Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 30, 2005 Share Posted April 30, 2005 an eggplant?.. let me think.. which poem could be.. was a poem about carnival? :thinking: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted April 30, 2005 Share Posted April 30, 2005 Nah, it's not. Well if you're interested I'll look it up in the book, I'm pretty sure that there's a name of the author. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted April 30, 2005 Share Posted April 30, 2005 Oh btw I think girl's name is Ines, I might be wrong though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 30, 2005 Share Posted April 30, 2005 oh, it's a popular song... "inés, inés, inesita inés".. have a line like this? :idea2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted April 30, 2005 Share Posted April 30, 2005 Nah, and it's a poem not a song. I'll see who wrote it in morning. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 30, 2005 Share Posted April 30, 2005 ok. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted May 1, 2005 Share Posted May 1, 2005 Mkay I found it. It's Baltazar del Alcazar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted June 14, 2005 Share Posted June 14, 2005 Yesterday i can't sleep, wo i woke up an wrote this. Is in spanish. (I'll try to translate it into english soon). Cuando todo acabe Acabó ya el tiempo en que reías alegre acabaron los días que iluminaban tu risa. Todo quedó atrás sin remedio y rumbo deviste avanzar hacia ningún lugar. Ya no quedan lágrimas por derramar, y ahora tu alma no puede serguir. Paraste cansada a reposar tras un largo caminar que acaba en ningún lugar. Quedaste atrapada en el tiempo entre el día y la noche entre luces y sombras trastaste avanzar en vano. Repentinamente hayaste el modo de seguir adelante, quizás pero ya era tarde, pensaste. Esa mirada te llenó te dijo tanto sin hablar y ambos lo supisteis ninguno luchó en contra. El tiempo ha pasado y debes volver a tu lugar pero no puedes volver ahora no quieres luchar más Es tarde para volver es tarde para seguir lágrimas y lágrimas te mecen y de adormeces. Le ves a tu lado os véis juntos y felices pasaron los años veloces y seguís siendo felices. De pronto despiertas y amarga descubres que sólo fue un sueño dulce e irreal quimera. Sólo fue una sombra que aparecía en la noche y se marchaba al despertar. Ariadna Squire Damique (13/06/05 Monday night) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 28, 2005 Share Posted July 28, 2005 I need i need a shoulder where to lye my head on i need a warm voice to make me calm me down i need a shoulder where to cry on tonight i feel i can't go on alone i'll feeling too cold i don't feel any warm i can't go on like this i don't know what to do i can't decide alone i don't know which way to choose and i must decide one now i can't have any help from anybody else than me i can't ran away today i need a warm voice to help me to find all the questions that i have on my head since time ago or my brain will explode 'cause i'm not good today 'cause i need to decide now i'm feelind too cold to do it myself can anybody help, please? i got no answers today and tomorrow i'll have to go all are echoes on my head echoes that make me feel i'm in the middle of this big hole chaos, it's earing me i can't decide it by myself, friend come on and help me may be cry make me any help please come and listen me i was here to help you all this time i was here please come on and do the same to me i'm feeling so sad this night i'm afraid to see the daylight may be i'm still blind to see all the truth i'm looking for alone come and sit down with me help me to go on alone show me the right way i must choose today Ariadna Squire Damique (28/07/2005) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reilly Posted July 28, 2005 Share Posted July 28, 2005 "i need a warm voice to make me calm me down i need a shoulder where to cry on tonight " That was my favourite part, the whole thing was very good. Its your best poem that I've read, I really liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 28, 2005 Share Posted July 28, 2005 thanks a lot reilly. :) i'm feeling like the poem says to may be that's why is better i don't know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted July 28, 2005 Share Posted July 28, 2005 I really liked that poem Ari! Especially stanza 3-6 because I can kind of relate to them :/ Glad you posted another poem! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 28, 2005 Share Posted July 28, 2005 thanks a lot fifi. i'm happy to post a new one too. i wanted to post more but i didn't found the thread... :confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LiquidSky Posted July 28, 2005 Share Posted July 28, 2005 Well I liked the spanish one ;) although I don't know what "serguir" is...? :huh: to continue? :huh: Whatever it means, I liked the poem :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 28, 2005 Share Posted July 28, 2005 thanks a lot josce. sorry i think i wrote it mistaken.. well i also write english mistaken so.. sorry :embarrased: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LiquidSky Posted July 28, 2005 Share Posted July 28, 2005 aww don't worry about it Ari ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakfast_of_CHAMPION Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 beautiful poem ari! Thank you for sharing it with us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ireentje Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 Wow Ari, nice one :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 Ari, what a great poem. Great imagery throughout. :) Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 thanks a lot Mary, Irene and Aaron. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 You are welcome Ari :) I'll be reading the rest while I am at work today. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 ok no problem aaron, thanks a lot friend. :) :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
°°°Morning°Glory°°° Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 Absolutely Coldplay, Ari. Chris could write something like that... :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 :blush: thank you very very much There :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnny_t Posted August 3, 2005 Share Posted August 3, 2005 wow these poem really made me feel like all the ppl who reach out for the one who completes them and secure them it was really beautiful i mean it i read three times now listenin to goodbye my lover for james blunt and it made a magical atmosphere thx alot for this great poem and thx for lettin me know that u wrote this new poem :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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