Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 5, 2007 Share Posted March 5, 2007 The Mirror Every time i glance at you I see myself every morning on the surface, on the other side once I see a brave one, other a shy I saw my twin soul but I was wrong I was me myself, I shown my different sides I would fight with it because of the things I don't agree I'm sorry for how I behaved but there are things I can't change I wanna have a new chance I wish I could mend my mistakes I hope is not too late to be sorry for what I did there are too many things I wanted I have done Yesterday I didn't see myself nothing's shown in the glass surface as if I had no soul anymore my heart didn't beat as it should, anymore Today my anger drive me mad and i throw my stoned feelings against the mirror and it brokes I saw the surface breaking into tiny pieces resting on the floor there were lying my past, my memories Now I'm looking for a new mirror A new life that I'll build myself I can't fix the tiny glasses of my old life I can't mix the pieces of future and past I can't keep walking in the thin line Watching the edge of this blade over me Be careful, glass pieces can hurt as the past can make us go mad That's why I want my new mirror I wanna be the best myself I don't want to be mistaken anymore I need to live my present now Cause everyday is a new present, you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 9, 2007 Share Posted March 9, 2007 I've been re-reading my old poems and now i'm shocked.. i think i can't write new ones as good as the old :( Well i hope it's only a bad creative period for me now.. :( i want to write nice new poems again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bart Posted March 9, 2007 Share Posted March 9, 2007 I've been re-reading my old poems and now i'm shocked.. i think i can't write new ones as good as the old :( Well i hope it's only a bad creative period for me now.. :( i want to write nice new poems again. Bea you need to send your peoms to the BBC... They are always asking for things like these and have talent scouts (people that look for talent) of which you have... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 9, 2007 Share Posted March 9, 2007 lol i don't think i'm that talented... i must send the poems to a local review, i always forgot to do it before disconnecting the net :S well i could try. :) Hehe may be next year i'll write them in another language :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bart Posted March 9, 2007 Share Posted March 9, 2007 Su es muy intellgente... Dont be bad on yourself I will go and find you a link if you wish I will simbit some for you and see what happens... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 9, 2007 Share Posted March 9, 2007 I'll look for english magazines to post some poems.... como luego dicen "nadie es profeta en su tierra"... but i want to try previously in Spain. when i used to read Poe's and Stoker writings, i heard about a Stoker awards, it's about horror stories i think, and i wrote some plots of short novels to write, i'm thinking again about them, because a teacher told me to take part in a uni writing contest/ awards, and as the horror stories i wrote took place in my city... i'm thinking to use some parts of the horror ones for the uni awards... :thinking: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bart Posted March 9, 2007 Share Posted March 9, 2007 cool sorry about the slow response I am just heating up some food on the cooker at the minute.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 9, 2007 Share Posted March 9, 2007 cool sorry about the slow response I am just heating up some food on the cooker at the minute.... ok, don't worry, enjoy your meal. ;) What make me not to send any of my works to somewhere is that i don't think i'm good enough, i mustn't worry about it, critics will do their jobs, compare me with some old writer for bad or good.... and well... i'm shy. And well now there are still people that likes the old styles, everything ruled, structured, and some of my writing are more open, not ruled.... i mean for poetry in spanish i don't mind too much about the rythm... :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 14, 2007 Share Posted March 14, 2007 this monday i wrote a new poem, and today a new one. I hope it don't stop. :D I like this kind of addiction. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 14, 2007 Share Posted March 14, 2007 Keep Awake Don't get yourself into it Don't take part of the flow Don't play it in loops Or you are gonna get mad One flow calls the other One voice against the other and you are in the middle just watching, only surviving Make your movement The one you think is best or the flow will catch you you'll have to crawl against Don't stuck in the middle 'cause that's what they want to They'll use you like a puppet Break the threads whom with they use you Be cold and thinker Be brave to go against it Don't fall in their loops Wake up, shout what you think Don't keep sitting in your cozzy place Your voice must sound clear now But you have only this chance To decide what you want There's no place to hide Leave your fears and be confidence Be brave to say what you believe in Start your own wave Don't let them use you Don't worry if you feel lonely But just follow the truth with it you'll have everything Keep yourself awake Don't go round and round in their big wheel like a tiny mice The truth will help you to escape off their claws don't believe the side voices just believe your mind Ariadna Squire (12/03/2007) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 15, 2007 Share Posted March 15, 2007 A candle in the night Here I am tonight Burnining a candle for you The only thing I can do You'll be always in my mind You were the light who guide me You were the reason why I wake up I always give the best of me to make you smile everyday giving the best from me to you For you i kept common sense For you I didn't let drove myself mad For you I'm still here today I keep praying for you every night for your soul to be in paradise for you to no stop shining I want you to be happy that's why i give the best of me that's the only thing i can do Make you be proud of me Don't forget wat you tought me keep your spirit here Here I am tonight Burning a candle for you In memory of your soul 'cause you were the light when everything was blur and dark you were the reason for me to stay here to make you be happy and proud when everything seemed to brake down you always fixed it you were the light who guided me everyday that's why i'm here tonight, for you Ariadna Squire (14/03/2007) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 I just posted on Poets thread, a new poem i wrote yesterday night. When ego gets me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 Untitled Let me look to your eyes Let me kiss your sweet lips one more time Let me touch your skin, once again Please, don't you vanish from my arms Don't you go like a cloud of smoke Like a shadow on a sunny midday wall Don't you go from my memory Tell me in words and facts what you feel Don't keep being motionless and mute Please sweetheart don't leave me I woke up this morning and you wasn't beside me Where have you gone, my hunnie? Will you come back tonigh? I looked for you at home There weren't nothing that you owned Was just my imagination? Do