Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 smoke and laughs there was the fire on it warmed the place see the smoke coming out it fills our lungs a smell, remind me home it brings memories, now we all sit around like a little family we chat, we talk we laugh, we cry together, like family smoke is around a phone call, a familiar voice they call you to share joy soon there are laughs eyes fulls of tears, of happiness games we play around jokes we say aloud stare at me, laugh with me drink a bit more, please taste, try, share we all do the same alone and together we are same and different best regards, best wishes telling stories around, the fire the smell of wood feeds you what is next? Have a shot. Tales and desires we share life and worries we speak about jokes and essays we say aloud our voices echoing in the space it will lose somewhere covered by the stars, the dark sky it feels like home now, the moon protecting us, up there there was a fire on a smell, remind me home we are same and different our voices echoing in the space Ariadna Squire Damique (06-05-2008) ------ that one is inspired on the BBQ i was in yesterday :P i think is like the first time i do a thing like that :thinking: (write about an 'event' i've been. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted May 8, 2008 Share Posted May 8, 2008 Walking along Rua dos Herois not cold nor warm it was a random night just tiny lights there guided me to you I meet you on my way I was walking down the road following the tiny lights I was cheering me up there you came as the hero the one I needed then just like an angel you appeared beside me your eyes staring at mines your smile wide for me your hand rested on my shoulder my worries left me then your voice, tender and strong your hands warm and firm your eyes clear and deep you just behind me, there I was looking for a hero I felt as a villain, then you came to rescue me you came to change me I was lost in this place you guided me home you changed me, I moved you killed me, I born again we cut the strings the ones that made me prisioner I held the wings the ones you have for me fly up the sky take me far way bring the joy just look into my eyes there's no distance far enough there's nothing I wish most there I became the hero, because your voice warmed me, strong Ariadna Squire Damique (07-05-2008) ------- Trivia: This was an original idea that came up in portuguese, i have to write it yet (in portuguese) while i was walking to the BBQ the other day, the title just came up, although the original one has nothing to do with it.. i mean 'Rua dos Herois' don't exists as an street here, and it means in english 'Hero's Street'). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted May 8, 2008 Share Posted May 8, 2008 All against Everyone is stand at me them all holding a stone ready to throw it to me all is against me now I can't escape, I can't hide i've been sentenced and I really don't know why i've been punished I hear voices, inside and outside I hear murmurs, bad words them all said at my back them all against me, again I fear them are true I fear of my punishment I fear my guilt in it may be is too late to explain is my age, is a rage? Are them true?, do I am guilt? Is my mind, are their words? There's a proof?, blame! The storm is close under my head throws it throws ice blades on me it hurts my innocent skin is too late to explain there's nothing I can do I can't crawl against this i'm sinking in, blame! I hear voices, inside and outside them dig on me, them crumble me I can't do anything, i've been sentenced all is against me, i'm sinking in energy leaves me, I fall down my soul leaves me, i'm broken my mind leaves me, i'm dead lying down like a puppet, unuseful turn on the machine, hold your knives i'm ready to be knocked, to be kicked take care my blood don't dirt your dress i'm ready to fight against, all against. Ariadna Squire Damique (07-05-08) ------------ Trivia: i wrote this one yesterday, just 5 mins before the blackout (that lasted almost 3 hours :o) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted May 8, 2008 Share Posted May 8, 2008 Intriguing! Storms on the way?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted May 8, 2008 Share Posted May 8, 2008 Intriguing! Storms on the way?? you mean for the fact that after writing it there was a blackout? i really don't know why it was that... it rained a bit yesterday morning, but a part of that the weather was pretty cool, but at night the light failed several times again (like 4 or 5 times from 8pm until 2am) (each time the light went down people complained outside, and each time it came back people clapped... lol). anyways yesterday was a very strange day in relation with energy (janitors were cleaning the second floor with an electric machine, each time they turn it on, i had internet, each time they turned it off i lose the signal... :thinking: that is quite strange really). or you mean if there's a storm over me? (personally)? :thinking: about this i can't answer yet, i got bad news from my uni in Spain that made me be down for some hours the day before yesterday (as down as i didn't felt like to write or listen to music, but you see now it is back) :( and plus the age i am... (my dad says that each 7 years a person has a personal crisis), but if so i hope i'll turn it to be a good thing after all (i always try to see the good side of things, even from the worst things). