Inti Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 natures first green is gold her hardest hue to hold her early leaf's a flower but only so an hour so leaf subsides to leaf then eden sank to grief so dawn goes down to day nothing gold can stay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mycdplayerisbroke Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 roses are red violets are blue (lmao is that even right?) Lotta loves Fighters of Foo meh that was so lame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mycdplayerisbroke Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 fuck i'm such a fag i hate poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 hahaha that was good, im gonna use ur poem to impress her man :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mycdplayerisbroke Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 story of my life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 haha, dont worry i'll make sure to mention you :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pharynx Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 roses are red violets are blue (lmao is that even right?) Lotta loves Fighters of Foo :D actually the end could be " Lotta loves eric and killershoes " :idea2: okay that was really bad. i suck :smug: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 23, 2004 Share Posted October 23, 2004 hey there arent more soul poets here? :stunned: let´s go on, post here your poems shy poets, dont be shy. keep this thread alive, post here please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bart Posted October 23, 2004 Author Share Posted October 23, 2004 mah........I want to do a poem but its very personal ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 23, 2004 Share Posted October 23, 2004 ok, so you are a poet :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bart Posted October 23, 2004 Author Share Posted October 23, 2004 not really, but I do have a good way of putting my words together to make people feel better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 23, 2004 Share Posted October 23, 2004 yeah :cool: i didnt like show some personal poems but if this make people feel happier :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 23, 2004 Share Posted October 23, 2004 i was very shy about this, but not it doesnt matter a lot for me. so now i like show poems to some friends, on this forum... :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 Hey i wrote this poeam yesterday night. I needed to write and now i feel better. I´ll always remember let´s begin a new day i said myself today but i can´t get it again i can´t keep hiding this i know i must try to relax so i wake up and get ready now i go out for a walk i leave home and go far i'm on street and don´t know why i don't know where to go at home all make me sad. i leave my keays but i shouldn't go back i look the people and sky then i close my eyes and breath and i begin to walk away. i rememebr all the time i spent but something is wrong i was trying to leave you i turn my way, just against and walk in the other side i walked trought the streets and end in a field i feel myself there, im free i just lie next a walk see the sky, feel the wind feel the sea, see the birds i can cry what i want i can feel like a bird i can crowl in the sea i can fly on my mind i spent more than an hour there some people come and pass me near no one stop to talk just welcome with the hand i heard a noise and i hide next a tree spring is coming birds are loving there are a couple that come next to me and stand in front the sea then they go to beach. i remember the time we spent felt the sand trought my hands felt the waves on my skin time i feel lost now. i decide to go back home but before i leave there a letter devoted. i come back there just half a year later i feel better than ever i´m alone but free. i arrive there and i search the letter the pen is still there on the bottle i kept it. i slept there an hour the same couple is there they look at me and smile. i hear the rythm of waves i feel the wind again a leaf stop on my shoulder. i look back and see a guy with my letter he come near to me and began to speak i like a lot this lyrics i imagine you´re looking for it and i come here everyday just to give you back i´m quiet it never happend before don't worry keep it if you like i´ll devote it if you want he stop and look at me you´ve devote my soul you singed my skin you keep me breath you make me beat again the noon is falling his light eyes look at me i get up again, that was a dream? 23 October 2004, Saturday. Ariadna Squire Damique I hope you like it. (i know is so simple and a bit long) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 Ok here's mine. Sky is blue the grass is green why you need to be so mean my pain is the food that you feed and i'm in fucked up mood die bitch die bitch dieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 Sorry but is in spanish :embarrased: En la profundidad de la noche En la profundidad de la noche sientes un dolorido lamento en la oscuridad vislumbras dos manos húmedas ves el suelo, no ha llovido son lágrimas de un corazón dolido no soportaste más ese dolor y comenzaste a llorar ya los luceros no brillan ahora estás tristes y rojizos ya no ven belleza a su lado no sienten calor en sus manos su corazón ha sufrido y se siente parado trataste reanimalo, en vano trataste olvidarlo todo pero no lo lograste es un dolor tan profundo un dolor tan complejo algo inexplicable, piensas, ya no recuerdas que antes otra persona lloró como tú que una amiga se refugió en tu comprensión pero ahora te sientes