Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 14, 2007 Share Posted August 14, 2007 well may be, i need to think of other things, to cheer me up :) i feel i need to use a bit more rich vocabulary now... sometimes i find it too simple again... btw you know, i was thinking to begin to write some poetry in french... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 14, 2007 Share Posted August 14, 2007 well may be, i need to think of other things, to cheer me up :) i feel i need to use a bit more rich vocabulary now... sometimes i find it too simple again... btw you know, i was thinking to begin to write some poetry in french... In french? really? Woah :) Nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 14, 2007 Share Posted August 14, 2007 In french? really? Woah :) Nice! but i don't know if it will be written correctly.... it would be a good way to improve the language anyways. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 14, 2007 Share Posted August 14, 2007 beehive someone said that before world is a complex machine we all form part of the system we all make it work look that metropolized people they are like robots waking up to work they live for working how insensitive are their faces hooked on the enterprise making the system get collapsed how empty they feel at the end of the day always forming a crowded queue dealing with traffic jams waiting the shopping line all the day standing up come to home to relax lie on your bed and close your eyes listen what the walls tell you listen the funny smile of the baby a new couple has just meet a kid has learnt a new word a teen give his first kiss a couple is on their honey moon that's life we live in good and bad points but it keeps its own rythm at the end of the day each one feels free on their little paradise some ones are stressed, other feels joyful we all behive our way, to feel fine that's what make it all have sense fate is around us sometimes touchs our life and make us feel better although sometimes we feel all is a fake someone said that before look that metropolized people how insensitive are their faces that's the life we live in but we all influence the others in every tiny thing we do we can cheer up people we can make they get depressed sometimes a sentence is stucked on our mind for ones, is an advice that can help them for others, it just make it worse we all have our personal quote life has a different sense for each one but we all have to get to a common point as we all are the same at the end of the day that's how life is, my friend (Ariadna Squire Damique 14/08/2007) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 14, 2007 Share Posted August 14, 2007 Hey nice poetry Bea:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 14, 2007 Share Posted August 14, 2007 Hey nice poetry Bea:) thanks Afi. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 19, 2007 Share Posted August 19, 2007 Snake Promises You were relaxing lying on the grass looking up the sky and you began to think about everything, brainstorming until your fears and hopes meet Then you realise that we all are wrong You know it all for sure but can't do anything you are also trapped in their maze they own the dark market the run the business they disguise their wishes follow me i'm gonna change it they told to you, you'll be happy now but sometimes we must go further what do they get from you? they pretend they knew the truth they promised to help the poor but all they want is buit their paradise all they do is steal your souls you belived their words you followed their promises but they are like bad lovers once they have you they destroy you open your eyes friend they built their own business blaming the fault to the old powers they mixed the world opposited are too close that nobody sees what is behind we can't think ourselves Does their promises worth that effort? World goes faster everyday life's full of false goodmen your mind is full of false promises there's nothing to do the nightmare is true they pretend everything was against they came in as false messiah but that's the truth they lied all of us they own our mind we believed all their speech they came in as rats got inside the system to break it down digging, bitting they came from the back door that we once left opened our faith has been damaged they gave us a poison it affected our eyes like the snake promises we wanted to believed everything and we believed those liars they made us behave as robots we are hooked on them now they make their empire by saying that they would made justice but all they did was change the surface and they force you to follow them aren't you gonna be the only one against they end up owning all your believes they came destroying our background to built they fake world, above the ashes keep calm my friend don't scream, there's nothing wrong is not the first time keep you hope, its what worths enjoy those days, look the sky empty your mind and relax there's few we can do just enjoy the time we still have (Ariadna Squire Damique 19/08/2007) Pretty long one, and dark and sad i know but as writing always help me to feel better so i decide to wrote it, and to post it. There's a bit of light at the beginning and the end of it... Once again, when i have wrote it completely i think that the title don't fits with the content... so i changed the title, the original title was Hidden Market Business. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 19, 2007 Share Posted August 19, 2007 ^nice bea! I see that lately your poems always have a referral to "laying on the grass"...ìs there a particular reason for that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 19, 2007 Share Posted August 19, 2007 thanks giuly :nice: is a relaxing thing... the closest thing to keep ourselves on earth... keep our feet on the ground, you know, not to built many castles on the air... although i was afriad to post that one, 'cause i reckon that is dark and may be a bit depressive... oh well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 19, 2007 Share Posted August 19, 2007 ^well it´s true:) nice I like that I´ve never noticed it but it´s true:the closest way to keep ourselves to the ground!:) well as you said, if it makes you feel better i think it was worth the post;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 19, 2007 Share Posted August 19, 2007 thanks... i didn't realised of that before, the repetitive verses of be laying on the grass.