜晚 化为 无声的夜曲... 我的姐妹兄弟 你来自尘土 又复归去 留下昨日的思绪 清风和大地... 4.<无题 (Untitled)> 正宫·塞鸿秋 无题 春时水、夏时水、秋时水。 东风吹、西风吹、北风吹。 看一回、思一回、哭一回。 回首间墙也灰、发也灰、心也灰, 碎叶满天吹,过往飞鸿追。 怎能说离无悔、死无悔、泪无悔? 5.<Untitled> this poem,in fact ,you can read from the left to right,up to down------that's happy mood you also can read from right to left,down to up-----that's sad mood just a game of words,the greatest and unique feature of Chinese Poem (en..... may be) 华光满天星灿灿, 黄昏月散却逢友。 画字送友无悲苦 , 水逐花落浮鱼游。 花谢又开新红瘦, 茶杯与友无深愁。 节此佳兮星为伴, 满溢江水绕西楼。 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
delsino Posted July 11, 2008 Share Posted July 11, 2008 don't ''kill'' me 4 i posted some poems that may confused u...... :stunned: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scribble127 Posted July 11, 2008 Share Posted July 11, 2008 [snip] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
delsino Posted July 11, 2008 Share Posted July 11, 2008 Rewind the tape and replay the mistake, Same old story... different day. good.i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 11, 2008 Share Posted July 11, 2008 great poems Rachael, Kyuu, Elyria and Scribble. :thumbsup: i don't know the names of some of you, because i've never seen you posting here until now :embarrased: delsino my browser doesn't load your poems in chinese and i dunno/know anybody that could translate them for me :\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elyria Posted July 11, 2008 Share Posted July 11, 2008 And the sun dreamed red... for brilliance has so many a name I dared not speak but listen. What did I hear?... Reverberations in the myriad that is truth and again, a soliloquy of who I am dances inside my head So whilst I try to dismantle this untangled web I seek but the simplest, to understand And meanwhile? The rest go untamed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted July 12, 2008 Share Posted July 12, 2008 TWO STARS - Winter 2005 One moment nothing, everything the next; A cosmos born from chaos in darkness. Light and shadows, energy and matter Swell my emotions before they scatter, Growing to infinity and back again Now only the memory keeps me sane. You came, you conquered and you departed We shined, then you left me broken-hearted. But our time together count not for nought; I am grateful for the colour you brought. Because you, my love, are a shooting star And when I look up, you'll never be far. For you, I shall be here and I will shine For you, although you will never be mine A toast; to before and forever more, To what could have been and will nevermore, To life and love and never forgetting, To life and love and never regretting. DEJA VU - Spring 2007 The bitter shot that fails to quench, Jealousy and lust unrequited; A familiar emotional cocktail Leaves my senses dulled and blighted. I cannot help but play your fool Because I know no other way. Rewind the tape and replay the mistake, Same old story... different day. PILLOW THOUGHTS - Autumn 2007 In my mind is where we will meet Under the stars in lucid dreams Where hope and fancy know no fear. Though I forget come morning mist And thoughts of want and need persist I know we'll meet again my dear. --- ^Addicted to rhyme. OMG. You have written the best poems I've ever read! Wish I was as good as you. :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaraEve41 Posted August 1, 2008 Share Posted August 1, 2008 My wares They are not for sale In shallow waters I stalked this Particular mollusk It’s shell ice white Diamond crusted The demon I plucked from The scarlet flesh, The ash of a Jealous plot, Turned over And over Now a Black Pearl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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