Byron369 Posted December 20, 2006 Share Posted December 20, 2006 IMPLEMENTATION My dream came true And I'm crying. My dream I was hiding Only in fear of its dissolvement, It came true. And I'm crying. Everything had calmly and slowly Then again abruptly and quickly, Come to its place. I've lost my walls, My shame's become an addle intruder In the purigitory of elite hopes. Everything came true. I'm crying. Maybe I shoud've continued hoping, And maybe it would've been better if my dreams hadn't disappear As the sorrow I scorned As the sorrow from which I was running Maybe the sorrow... Maybe a new dream has formed right here. I am happy. And I am crying for the Sorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted December 21, 2006 Share Posted December 21, 2006 ^I love it! a great poem, deep and beautiful, really! *coming tears* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted December 21, 2006 Share Posted December 21, 2006 Miro.. that's so... wow..! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 My last one It's called Me For You A couple of nights ago, You were the one I saw. The stream of my thoughts Are reaching your lost boat. Stealing your little heart, I try to fix most of the slivers Making you feel less shattered, Let me be your light. Do you want me to be The love and the light you need? My eyes would be your sea, And your harbour would be my body. My life is what I want to give, I wear my heart on my sleeve, And I still think, I want to live, This love, more than anything, You know it, I really believe, In this strong feeling. My heart's with you, My love's only for you. Do you want me to be The love and the light you need? My eyes would be your sea, And your harbour would be my body. You for me, me for you And the sky became blue Again, the birds flew, Forgetting all what was new, I love you, that's all I knew. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oenona Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 Mike, i couldn't avoid to log on in to read your poem!! beautiful!:blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 ^Thx a lot Iris!!:kiss: :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 My last one, a Christmas Present... Sent to my lover! It's called Me For You A couple of nights ago, You were the one I saw. The stream of my thoughts Are reaching your lost boat. Stealing your little heart, I try to fix most of the slivers Making you feel less shattered, Let me be your light. Do you want me to be The love and the light you need? My eyes would be your sea, And your harbour would be my body. My life is what I want to give, I wear my heart on my sleeve, And I still think, I want to live, This love, more than anything, You know it, I really believe, In this strong feeling. My heart's with you, My love's only for you. Do you want me to be The love and the light you need? My eyes would be your sea, And your harbour would be my body. You for me, me for you And the sky became blue Again, the birds flew, Forgetting all what was new, I love you, that's all I knew. :) (no comments) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 My last one, written today... It's about this messy Christmas... (sorry for depressing anyone... ) It's called Revenge The unforgiven lies are making my life, The hidden words I'm fighting against, Those words are swords, causing me pains I want to kill them with a rifle. And again, they cracked that scar, That deep scar in my wounded heart. Why pretending all's ok, all's right When you see those well-known lights Disappearing, fading away like, The day, taken over by the night? My revenge will be the heavy silence Of each of my screaming thoughts I won't let them any chance, I'm going to make their boats Sinking like stones in the sea, No matter where I'll be. I'll dig the furrows of my anger, Spreading them anywhere, Taking anyone in the lethal tides They could never reach the sides, Lost in the ocean of my angry feeling They won't even hear the bell ringing. Why pretending all's ok, all's right When you see those well-known lights Disappearing, fading away like, The day, taken over by the night? I hear the breath of the anger, Telling me nothing will be better, Maybe it's weird, maybe it'll change But this is my revenge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 ^ Again...you've outdone yourself =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anna111 Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 :stunned: That's amazing/brilliant!!!!! Good job Mike!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicko84 Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 @ mick: bravo:)....as usual.....Sometimes xmas puts out the reality of your life and of your REAL relations with people and your friends.......if you're alone, or not! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted December 27, 2006 Share Posted December 27, 2006 Well, I guess it's time for me to post a poem then. The past is put on hold Press to play I guess you can tell me All the things that I didn't know today I'm quite insecure of what you told before Can't find out if I wanna hear things anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted December 27, 2006 Share Posted December 27, 2006 ^ Confusing & weird & nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted December 28, 2006 Share Posted December 28, 2006 Very nice Elsje! ^^^ thx for your comments guys/girls! A new one... I started it yesterday evening, and I just finished it... It's called Silent Cries Those words you said to me, Still echoe in my head, so sweetly. No one told me this before you No one told me "I love you". You did, and my loneliness is breaking, You did, and my heart is flying. Each time you leave my heart cries quietly, Breaking like crystal, sinking in the sea, Feeling like my world's collapsing, while, Inside, I'm releasing my silent cries. Fortunately, everyday, you come back, Like the sun chase away the dark. I feel like I'm finding all the slivers I was losing while you weren't here. My heart's alive, beating for you, For you, I'd sing my love out. Each time you leave my heart cries quietly, Breaking like crystal, sinking in the sea, Feeling like my world's collapsing, while, Inside, I'm releasing my silent cries. Walking on the path of our lives, Holding hands, love'll make us alive No matter the distance, No matter how the world will be You are my lovely chance, I want to be with you, honey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted December 28, 2006 Share Posted December 28, 2006 ^ Oh...nice one =) Here's mine. I SMILE You do not know How I feel. every time I see my Reflection in the mirror is every time I see Someone else. Someone stranger Someone older Someone weirder Someone. New Someone. Else You do not know The power of hatred I carry The power of void I live with so do not say I will change. People do not change. I do not change. You simply do not know me enough. I think I never was in Love But I know My Love is for you. I smile every time I recall the memory of your eyes I smile when I see your lips But You do not know how I feel. Because I will sacrifice for You. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted December 28, 2006 Share Posted December 28, 2006 ^beautiful, I really love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted December 28, 2006 Share Posted December 28, 2006 Course you do :smug: :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 I've found yesterday a beautiful poem...it's not mine, but it's as good :D It reminded me of someone very special :) Njoy! Intertwined call me with your name and turn around with my move let me watch you with your eyes and don't forget that you hug with my arms Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sunshine Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 i really liked the one you wrote "Byron369" maybe you'll win something as good as an oscar oneday :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 Thank you :blush: (I hope I will =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 oh my god, I love it! really beautiful!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 ^ I knew you would :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 Inspired by sad events, inspired by Snow Patrol. Distrust I thought that you were a good friend I got Yesterday you showed me that you're obviously not Tears came out and they burned my face You could have at least try to trust me or embrace You didn't know but you stepped on my little heart I should have known that this would happen From the start Can you remember how we where? Do you see me or just a screen with blur? All these questions make my head ache I wonder why you are doing this to me Did I make a mistake? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 ^ You didn't make mistake by writting this. It's amazing! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Li_cold Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 Wow!!! Mike, Miro and Elsje you guys are revealing yourselves as trully poets!Very, very good!Loved them!Good job! :thumbsup: And Elsje, hope you get well soon, lovely lady! :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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