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 19, 2007 Share Posted August 19, 2007 ^:P...I just noticed it caused it happened to me today too while I was writing, so...maybe it´s normal:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 19, 2007 Share Posted August 19, 2007 oh, well i think we have things like that... i mean that's what someone says it's the style... i think i'm in a crisis, somethings that i believed had changed and keep changing now so may be that's why the last ones are darker.... may be is just for lot of free time lol. that's a repetitive idea that i see that appears on my poems... btw the snake is a reference to the Bible, Genesis, where the snake convinced Eva to eat the apple, by saying that if she eats it she'll be able to see things see couldn't see (because God don't let them see all) (you know God forbid Adan and Eva to eat the fruits of 2 trees of the Paradise)... and as the poem says, they came as a false messiah making promises that were fake.... that's why i decide to finally change the name of the poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 Hey nice poem Bea! I loved it :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 Wow, very nice indeed. It seems to be about politics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 thanks afi and mike. ;) yes let's say is about politics, as i've wrote on my siggy, i think that everything is politics.... even things we don't think that have a relation with politics... :uhoh: although i'm not a linkin park fan, i was listening their song while i wrote it. btw the snake is a reference to the bible, genesis part... as i read that part few days ago... i've explained it here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 thanks afi and mike. ;) yes let's say is about politics, as i've wrote on my siggy, i think that everything is politics.... even things we don't think that have a relation with politics... :uhoh: although i'm not a linkin park fan, i was listening their song while i wrote it. btw the snake is a reference to the bible, genesis part... as i read that part few days ago... i've explained it here. Ah, yeah, I see. politics are everywhere, whatever we do... that's unfortunately true. A reference to the bible? wow! this is impressive, really! Good job for the poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 Ah, yeah, I see. politics are everywhere, whatever we do... that's unfortunately true. A reference to the bible? wow! this is impressive, really! Good job for the poem! thanks a lot :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 thanks afi and mike. ;) yes let's say is about politics, as i've wrote on my siggy, i think that everything is politics.... even things we don't think that have a relation with politics... :uhoh: although i'm not a linkin park fan, i was listening their song while i wrote it. btw the snake is a reference to the bible, genesis part... as i read that part few days ago... i've explained it here. Oh, I didn't realized that poem you wrote was about politics... Haha, I thought is about like explaining about things.. I can't explain it either:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 Oh, I didn't realized that poem you wrote was about politics... Haha, I thought is about like natural being:P oh well it says that someone comes pretending they will do good things and they are only liars, like some politics... i think that we can get a different opinion with each poem, that's the good thing of it. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 Go Bea! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 Snake Promises You were relaxing lying on the grass looking up the sky and you began to think about everything, brainstorming until your fears and hopes meet Then you realise that we all are wrong You know it all for sure but can't do anything you are also trapped in their maze they own the dark market the run the business they disguise their wishes follow me i'm gonna change it they told to you, you'll be happy now but sometimes we must go further what do they get from you? they pretend they knew the truth they promised to help the poor but all they want is buit their paradise all they do is steal your souls you belived their words you followed their promises but they are like bad lovers once they have you they destroy you open your eyes friend they built their own business blaming the fault to the old powers they mixed the world opposited are too close that nobody sees what is behind we can't think ourselves Does their promises worth that effort? World goes faster everyday life's full of false goodmen your mind is full of false promises there's nothing to do the nightmare is true they pretend everything was against they came in as false messiah but that's the truth they lied all of us they own our mind we believed all their speech they came in as rats got inside the system to break it down digging, bitting they came from the back door that we once left opened our faith has been damaged they gave us a poison it affected our eyes like the snake promises we wanted to believed everything and we believed those liars they made us behave as robots we are hooked on them now they make their empire by saying that they would made justice but all they did was change the surface and they force you to follow them aren't you gonna be the only one against they end up owning all your believes they came destroying our background to built they fake world, above the ashes keep calm my friend don't scream, there's nothing wrong is not the first time keep you hope, its what worths enjoy those days, look the sky empty your mind and relax there's few we can do just enjoy the time we still have (Ariadna Squire Damique 19/08/2007) Pretty long one, and dark and sad i know but as writing always help me to feel better so i decide to wrote it, and to post it. There's a bit of light at the beginning and the end of it... Once again, when i have wrote it completely i think that the title don't fits with the content... so i changed the title, the original title was Hidden Market Business. Indeed, a dark one. But great :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 22, 2007 Share Posted August 22, 2007 Go Bea Go Bea :dance: :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 22, 2007 Share Posted August 22, 2007 Matinée Écoutez la musique si douce un nouveau jour commence on l'annonce le chant des oiseaux on le sens par la pluie Je me lève si contente tout est verte et nouveau Je m'amuse avec le concerte Tout sember chanter pour moi La musique que vient du ciel Me fait rêver un autre fois Je regarde la rue, tout est si jolie Je veut danser avec cette musique La pluie se glisse par le vitre comme les jeunes dansent à la Fête avec un rythme vif et simple comme le battir de mon coeur la pluie forme des petites rivières dans le sol ils s'unisent au centre ils finissent en formant un petit lac aussi clair comme les oeils avec lesquels je vous regardait Je regrette seulement une chose ne avait pas acepté votre offre de sortir avec vous une nuit je me souviens de la nuit quand je t'avais connu Je ferme mes oeils et rappele cet nuit si silencieux ou nous pouvons écouter notre coeur nous n'avaient pas besoin des mots tout le ciel etait noir seulement la lune nous regardait il semble qu'elle souriat heureuse les chants des oiseaux announcent un nouveau jour tout contente je me lève, tout semble parfait Je me rappele des douces souvenirs tout est nouveau aujourd'hui Ariadna Squire Damique (22/08/2007) My very first poem in french... i'll try to translate it into english soon. Don't know if the grammar is correct... :thinking: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 22, 2007 Share Posted August 22, 2007 Hmm Sounds like the title of the song from Franz Ferdinand Matinee. Is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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