Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 22, 2007 Share Posted August 22, 2007 Hmm Sounds like the title of the song from Franz Ferdinand Matinee. Is it? Never heard that song of FF.... just came out this morning, as at 5am today was raining, so i felt so good. and it came originally in french... and as it was in the morning that's why i decided to call it matinée. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 22, 2007 Share Posted August 22, 2007 So matinee = morning? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 22, 2007 Share Posted August 22, 2007 So matinee = morning? yes, althought i always had studied that the morning is le matin... well small difference anyways. btw it came a new one, but don't know if post it yet or not... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 23, 2007 Share Posted August 23, 2007 Milky Way Stars looked at me more than I do They appear on my dreams they told me meet me on the Way I woke up and thought of it A year later here I am following the stars on the sky I wear a scallop shell on my necklace I follow the flow of the Great Sky River Here I meet myself In the silence of the night I fight against my fears I'll be brave won't let the tears come down Like a pilgrimage that I do myself To meet me again, to beat my nightmares Meet me on Saint James Way Follow the way that is printed in the sky Only some souls can read it You are one who does Feel the pure air Meet the human being Share everything you have the answer is to come Enjoy the view at night listen the howl of the wolf don't be afraid anymore Just follow the stars See how they are reflected on your eyes See how happy is your smile You feel renew now all that thanks to the Milky Way Ariadna Squire Damique (22/08/2007) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 23, 2007 Share Posted August 23, 2007 Milky Way Stars looked at me more than I do They appear on my dreams they told me meet me on the Way I woke up and thought of it A year later here I am following the stars on the sky I wear a scallop shell on my necklace I follow the flow of the Great Sky River Here I meet myself In the silence of the night I fight against my fears I'll be brave won't let the tears come down Like a pilgrimage that I do myself To meet me again, to beat my nightmares Meet me on Saint James Way Follow the way that is printed in the sky Only some souls can read it You are one who does Feel the pure air Meet the human being Share everything you have the answer is to come Enjoy the view at night listen the howl of the wolf don't be afraid anymore Just follow the stars See how they are reflected on your eyes See how happy is your smile You feel renew now all that thanks to the Milky Way Ariadna Squire Damique (22/08/2007) :mellow: I really like it, Ari. Nice touch! As far as that french is concerned ... I don't get it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 23, 2007 Share Posted August 23, 2007 :mellow: I really like it, Ari. Nice touch! As far as that french is concerned ... I don't get it :D Thanks Miro :) Don't mind for the french one, was just a try... i think i need to improve it... but as it came originall in that language i didn't translated it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 23, 2007 Share Posted August 23, 2007 Ari, if I suggest(:P) maybe those all poems that you wrote become into the lyric of the song.. It will be nice to hear;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 23, 2007 Share Posted August 23, 2007 Ari, if I suggest(:P) maybe those all poems that you wrote become into the lyric of the song.. It will be nice to hear;) thanks :) surely i would use some of those poems if i ever manage to form a band :) but it would depend on the style that we choose... the first ones that i wrote here, i thought them with good rythm to can get a music that fits them... i remember that one of them fits very well with a bob marley song. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 23, 2007 Share Posted August 23, 2007 thanks :) surely i would use some of those poems if i ever manage to form a band :) but it would depend on the style that we choose... the first ones that i wrote here, i thought them with good rythm to can get a music that fits them... i remember that one of them fits very well with a bob marley song. :) Haha good. Goodluck with that;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 As I told you, I read your poem, and I'm honestly impressed, because there're not too many mistakes. ( the words I'd have corrected will be in bold>) Matinée Écoutez la musique si douce un nouveau jour commence on l'annonce le chant des oiseaux on le sens par la pluie Je me lève si contente tout est vert et nouveau Je m'amuse avec le concert Tout semble chanter pour moi La musique qui vient du ciel Me fait rêver une autre fois Je regarde la rue, tout est si joli Je veux danser avec cette musique La pluie glisse sur la vitre comme les jeunes dansent à la Fête avec un rythme vif et simple comme le battement de mon coeur la pluie forme des petites rivières dans le sol ils s'unissent au centre ils finissent en formant un petit lac aussi clair comme les yeux avec lesquels je te regardais Je regrette seulement une chose Ne pas avoir accepter ton offre de sortir avec toi une nuit je me souviens de la nuit quand je t'avais connu Je ferme mes yeux et me rappelle cette nuit si silencieuse ou nous pouvons écouter notre coeur nous n'avions pas besoin des mots tout le ciel etait noir seulement la lune nous regardait il semble qu'elle souriait, heureuse les chants des oiseaux announcent un nouveau jour tout contente je me lève, tout semble parfait Je me rappele des doux souvenirs tout est nouveau aujourd'hui So as I told you, I'm impressed. It's a good job, really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 :blush: thanks a lot mike. i was inspired 'cause the day i wrote it, rained in my city at 5 am so :) i feel really good, and as the first lines came in french so i wrote it all in french. :) my very first one in french :) thanks a lot for correct the mistakes.. :) i need to improve it, i guess that if i keep writing them i will keep having those mistakes... :confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 :blush: thanks a lot mike. i was inspired 'cause the day i wrote it, rained in my city at 5 am so :) i feel really good, and as the first lines came in french so i wrote it all in french. :) my very first one in french :) thanks a lot for correct the mistakes.. :) i need to improve it, i guess that if i keep writing them i will keep having those mistakes... :confused: I think that the more you'll write in french the better your poems will become. You learn from your mistakes in languages, usually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 I think that the more you'll write in french the better your poems will become. You learn from your mistakes in languages, usually. yes you are right, so may be i'll keep writing them in french... also in english. :) i'm so happy for that :D this creative mood is lasting much than i expected, surely much than often :nice: i like it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 I'm speechless.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 I'll be back Is the time of goodbies summer is finishing for us there's no way that i can stay don't you cry my sweet friend that's just a see you later I'll be doing fine I will miss you too But i ought to do it Don't let tears came I'll be with you every day I'll think of you every minute Our memories can't be erased You were always behind me Looking after me, cheering me up I won't forget the memories we lived You whispered in my ears, those sweet verses That's just a see you soon I will miss you too my dear When I'll think of you I'll be calm, watching the moon You always offered me your shoulder When I needed to cry You always listened to me And adviced me your best I'll be back very soon It will be just a month But I'll feel it as a century Till I meet you again I won't forget the way you looked at me I won't forget the moments that we lived There's no room for tears and sadness I promise you to be back next sunday I won't forget the hugs you gave me The way you looked at me that sweetly I won't leave you my love That's just a see you soon ---- You are the food I need You are the water I drink You are the air I breath You are my life, my friend We'll always be together There's no place for tears and weakness I'll be with you again When you'll open your eyes I will miss you too, darling 'Cause you are my life, love You are the light I need When I'm in the dark There's no need to cry I will meet you soon I won't forget our days I won't broke that promise When you'll feel low ask the wind, call my name I'll be right next to you Don't you feel down I can't leave you, I will never do it 'Cause I need you daily as the light needs the shadow Ariadna Squire Damique (25/08/2007) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted September 5, 2007 Share Posted September 5, 2007 A bad gang Who they are? they always look down on you as you were nothing you are just an ant small and hard-working but they want to squash you they just want you to keep working you are a slave in their system a lonely mice in their maze you can do anything to escape face the destiny close your eyes and breath run, fight, shout, break their system down they are just liars you know it for sure join your mates and face them they won't lie us any more be brave, we all thank you be strong, and fight for us because they are just a bad gang they make promises they won't make true just say what you want to hear to make us still be trapped their laugh make you be deaf their image make you be blind their words make you be mute you are just a monkey to use but all that is just make-up they are the worst nightmare demons in disguise, be aware, their words are just garbage they are everywhere not everybody sees it you must let all know that you say the truth make us feel strong to fight them, all united to be free again, as we deserve broke that chain, and be free Ariadna Squire Damique (05/09/2007) New one, still a bit dark, but... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted September 6, 2007 Share Posted September 6, 2007 Hmm.. Ari.. I think in here : Who they are? they always look down on you as you were nothing suppose to be Who are they? And... they make promises they won't make true What does it mean? Will not make true what? I don't understand:( Hehe, you could be right... I only give some suggest. Well, btw.. Nice one Ari:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted September 6, 2007 Share Posted September 6, 2007 Hmm.. Ari.. I think in here : Who they are? they always look down on you as you were nothing suppose to be Who are they? And... they make promises they won't make true What does it mean? Will not make true what? I don't understand:( Hehe, you could be right... I only give some suggest. Well, btw.. Nice one Ari:) thanks for the suggestions... i never said them would be well written grammatically... so them may be contain mistakes... may be you are right with the first suggestion... :thinking: :idea2: for the second one, it refers to the promises. (promises) they won't make true... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 Your welcome Ari:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 Burning woods Is getting dark is getting late sun is hidding moon is raising rain falls down listen the drops crashing into the ground this evening seems sad dark, dark, now is night nobody is out today smell the grass like been just cut take a deep breath smell the fire see the smoke on chimneys it makes you feel at home feel the fireplace, of the tiny houses look at the fire, it hypnotizes you memories that come, go and burns like the wood on the fire it makes you feel at home it warm you in that cold night feel it like that arms that holded you like the lulabies that your mom sang you don't cry my friend wipe your tears i'll be here, next to you see me everywhere you'll go i'll be always holding your hand i'll breath for you, when you can't just be as lively as the flames like the flames of the fire don't let the wind stops you don't let the ashes destroys you just keep burning keep dancing on the wood on this cold dark night all seemed lonely and sad feel the warm fireplace it make you feel like home