SaraEve41 Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 [inspired by the words of a flower] i turned to him and said 'we should be wolves' he cocked his head and said 'i'm listening' i pelted him with my fists frustrated with the way he feigned ignorance at my most passionate desires not foxes who dart among the forest stealthy as hummingbird wings quiet geminis cute one minute perfectly capable of taking off a limb not coyotes with their feral ways their song privy only to those who worship moonlight and cunning silhouettes i want to be a wolf i tell him narrowing my eyes and stalk the earth create my own landscape paint it grey with my pelt and red with my need for survival i want us to truly live to fall off the cycle to abandon i want to howl all you can do is bark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 Another leet work Catch Everybody's doing it more or less just ruining it leaving mess Some say it's a need others say it's bad what they don't heed but in the end, they're all sad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bright Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 I wrote this during a history lesson in school, and it's in swedish hehe :wacko: sorry but it wont be be funny or make much sense if I translate it so I hope that you all will go and learn swedish now so you can read it :nice: Hitler var en man som inte vann Han var ingen hunk utan bodde i en bunk(er) Tog sitt liv gjorde han där och nu finns han inte mär :laugh3: I made a nice little drawing to this poem but I wont post it since it might offend some people :laugh2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 nice poems!!^^ here an other one... called Path of my mind I am walking in the night But my feelings hold me tight They know I can't fight They are always getting it right They make me so confuse So confuse that I can't choose If I accept or if I refuse If I win or if I lose. I see all these dead-ending roads There are the problems I try to solve And the future I have to build Cos I can't see further, there's no bridge Which way should I choose, or turn? What will it do back to me in return? Right or wrong, real or fake I wish to be in a dream, I'll awake. My feelings are a bunch of wild animals I know it and they are out of control I can hear them, everyday, looking for answers About their goals, their own existence, and they share All they know, about me and my whole life They are here, waiting for me to dive Into this deep dark fog, but they call it future I'm scared but I have to do it for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeoir Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 Bahah. Sofia, i actually understand some parts of it :lol: Funnyy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 I wrote this during a history lesson in school, and it's in swedish hehe :wacko: sorry but it wont be be funny or make much sense if I translate it so I hope that you all will go and learn swedish now so you can read it :nice: Hitler var en man som inte vann Han var ingen hunk utan bodde i en bunk(er) Tog sitt liv gjorde han där och nu finns han inte mär :laugh3: I made a nice little drawing to this poem but I wont post it since it might offend some people :laugh2: I think I understood the first sentence...now I know what your topic in your history lessons is..:wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bright Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 haha good on ya gal :laugh3: we were watching a boring movie about da man :sick: so I wrote that sucky poem :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 haha good on ya gal :laugh3: we were watching a boring movie about da man :sick: so I wrote that sucky poem :P Oh well...I have history major course...and we watched sooo many films about him.......I think it is interesting...OK OK I'm a german...:thinking: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bright Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 haha yeah I have seen many movies about him too through my years of school, and they are all just the same :disappointed: ah well bye now :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 Stop smaping god damnit! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bright Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 Please forgive us, master. :sleep: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 Very well, but do it no more, this thread is for deep emotional expression, not for chit-chat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 a new one. Called Tell you Guide me to your eyes Show me what I can't realize I beg you to tell me How much you love me Because you're so far from me I'm missing your smile and I see Your eyes, giving me love. I hope to dream about you You help me to get through Your words are touching me so I want you to know The truth, what I think about you It's so easy to write it, hard to tell it I wait for us to meet Will it be only a dream? In my deepest mind, I know You're like a wild wind You're hidding behind the sun' glow I'd like to talk to you Tell you my hopes my fears The things I can't get through. My heart is screaming your name He waits to be tamed, without being ashamed You're my guide, my only guide But you don't know I exist... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted August 17, 2006 Author Share Posted August 17, 2006 I'm sorry for when I make you cry drink me down, please in a fit of love I'm down to my knees drink my love to soothe the inside of you, sweet estrella and fail you I will never, no in a fit of love I'm down to my knees drink me down, please wither you should never whether our promises last forever you can always break me and chocolate milkshake me or, no every lie I've told is for, but not to you but when I break the promises I make if I am a real mistake break me break free in a fit of love I'm down to my knees drink me down, please how can I describe an angel when that's who you are I'm your demon-lover-boy and we fight sometimes when God split the red sea that's how we describe lolle goddess, bourne of dirt from my womb, though it doesn't hurt until your absence in a fit of love hurt happens in a fit of God, you if I had a choice I'd be sweet to dissolve as we meet honestly I'm more like dirt I beg you, let me dissolve in your water crowned goddess of my soul have me, you make me mud every moment you open up I would give up my life, my sun to be wrapped in your fold you're my sun colorful lolle, clay is in your hold I'll make you hurt we know, because I'm dirt but one promise, forever in a fit of love I'm down to my knees drink me down, please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 ^I love your poem! it means a lot for me!! a new one... called Walking through the cold rain This person I can't stop to love This life I wait for it to begin These memories I can't switch off All those bells which can't stop to ring. Walking through the cold rain I want to put off these heavy chains Running in a timeless cycle I wonder when I'll wake up. Those things I'm worried about The way I can help me to shout I want to put it all away I can be hated, I can't be blamed. Walking through the cold rain I stare at the sky, in vain Living in a meaningless world Nothing can describe this, any word. Those feelings I'm invaded by Make me feel insecure and shy I try to find an answer, an option, To all those silly questions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