sola. una isla en medio del mar y no puedes parar de llorar crees que es lo único que te queda te mueve una gran pena y nada puede evitarlo, piensas, tratas no recordar ahora tu querido pasado que tanto se ha alejado que crees que es un sueño recuerdas con vegueza y alegría esos cándidos ojos que te miraban esas cálidas palabras que susurraba esas miradas cómplices, todo en una palabra pero todo eso desapareció de pronto ya no ves sus ojos alegres ante ti ya no sientes su voz cerca de ti se alejó poco a poco pero no te diste cuenta no llegaste a sufrir por eso ahora duele así ya tus ojos no le miran como antes ahora estan tristes y rojizos ese alguien que antes te consolaba ahora te hace llorar desconsolada te sientes engañada pues él se llevó tus palabras pero debes seguir adelante recordarlo todo con alegría para volver a sentirte viva deja de llorar niña, sonríe como aquél día en que oíste una voz que llenó tu vida sonrie vida, sonríe niña no llores más por aquél día apesar de sentirte vacía reponte del pasado y vive un nuevo día pronto llegará la mañana la luz avivará tu mundo no temas al mañana caminas sin rumbo crees oir su voz deseas oír su perdón pero no llega nada a ti así, piensas, mañana todo cambiará pero debes seguir sin mirar atrás lo amaste, lo amas sabes que siempre lo amarás incluso aunque él no lo sepa incluso aunque él no vuelva nunca le olvidarás amor profundo sientes hoy más que ayer con él tu corazón ahora late de nuevo más vivo que antes y es por su recuerdo por su dulce y cálido recuerdo recuérdale en secreto sueñas con hacérselo saber pero no te atreves así que tratas esconderlo pero sabes que no puedes hoy lo volviste a ver y tu corazón latió sin freno pero no puedes decir nada no tienes palabras y te escondes, él te mira de pronto sientes un frío sobre tí, como un mármol ves una habitación oscura nadie a tu alrededor en la mesa un despertador fue un sueño, sólo eso un sueño que nunca olvidarás. 28/10/2004 Ariadna Squire Damique :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-JaK- Posted October 29, 2004 Share Posted October 29, 2004 These days arn't the same anymore Now the leaves have fallen You've left me alone It feels like i'm dying A toxic needle to my mind The world is spinning And the sky is falling I'm trapped in a bubble Lost in this maze Crashing through a prayers mind And now here I am Here am I The one who's asking the questions And am I the one Who just said goobye Like a rubix cube I confuse your mind A multi-coloured blast of frusration And a twisting tease Not saying a word By - Me :D :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 29, 2004 Share Posted October 29, 2004 very good :cool: :nice: Jak ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-JaK- Posted October 29, 2004 Share Posted October 29, 2004 thanks, but hey, your the forum poet still ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 29, 2004 Share Posted October 29, 2004 hehe i dont think so. we can be very good poets ;) we are good cool people so we can be poets ;) thanks anyways i was very sad yesterday and still, thanks it make me happier. :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-JaK- Posted October 29, 2004 Share Posted October 29, 2004 no problems ari :kiss: ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBalloon Posted November 3, 2004 Share Posted November 3, 2004 "You were my little baby girl And I knew all your fears Such joy to hold you in my arms And kiss away your tears But now you're gone There's only pain And nothing I can do And I don't want to live this life If I can't live for you." I am reading some article about Sid Vicious..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 Statues There are statues on the square are made of metal silver, bronze all them are mens kings, conquerors, warriors, presidents only old mens cold shadows then you decided to go to an expo there are some pics of people you don´t know people you see on streets a man is there look at pics then you go to visit the museum because this man told you about it you unknown him but you believed him you also see statues there women statues mades by stone strong, they keep eternity you look around and you feel alone looking at a wall you feel someone breathing near you you look behind you and there is a men the same men you saw before you feel the wind then you look in front of you now you are alone again look at the floor there is a note, a letter for you? from who? did this man leave it there? is like a clue of a game i´m a friend you don´t know or not? then try to find the truth you are looking for your true then just follow this clue" there´s an address in the note you decided to go home and forget all was happened today you look a book and you can´t see the faces are like shadows in front your eyes you are blind now, you can´t know people, you don´t know why and are so scared you look yourself in a mirror you only see shadows and light behind you does this anything to do about the clue? is late, all your room is dark then you try to sleep you have nightmares you only see shadows because your heart is blind your heart is becoming a stone like statues you saw before. Ariadna Squire Damique 06/11/2004 Saturday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bart Posted November 6, 2004 Author Share Posted November 6, 2004 Thats really good ari !! :cool: :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 thanks a lot daryl i hope write a second part later, with another title but related with this one, like a short story, a little everyday. :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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