Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 10, 2007 Share Posted April 10, 2007 Collapsed feelings I hardly can breath now this feeling is hurting so deep There's nothing i can do so i'll have to live with it every time i see you i want you to confess my feelings but i can't do it i'm not brave to is sad seeing how you leave another train that past by my door and i'm not fast to catch it 'cause i was afraid of it's destiny that's why i'm feeling so bad for all those collapsing feelings them are running inside me i'm not brave to tell you what i feel is not that easy find the good words i don't know if you ever felt the same i don't want to broke it all for this is just a feeling i know but is so deep in me and i can't hide one more day i hardly know you boy but you'd be mine so many times we had a great life to share but it was only in my dreams i don't know yet how quick i fall in love i don't remember now when i started feeling it may be is not love what i feel may be i'm just jelous of that girl i don't know what i feel now i don't know who i am now i thought you can made me change you could make me happy but it was only a dream surely i just though you were different because you remind me of another guy i don't want to keep it more inside so i'll leave it all tonight i'll make a big fire and i'll throw there all the words you told me to make this feel disappear Ariadna Squire Damique (10/04/2007) It just came up now... dunno if the title is correct for it, but anyways...i hadn't correct it so...anyways i wanted to write something like this yesterday.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted April 10, 2007 Share Posted April 10, 2007 beautiful!:blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 10, 2007 Share Posted April 10, 2007 thanks giuly :) unfutunately is true and i'm feeling bad now :( oh well... i think in this case writing don't helps me :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted April 10, 2007 Share Posted April 10, 2007 I think writing helps a LOT ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 10, 2007 Share Posted April 10, 2007 i though it, and it helped me... but in this case, don't helps... :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted April 10, 2007 Share Posted April 10, 2007 I´m sorry! your state seems really bad!!!:sad: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms Magpie Posted April 10, 2007 Share Posted April 10, 2007 beautiful poem, Ari :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 i know Giuly :( thanks Nina ;) Today i wrote a new one, but i must check it, i don't like how i wrote some parts... I'll post it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 Weaponed Rider You were hunting in the night Chasing a young deer you thrown your arrows but them stucked on me You got off your horse and came next to me and tried to heal the damage you made me you told me you were sorry and you stayed next me your voice healed me more than anything your eyes looked mines so sweetly A danger is coming close to us so you stood up bravely holding strongly your blade the double edged weapon You took the blade time ago You got it from a stone you left me on the ground I couldn't stop crying for days and nights Come back sweet rider I feel so lonely without you I can't be without you We are like the moon and the sun they can't be together just for a tiny moment when one shadow the other I see you coming back You seemed like a ghost appearing from among trees and shadows is our destiny you told me I closed my eyes surprised and you vanished like smoke nothing was true, nothing was real but why i still feel this hole on my chest? Ariadna Squire Damique (11/04/2007) Dunno if some grammar parts are so correct.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 :shocked3: I see you write poems daily! And what a poems :wink: I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 you are welcome Miro, yours are great too ;) luckily i'm feeling creative now, i'm loving it... for me that's like for surfers, i want to catth the higher wave ;) although i would like to feel a bit happier but.... them all are a bit dark.. :o oh well... when my class mates find me writing they think i'm doing some kind of homework lol... and as the poems are in english and with tiny letters i don't show it to them now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 Bea, I really like your poems. You describe things I've felt before. That's really nice. And your last one is beautiful. You write really often! Lucky you! I can hardly put words together to make a poem since March... sometimes it comes, then I catch the opportunity, but it runs dry so quickly... That's why I began 8 poems or sth like this, and I can't even finish them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 Bea, I really like your poems. You describe things I've felt before. That's really nice. And your last one is beautiful. You write really often! Lucky you! I can hardly put words together to make a poem since March... sometimes it comes, then I catch the opportunity, but it runs dry so quickly... That's why I began 8 poems or sth like this, and I can't even finish them! you are welcome Mike. Your poems are very good ones too ;) as i said before i feel i'm in a creative moment and i like to enjoy it, altought them are a bit sad. i didn't wrote anything during the last year, 'cause i didn't wanted to, i was afraid of end up depressing myself so i decided to stop it for a year, remember what i told you here about the "candle in the night" one. I don't use to revise what i write at first, i usually keep it as it was written. for the last ones i previously wrote a topic for each paragraph, for instance for Apolo one, i wrote previously how i was going to describe first: lips, eyes.... and then i wrote the poem... i never had tried it, and was good, easier. (mostly taking into account that i wrote it during an uni lecture... ) while i'm writing them i reread them a bit to decide how to follow it, but i wrote them in a day. of course i do the same for spanish ones. the same that happens to you with poems, happen to me with short stories... btw Miro i have to tranlate the one i told you about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 21, 2007 Share Posted April 21, 2007 In the crossroad I'm in the isle that is among the rivers each one have its flow I resist of their powers I crawl against it not to sink Here I am in the middle of the journey looking which path to choose there are four ways to decide north, south, east and west should i look at my past? should I live the future now? Should I follow your way? Should I decide my own way? Last woman who looked back became a salt statue last man who wanted everything made all things became gold a heart of gold can be too heavy to keep it beating a heart of salt can be destroyed by tears I'm between two lines the old era is at my back on the horizon i can see the new age which is to come each friend i ask for advice tell me to choose a different way others told me to follow my heart but my heart don't beats as it used to I've built my own land what can i get from each path? I wonder in the middle of the ocean what will happen finally? I can't keep looking at all around I must react, wake up and decide I mustn't be afraid of changes I can't avoid new days coming