janhaw Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 A friend of mine wrote this poem. “525 600 минут.” The suns are weeping in the night; They have lost their everlasting fight- (Still- they claim they were right!) And the silent moons are thrown away- As they sway, as they sway. See the stars twinkle upon the sky! Listen to an angel play his sweet cor anglais! You know, once we all must die- As we sway, as we sway... Sleep with flowers, kiss the fire- Do what you would never dare! Look at the stars- forming a choir- Who will care? Will you care? As we are trapped in the symphony’s destructive lust; (We cannot escape, no!, no way!) Our lives lost between the pages three and four Left us with no dreams as our faces burn to dust, (As we sway, as we sway...) Drunken on the sea, without any solid shore... Painted music will always remain there, mute and dead. There will be no past to call for help instead- Our eyes will bleed, and our hands will turn to stone. And the sea will remain forever grey. We will stay all alone As we sway, as we sway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bright Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 :shy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lore Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 :blush: nice poem aifos :blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 21, 2006 Share Posted August 21, 2006 her you've got a special one, I'll give it to a girl i fall in love with... it's called In Love I've waited in front of the sea It gave me an unexpected opportunity You appeared, just in front of me Like an angel, coming out of the sea. I needed to tell you so much How much my heart is beating For you, and in me, love is such a rush You're a cure, my mind stops aching. This is a great feeling I can't keep It's like a secret travelling in me It makes my heart racing everyday Waiting for you is all I've done until today. Love invaded me so quickly I just let it do it, I feel so peaceful Now, you're all what I need Since I've got you in my soul. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marianatsl Posted August 21, 2006 Share Posted August 21, 2006 I'm sorry for when I make you cry drink me down, please in a fit of love I'm down to my knees drink my love to soothe the inside of you, sweet estrella and fail you I will never, no in a fit of love I'm down to my knees drink me down, please wither you should never whether our promises last forever you can always break me and chocolate milkshake me or, no every lie I've told is for, but not to you but when I break the promises I make if I am a real mistake break me break free in a fit of love I'm down to my knees drink me down, please how can I describe an angel when that's who you are I'm your demon-lover-boy and we fight sometimes when God split the red sea that's how we describe lolle goddess, bourne of dirt from my womb, though it doesn't hurt until your absence in a fit of love hurt happens in a fit of God, you if I had a choice I'd be sweet to dissolve as we meet honestly I'm more like dirt I beg you, let me dissolve in your water crowned goddess of my soul have me, you make me mud every moment you open up I would give up my life, my sun to be wrapped in your fold you're my sun colorful lolle, clay is in your hold I'll make you hurt we know, because I'm dirt but one promise, forever in a fit of love I'm down to my knees drink me down, please erico... :stunned: i love it... sorry i didnt read it yesterday... :nice: :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted August 21, 2006 Author Share Posted August 21, 2006 Weird Lizard weird lizard ____________ I made you a love pom (from one lizard to another lizard) if you fall through the crack catch your rib, give you heart attack I love you, I cry because crack make you die if I lit a cigarette in the gas chamber to smoke it your redemption catches my eye's attention and love I open up show my intestine my heart you tore me apart I return to her that which, to my love to push, to shove that which, to those above will win your wonder my heart beats, all of it ______________________ whistle while you work a cement block: plucks the heart strings of my soul this beautiful green plastic ring will you marry me? the point is when you gave me the pearls of a caribbean clam trapped within its golden mansion that's when I decided, I hate you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 A new one... written in 20 mins... after arguing with one of my friends... who isn't a friend anymore... Called You can't Here I'm talking You've got to know something You see I've changed But you don't understand. My old "me" was unaware It wasn't real, it was unfair I stroke all what the others knew About me, I'm someone new. What the matter with you? Can't you stand the fact I'm not the same as in the past And what? What are you gonna do? I wanted to change Not to be the same I didn't show my real "me" And now, you'll see it. You can't bear I'm apart This is something you don't have to care Why are you minding my own buisiness? Let me be all I am, this isn't an illness. Maybe you didn't want me to change. But I changed for me, not for you. I feel good, now, standing on the bridge, Ready to jump? I'm! You're not... true? You're afraid, that's what I see Afraid of who I'm, who I'll be You can't be in my place Definitely, you're not in my maze. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted August 25, 2006 Author Share Posted August 25, 2006 an ode to m'lady bob falling in love with a woman named bob made me lose my important job because my boss said "that's so bull! it's not a girl, you're a homosexual" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 ^Wow!! does it really happen to you? this is called The end It runs beside the abyss, it can't get back It tries to reach the stars, to leave the dark I can see it forgetting its fears and it starts to fight It grows, out of control, ful of sparks. It strikes all I belived in, and more It rows my whole "me" ashore The surface is burning next to me It takes my very last memory. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
editor Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 Wow, the poems in this threat are really fantastic. Well, this is one of my attempts: The stars are watching expectantly, The wind rush’s through the darkness - gone, And even silence creeps into the soil Of a fragile orb that cracks under the weight of wounds. Only ravenous time hovers above the ground. Despair freezing their movements - Tension focused on the moment. Hope invades their veins And blood regains its cordiality. But time ticks their lives away. Their hearts are drowning out numbed and weary Their enemies fiendish smirk. All eyes fixed on the locked horizon It’s eastwards they are gleaming, But time has dazzled their sight. A distant spark and suddenly there’s Freedom. Beams of light unveil a million. Bright heat melts their invisible prison Healing the scars of an itching past. Embracing time, they walk into the world at last. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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