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted May 9, 2008 Share Posted May 9, 2008 Shine after the storm I don't mind how it happened I don't care when it was at all I just know you changed me you are the light after the storm you brough me back the hope the hope i've lost on my way home on this tiring way, were i've lost faith then you held me, you cheered me up i've never been this way before I feel the energy running through me I can see my smile, I can hear my smile pure and clean, as you've made me I just want to see your spotlight see how it shines, how it dance on your eyes, them staring at mines let's unmask us for once, let's dance you fill the void, with joy and hope you make the tiniest moments, to mind you cared me, since I don't know when you cleaned my soul, as sure as water flows you've been the light after the storm you are the air I need to breath, ozone you've been the water that flows, you are the one i've been looking for since I remember you made me smile since I remember you were truth since I remember you were beside me I don't know since when but I love you I can't say it on any other way I don't want to hide it one more day I don't need to put me down and pray the things i've always wished are here I feel your heart close to mine I can picture you beside me, smiling I can see you holding me, staring I can't love you more than now there's a distance that separates us there's a language that distinguish us there's a past that hurted us, so deep but love has no reasons, is just as the light it comes from somewhere outside it crash in our hearts, it kills and makes us born again it is as fast as a flash there's no more room I can give you just my heart, just your light there's no time, no past, just future for you and I, for me and you let's kill time staring us tonight let my spotlight dance with yours let me love you more, let me know you let me be what you always wanted to because you are the light after the storm you free me of this weight, I had carried on you shine next to me, you bring hope again you are the one i've been looking for, love you make winter ends, you wizard you make summer come, you sunlight you make the bitter goes away, you sweet you make me believe again, in love I can't say it on another way I can't hide it one more day there's just you and I, me and you there's just this time, let's be light Ariadna Squire Damique (09-05-2008) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted May 15, 2008 Share Posted May 15, 2008 ok i don't know who of you check this thread as you don't leave any comment (even to critizise what i post here) i can't never know surelly who checks it or not... this worries me. well what worries me most now, is that suddenly i'm on a creative drought... well i have ideas, many ideas, but the problem is that for some reason i can't put them down :\ that's bad. on one hand i think is good, i was too creative before and so i need a rest, is cool because i feel my mind flying by itself but you know even birds need to rest on a tiny plant.. and now i'm going to be very very busy with studies and all that, sure i'll have some cool free time to not stress too much, but i'm already missing this creativity, it was like a need to me, a good routine to write a poem a day but now it's been more than a week since the last one :( i hope all will be back to 'normality' soon, i miss it, really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted May 17, 2008 Share Posted May 17, 2008 I can't put you down Here I am once more Who will surround this time? I stare at you, but nothing come I am as dry as the ink i use Nothing new comes these days it worries me, i fear you've gone don't leave me now, don't go today don't let me down, don't turn and leave I am weak, surviving alone I am down, crawling down don't leave me now, help me to go on don't drag me down, pull me up make me fly again make me smile, proud make my heart beat, glad make me love you one more time I am dying without you there's no room to breath now my blood stops running I am losing, I am left, drifted Come back to me sit beside me, as you did whisper in my ear, all I need hold me tight, don't leave me because I need you so much I can't put down all that no papers could explain that no ink is enough to write down you ease my worries, everything brights you worry when I don't ask you to you make me smile, with your shy details you make me feel right, just next to you don't go and leave me now I need you as flowers need the sun come and pour yourself on my garden I can't put you down yet I can't write in order I can't describe you, how you make me feel I can't say aloud how much I need you I can't write it in a way it makes sense wind blows on my face me surrounded, in the ground, lying dead you came to rescue me, whisper to me make me breath again, bring back my sense I was lost until you came