Ariadna Squire Damique (04/10/07) New poem, officially the first one that i write here in Viseu. :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted October 5, 2007 Share Posted October 5, 2007 Burning woods Is getting dark is getting late sun is hidding moon is raising rain falls down listen the drops crashing into the ground this evening seems sad dark, dark, now is night nobody is out today smell the grass like been just cut take a deep breath smell the fire see the smoke on chimneys it makes you feel at home feel the fireplace, of the tiny houses look at the fire, it hypnotizes you memories that come, go and burns like the wood on the fire it makes you feel at home it warm you in that cold night feel it like that arms that holded you like the lulabies that your mom sang you don't cry my friend wipe your tears i'll be here, next to you see me everywhere you'll go i'll be always holding your hand i'll breath for you, when you can't just be as lively as the flames like the flames of the fire don't let the wind stops you don't let the ashes destroys you just keep burning keep dancing on the wood on this cold dark night all seemed lonely and sad feel the warm fireplace it make you feel like home Ariadna Squire Damique (04/10/07) New poem, officially the first one that i write here in Viseu. :nice: hey nice poetry Ari, I like it:) mm but wait, may i change a bit syllables please? ;) *its only from my opinion, i dont know is it right or not* rain falls down listen the drops i think it should be listen to the drops:D sun is hidding moon is raising i guess hidding should be like hiding.:) it makes you feel at home it warm you in that cold night how about warm change into warms? because the first subject is "it" :D so its it warms you in that cold night feel it like that arms that holded you like the lulabies that your mom sang you im not sure with holded, but im sure that lulabies should be lullabies;) well good job, keep working Ari:smug: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 5, 2007 Share Posted October 5, 2007 hey nice poetry Ari, I like it:) mm but wait, may i change a bit syllables please? ;) *its only from my opinion, i dont know is it right or not* rain falls down listen the drops i think it should be listen to the drops:D sun is hidding moon is raising i guess hidding should be like hiding.:) it makes you feel at home it warm you in that cold night how about warm change into warms? because the first subject is "it" :D so its it warms you in that cold night feel it like that arms that holded you like the lulabies that your mom sang you im not sure with holded, but im sure that lulabies should be lullabies;) well good job, keep working Ari:smug: thanks for your correction :) i didn't noticied that, (me and typing fast...). thanks afi ;) btw some of the verses are so true here, people have tiny houses, (it makes it look like a town instead of a city), and they still have chimneys and burn wood at night :nice:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 6, 2007 Share Posted October 6, 2007 Light shines again After that big storm when you wondered for so long it will end one day? finally is over, it seems listen the birds singing sky is so blue, sun shines for you it says, have a great day, babe the storm is over for you the light is back to you catch the train that stops don't let it go away don't be afraid, come in things will be fine follow me, don't be scared sun shines happily clouds has gone away there are only you and me don't be afraid of meeting me listen the birds singing don't be afraid, come in let's have a good time today my eyes can only look at yours only both us can read the message only us know the code, i can't hide more looking at you makes me feel at home sky is so blue, sun shines for you things will be fine hold my hand, come with me don't leave me now I adore your smile, so pure I can't hide it more you are so beautiful, honey it says, have a great day, babe follow me, don't be scared i'll care for you, day and night looking at you, feeds me I need you, revive me now be my blood, be my air we only know the message Ariadna Squire Damique (06/10/07) New one, i hope the creation mood is back, 'cause i love it :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted October 7, 2007 Share Posted October 7, 2007 Light shines again After that big storm when you wondered for so long it will end one day? finally is over, it seems listen the birds singing sky is so blue, sun shines for you it says, have a great day, babe the storm is over for you the light is back to you catch the train that stops don't let it go away don't be afraid, come in things will be fine follow me, don't be scared sun shines happily clouds has gone away there are only you and me don't be afraid of meeting me listen the birds singing don't be afraid, come in let's have a good time today my eyes can only look at yours only both us can read the message only us know the code, i can't hide more looking at you makes me feel at home sky is so blue, sun shines for you things will be fine hold my hand, come with me don't leave me now I adore your smile, so pure I can't hide it more you are so beautiful, honey it says, have a great day, babe follow me, don't be scared i'll care for you, day and night looking at you, feeds me I need you, revive me now be my blood, be my air we only know the message Ariadna Squire Damique (06/10/07) New one, i hope the creation mood is back, 'cause i love it :nice: I think I know who's people that you're talking about in here;) hehehe(im just guessing) good one ari, it's like a lyric of the song.. it remembers me in this part : "don't leave me now I adore your smile, so pure I can't hide it more you are so beautiful, honey it says, have a great day, babe follow me, don't be scared i'll care for you, day and night looking at you, feeds me I need you, revive me now be my blood, be my air we only know the message" it remembers me with someone i used to be like him. :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 thanks afi. i've written a new one some days ago, i'll post it here later today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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