I ever had your arms around my shoulders? Do I ever listened your sweet voice, wishpering? Or it was just my imagination? There aren't any pic of us at home Oh sweetheart, where have you gone? I can't stop crying for something that seems it never happened (01/04/2007) Ariadna Squire Damique Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted April 4, 2007 Share Posted April 4, 2007 Nice poems Bea! Quite sad... This person meant a lot for you, really. You make us feel it very well. As you proposed me to post my poems in your thread (although it's your thread, thank you, though), I hope the other coldplayers won't mind that you share your own thread with me =) So, my lasy one is called Let It Erase The Distance Feeling alone In my everlasting nights, All the sounds are gone, Only one word remains and flies. "Just say it again, Let it echoe and break the silence, Give it a chance to swipe away the rain, Let it erase the distance." Play me the music of your heart Play me its unsung melody Take me away from the start, Show me what I have to see. Wherever I could stand, I feel you, near me, You take my hand, And whisper softly: "Just say it again, Let it echoe and break the silence, Give it a chance to swipe away the rain, Let it erase the distance." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 4, 2007 Share Posted April 4, 2007 nice one Mike. You all are welcome here of course. ;) Well there are different persons in each them, and some of them aren't for a person in particular, at least not in a love/unlove way. For example the "A candle in the night" is for my mum. (she died 18 months ago), is the only poem i wrote to her ever, i would like to write more to her, better to have written them when she lived, but i never got the words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted April 4, 2007 Share Posted April 4, 2007 omg, that's really sad. :( your poem is touching. It makes me sth. I can't be indifferent when I read such poem. It's really beautiful, really. It reminds me things I've lived three years ago. Well, I'm going to bed, so, let me wish you a very good night:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 4, 2007 Share Posted April 4, 2007 good night and sweet dreams Mike. :angel: :kiss: I really felt the one i wrote to her, it took me long time to write it. Btw have you read the first ones? I wonder myself how i could wrote them, specially the ones that make references to trees and leaves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 6, 2007 Share Posted April 6, 2007 Our secret listen the wind whispering it's calling your name see how the sun shines it shines for you see the clouds moving calmy they move for you listen the sea waves they sound for you keep laying on the grass it feels so nice and calm looking at your eyes it makes me feel so good see the leaves moved by the wind how they play this music for us just to remember this moment i see your pure smile on you lips your eyes keep their happy bright feels your hands not cold anymore llisten your sweet heart beating that's the rythm my hunnie the moment we shared today this won't come back again but it'll be in our minds i wish you know how i feel i'm not brave to say it in words but we share a pure message only spoke and read from our sights that's how i feel my love every time i think of you i know it can't be true but it makes me feel so good thinking of you makes me give the best of me i don't mind if you'll ever know what i feel for you i just know that it makes me good i won't suffer for your love anymore i'll see the happy side of it those words that i'm writting those are the kids we'll never have those are the sights we can't never share but those are the reasons of keep beating our hearts this lines makes the rythm the melody of our hearts we share a lonely pure moment that won't repeat again we share a secret we share a feeling we share a smile we share a tear and it's blowing in the air as the whisper of your voice reading aloud this words that's what make me be alive and i will be here my darling every time that you read it again we will be together and alone safe of the sights of strangers we are one my love every time you read it i'm the blood that gets your heart while you read those lines i'm the dream, you dream when you think of this moment i'm the hand that cares you when you need to feel better i don't mind what's your past i don't mind of your future but we live this present the gift of this pure and simply feeling (06/04/2007) Ariadna Squire Damique Brand new poem. I know is long. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 7, 2007 Share Posted April 7, 2007 Ballad of Time There you are sitting on your comfy old chair looking through the window to the wide long streets Your face is not happy or sad You're eyes don't shows a shine Your smile looks broken but you don't seem to be worried You spend your days looking the people walking you play games with them thinking how their lives are like you don't mind of homeless you don't mind of crying kids you don't mind of oldies you don't worry of any of them you just look their walking you just follow their rythm 'cause there's nothing you can do to make them be a bit happier one day you were that kid yesterday you was that tramp tomorrow you'll be that oldie but now you look at their time They all meet in a crossroad but they don't know each other they are only strangers oh, someone just has fall in love them are just strangers that meet daily in the same corner the ones that are shown in your eyes they only share a thread for you now there are yet some gentlemen who help some ladies with their bags there are some kids running that stole a candy from time to time years ago you were that kid yesterday you was that gentleman tomorrow you'll be that woman but now you look at their time they don't know each other but they are like a family they only live together in your eyes each time you remember their promenades. Ariadna squire Damique (07/04/2007) Again a long one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted April 7, 2007 Share Posted April 7, 2007 whoa! I love it :nice: They all meet in a crossroad but they don't know each other they are only strangers oh, someone just has fall in love That's my fav part :) Interesting theme, I daresay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 7, 2007 Share Posted April 7, 2007 thank you. i wanted to write something like that time ago... btw i had a similar but in a darker way in spanish... is one that tells a car accident... well. (my friends didn't liked it). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted April 7, 2007 Share Posted April 7, 2007 Darker? Woooow...:) Could you translate it by any chance? *please please please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 7, 2007 Share Posted April 7, 2007 first i have to find it... :uhoh: i wrote it on an old agenda i have... but i'll translate it and post it tomorrow, ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted April 7, 2007 Share Posted April 7, 2007 oh, thank you :blush: (wooo...this is my 8001st post! :dance:) need to go...so talk to you tomorrow :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 7, 2007 Share Posted April 7, 2007 oh ok, see you tomorrow Miro. :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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