I was sinking in until you rescued me I was dying until you made me beat I was waiting for you all this time Promise me you won't leave I count down the time that rest I count until we meet again I can't put you down anymore I don't make sense myself until I talk to you, brieft but enough you are what I need, to smile waiting for you, a brief talk i know cheer me up once more make me smile, take me close I don't fear this love, do you? I won't leave you down, love. In tons of words i try to explain I try to build a world for us, me and you I try to understand how I feel, for you It all will be know the day we'll say, 'I love you'. Ariadna Squire Damique (15-05-2008) -------- Finally i got to write this one. ---- Still i don't know who reads this thread yet... so i've been thinking about it few weeks ago and so... i'm leaving for a while. see you soon. :kiss: --- For the ones that had read my poetry and enjoyed it and i've said i'm leaving the board for a while i inform you that, i will keep publishing it here http://net_generation.blogspot.com/ btw there, there are already 3 new poems. (Flames, You are wasting me, What do you...?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted September 27, 2008 Share Posted September 27, 2008 ok although i said that i won't post here from now on, here is come a new poem, i just had written it, i had some other ideas and i didn't liked them so i hadn't posted anywhere. --- Tear the ocean deep in blue on open space me in the middle trying not to sink i can't cry any longer i can't wait anymore i can't avoid this feeling i can't hide this fear i will tear the ocean nothing will stop me just a voice i need to hear just a hand i want to hold nobody can ease my fear nobody can keep my hopes i won't give up now i won't drift in this water deep blue ocean surrounds me no rocks i could stand in alone, empty and full i can't go on that way give up to blame me give up to break me come and hold me close don't hide this love anymore i can't go on this way i can't beat my heart, broken i can't fix the fears, hurting words unsaid, sights unseen i will tear the ocean nobody can know why just the words i need to hear just your heart been opened for me try it once, look at me and tell close your eyes and say the truth hear your heart and feel it deep as deep as the blue ocean that opens it opens to take me it opens for the love to come it tear as my heart stops just waiting for your words Ariadna Squire Damique (27/09/2008) i'll add it to the blog soon and with the other ones that i didn't liked at all and may be with new ones that will come. I've missed to write poetry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nash Posted September 27, 2008 Share Posted September 27, 2008 love the last one ari :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted September 28, 2008 Share Posted September 28, 2008 thanks a lot nash. :) is the first one since may :o i had the feeling that it was coming back :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted October 10, 2008 Share Posted October 10, 2008 Don't tell me that. Don't tell me that you'll be here If you never are, if you never try Don't tell me what you feel If never do, If you never beat Here I was stand, waiting for you but you, you never came Here I kept our love alive, for us but you never mind, you never love don't tell me that i'm mistaken because you know that I am right don't lie to love, don't hurt us better you go aways, better you never came Sights and smiles that are broken them fade away, them fall to the ground I put myslef on my knees, for the pain I feel your eyes are blurry you are sorry, but is late may be I was too hard to ask you may be you never loved me take it or leave it, as simple will you ever decide, tell me you are crumbling I know you had fallen down, I see but is too late, is too late i've been here waiting for you my hopes vanished when I saw you my wishes broke down when you came your promises died, them sink on your lies as true as the birds fly, as sad as ravens wait outside have you ever see me cry? Have you ever tried to see me? Have you ever felt what you said? Nice words, but never felt them. Was it fun for you, it did? Is it yet something to laugh for? How does it felt when is your turn now? Your heart is cold, it always was Don't look at me with your broken smile Is as broken as your promises Don't look at me with your lost sight Is as lost as the time I wasted waiting in vain. Ariadna Squire Damique (01-05-2008) it reminds me with avril lavigne, dont tell me song! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 18, 2008 Share Posted October 18, 2008 hundred days half a year has passed and here i am stucked i can't go back or keep on since i heard those words beautiful melody that i ever heard just a warm whisper can't avoid to cry is it too late to try? true or not, here i am words that heal this heart wishes that we share but is the time that makes us wait is the lenght that makes us stop stand on a rainy night, for a feeling awake on a cold place, for you there's one thing i only need hear you again, feel you again close to me, all my problems vanish opposites and needed we are you are the sand that needs me i am the tear that falls into you i am the air that floats on the hill you are the bird that flies up the sky months have passed and i here i wait for the next chance to come to see you another night the one when our hearts met nothing to fear now just want to make you smile is it too late to try? a new land is behind that bridge will you wait me there, at the other side? i will walk firmly, i won't slide this feeling makes me strong no pain will hit me anymore Ariadna Squire Damique (18-10-2008 Saturday) Brand new poem, well it could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted October 18, 2008 Share Posted October 18, 2008 hundred days half a year has passed and here i am stucked i can't go back or keep on since i heard those words beautiful melody that i ever heard just a warm whisper can't avoid to cry is it too late to try? true or not, here i am words that heal this heart wishes that we share but is the time that makes us wait is the lenght that makes us stop stand on a rainy night, for a feeling awake on a cold place, for you there's one thing i only need hear you again, feel you again close to me, all my problems vanish opposites and needed we are you are the sand that needs me i am the tear that falls into you i am the air that floats on the hill you are the bird that flies up the sky months have passed and i here i wait for the next chance to come to see you another night the one when our hearts met nothing to fear now just want to make you smile is it too late to try? a new land is behind that bridge will you wait me there, at the other side? i will walk firmly, i won't slide this feeling makes me strong no pain will hit me anymore Ariadna Squire Damique (18-10-2008 Saturday) Brand new poem, well it could be better. is the lenght that makes us stop i think that lenght should be length :) isnt it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chavi Posted October 19, 2008 Share Posted October 19, 2008 that last one's lovely :nice: keep up with the good poems ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Rose Posted October 19, 2008 Share Posted October 19, 2008 :nice: poem Ari Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 9, 2008 Share Posted November 9, 2008 Thousand Lives I was just wasting time just sat inside my car looking around me, us people walking in a rush they always busy to get somewhere where they go? what they do? i wonder, staring at the trace they leave i picture lives, one, two, three holding hands, separated, opposite everyone goes beside each other and most them even don't care does it makes you feel something? i was just wasting time looking at everyone going up and down road, street, square, i chase them i live in them, for just a minute nor more, not less, no wonder they are in a rush, to somewhere what if they get lost? what guides them to what to do? i was just wondering how they are off their daily lives, off their boring work when they lay to rest, when they wake up how they are ones with the others? i lived thousand lives it took me a few time just wondering on my car trying to know what was around. Ariadna Squire Damique (09 November 2008) ------- that one is an idea from when i've been in Madrid quite recently. We waited on a street to try to figure out where we were and how we could get to hour place there. And so i realised how is a big city. ---- almost a month since the last one. :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 (Un)Break(able) It will last? It will end? It will hurt? It will break? I fear to be wrong I doubt to be right but there must be some truth as I can't think different now Don't want to harm you Don't want to be hurt Something tells me to go on May my head speaks different I fear the message it says I fear the form it takes I fear how deep it can be I fear it digs and grown on me Will it end or last? Will it be right or wrong? We will end broken? Or we will fix it till it fits? Each night i look forward I look back to meet us secretely, privately, unique it brings light on the dark night I count backwards when you go I can picture us together The better scene i've ever seen I feel you around me all the time The light that guides me a warm arm on a cold night a whisper on a silent night That's you to me, unbreakeable. Ariadna Squire Damique (29/10/2008) --- This one has been influenced by DF's song Broken, it can be noticied for the title, pretty similar. :) Btw i had begun two poems, and have some other ideas but i haven't had finished them yet. Currently there's an idea in mind, to call next poem: Mes Peines Du Coeur, but i don't really how the poem will be like and i have no clue why i'd like to name it like that, :freak: (may be is due to too much BB listening :wacko: ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nihcoldplay Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 Ari, keep on wiriting your poems, (Un)Break(able) is sooo sweet :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 23, 2008 Share Posted November 23, 2008 thanks Afi, Chavi, David and Anita :nice: i've written a couple more poems but i'd like to improve them a bit