I musn't worry about what the path ends with May be north ends in Styx lake May be west takes me to your heart may be south have another crossroad Ariadna Squire Damique (18/04/2007) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Qwerty Waluigi Posted April 22, 2007 Share Posted April 22, 2007 Snow by General There was a man named joe who ate yellow snow but then one day it turned yellow so now he only eats dough what did you think? i made it up a while ago Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Qwerty Waluigi Posted April 22, 2007 Share Posted April 22, 2007 its a quatrian i need to write a sonnet but i never get the time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted April 24, 2007 Author Share Posted April 24, 2007 In the crossroad I'm in the isle that is among the rivers each one have its flow I resist of their powers I crawl against it not to sink Here I am in the middle of the journey looking which path to choose there are four ways to decide north, south, east and west should i look at my past? should I live the future now? Should I follow your way? Should I decide my own way? Last woman who looked back became a salt statue last man who wanted everything made all things became gold a heart of gold can be too heavy to keep it beating a heart of salt can be destroyed by tears I'm between two lines the old era is at my back on the horizon i can see the new age which is to come each friend i ask for advice tell me to choose a different way others told me to follow my heart but my heart don't beats as it used to I've built my own land what can i get from each path? I wonder in the middle of the ocean what will happen finally? I can't keep looking at all around I must react, wake up and decide I mustn't be afraid of changes I can't avoid new days coming I musn't worry about what the path ends with May be north ends in Styx lake May be west takes me to your heart may be south have another crossroad Ariadna Squire Damique (18/04/2007) Me gusto mucho este poema Beita, de verdad que suerte tienes de poder expresarte escribiendo poemas, yo la verdad no puedo pero quizas lo intente algun dia jeje Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 21, 2007 Share Posted July 21, 2007 Me gusto mucho este poema Beita, de verdad que suerte tienes de poder expresarte escribiendo poemas, yo la verdad no puedo pero quizas lo intente algun dia jeje Muchas gracias Ren. A veces me maravillo yo misma, tiempo despues cuando releo, que fuese de escribirlo. Ahora mismo me gustaría volver a escribir poesía en inglés, pero me está costando un poco. Si eres musico, seguro que serás capaz de escribir alguna canción pronto. De hecho pensé haber hecho una banda con mis amigas, siendo la letrista. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 when swallows come back sun shines again after those rainy days little animals leave their caves flowers open once again spring has come again a new season is here the time when everything renew look at the swallows they have come back today look how happily they sing look how lively they fly look down at the street how many kids learn to walk look how many bees come to the flowers breath the new air spring has come again a new season is here time when everything renew days are hotter and longer sun shines more and more people have chats on the road but this year you haven't came i waited for you for so long and you haven't come spring will finish soon sunny are less funny without you warmer summer comes stronger you were meant to come before it ends but i get no answer from you i gave you my heart you were meant to care it but this feeling has end you don't want me anymore you don't come down my balcony again you broke it all, all are tiny pieces i get those pieces but i can't mend them by myself who is supposed to help me with it? who will make me smile again? look at the swallows' nest how happily they sang how lively they fly feel the sun shining warmly Ariadna Squire Damique (23/07/2007) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 so sad:).....beautiful bea:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 I wanted to mix to ideas, and i think that i got it. Anyways the last verse is possitive i think. That emphasizes the contrast of both ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 ^^it´s true...anyway I loved the mix...the beginning is so happy, then sad part and the end:) nice!:nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 thanks. i wanted to write one about the middle part of this one.. but i couldn't wrote anything good... so i started with something easy and then put it there. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 31, 2007 Share Posted July 31, 2007 Lovely eyes The first time I met you The fist thing I looked at were your lovely clear eyes Someone warned me that sometimes wolves are in disguise hidden on a sheep dress I didn't believed that until I met you I felt sorry for you 'cause I believed all your lies But now my mind is clear I don't mind of what you say There's nothing that will make me change I won't go back into your arms this time I was your muppet You used me for your fun And now you throw me to the ground You left me down with my broken heart Your heart is a stone now Your lips are bitter Now I see tha dark side That is behind your lovely eyes ---- this final part is added later... ---- Your words are litter Your promises are burnt Our memories were a fake Because you were pretending all the time there's nowhere you can hide now I learnt from you how to do it how to be so mean and cruel Nothing would give me back The prosimes that you've broke I only can keep the moments we shared But do I have to believe that them were real? If you left me down with my ached soul If you didn't answered me back If you said that everything was just for fun Ariadna Squire Damique (31/07/2007) Sad one I know but.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 A bad day What if when you wake up life makes no sense What if you don't feel as good as you used to be what if air don't seems to help you keep breathing why if you can't hide it your worst nightmares chase you now where to hide what to do? what if your believing are weak now how to deal with a new day smiling? what if you've discovered a truth that nobody sees but you? what if everything seems to be against you, as your worst enemy who to trust if you know for sure that the worst enemies on the light are best friends each night who to talk with, who to trust? what if your life makes no sense what if your believes are broken what it you know today all that was hidden for centuries that life is a fairy tale there are bad and good souls ones against the other and you are in the middle you have noone to talk to and them are chasing you there's nowhere to hide now there's nothing to change it what if you feel that everything is a big fake that all you trusted in is just a child's tale there's nothing we can do just to help each other and wish every night that there will be another day tomorrow 'cause there's nothing we can do we are not powerful enough to make it change just keep smiling and breathing (Ariadna Squire Damique 10/08/2007) It just came out :smug: i wish it were not that depressing but... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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