before to post them and i find them a bit too similar as the last ones.. :\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 Forever, long ago and still Here i am, although time has gone on i'm yet stuck on the same square i tried it didn't break me down but i can't avoid to feel so low 3 years has gone and here i still miss you so deep in my hearts i still feel you near i know you won't leave me but you are not beside me anymore it makes me sad and frigthened i'm all on my own to walk alone now what if i fall? what if i'm wrong? you won't be there to catch me? you won't be there to smile at me? do i'll be right for you? i hope i will do i force myself to it all, i doubt i did? all i did, all i wanted, all i am is just for you, to make you smile is just to make you feel proud is just to thank you all your help still i miss you so, you are with me not as you used to, but i still feel you near wishes and hopes, you only know now but it still has a bitter memory, i miss you still the wounds are opened still i fear those memories those things that made me grow in a rush it brings me to tears, it slows me but i'll keep fighting i'll keep walking, for you i'll keep working, for your smile for i know you'll be always beside me cause i did promised myself that day i will never let you alone i will make you feel proud for is just the only way i have now long ago you tought me to walk still you catched me when i felt you tought me to grow up long ago you showed me what's wrong and right still you helped me when i felt down you were my reason why i smile to thank you all you've done for me to keep you be beside me be happy for me, the tears of joy will come of that i'm sure, i'll be forever with you. Ariadna Squire Damique (06/01/2009) Ok, this has been around those last days, it was meant to be posted some days later, but here i go. I hadn't written anything new since long ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 Quiet Days Nobody remember how it begun Nobody noticies how it feels Nobody is sure of it are we right, ar we wrong? Who can help us now? When we feel so low when we everything is so slow Those just are days time that goes on that we can't stop fill it with things to do just a word can make it right just a sight can break it all the weak castles we build up where we are kings for a day after working hard, what for? before a new day, since how long? are we stuck, in this little place no borders, but yet feeling we are in jail Those just are days time that goes on that we can't stop fill it with things to do time has chosen us, time has stopped us days, minutes, days, years in the middle we are trying to understand what we can't who cares, who noticies it? just we live our life right or wrong we don't mind we are surfing on this sea Those just are days time that goes on that we can't stop fill it with things to do trying not to fail trying to escape this jail trying to make it different trying to be ourselves but we can't, we can't now cause we don't care we don't help each other we just walk, direction unknown and here i am watching, quiet looking everyone in this maze and yet it amazes me, how it is how nobody noticies that day Ariadna Squire Damique (05/02/2009) well, not the best one ever, but taking into account that i hadn't had written many new stuff since weeks ago... :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 28, 2009 Share Posted February 28, 2009 Through sitting, wondering yourself what do you think now? where do your beliefs have gone? how far have you got? feeling unsuccessful, feeling down so slow you act, you don't move just you murmur in low voice about yourself, through what you've got the more you tried the less you got that's your thought now, you are wrong not is over to wake up and open up your eyes not is late to let the light comes in again nothing you can change, you think now thinking is too late to move, but who knows wake up and keep fighting, keep hope how easy sand castles are broken down how hard is to build it all how sad is do it all alone when you can't have someone to rely on when you can't cry out all your pain don't waste time moaning just get up and work hard try to change it all, try your best poor are the ones who never try seeing your past, what you've been through all your mistakes and prizes, in a shelf it resume all you've got, are you sure mate? cheer up and smile, keep hope soon the sun will shine again stop feeling down, take out your pain leave your weight and start once more not all us can do it alone stop looking through the dark glass change your view, it does no harm just try it all again, bring the joy to you all we get, is all we fight for Ariadna Squire Damique (28/02/2009) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Hill Posted February 28, 2009 Share Posted February 28, 2009 That's nice Ari =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 28, 2009 Share Posted February 28, 2009 That's nice Ari =P :blush: thanks dani, although normally after writing them i feel better, i don't feel any better now :\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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