an eggplant?.. let me think.. which poem could be.. was a poem about carnival? :thinking:

Nah, it's not.

Well if you're interested I'll look it up in the book, I'm pretty sure that there's a name of the author.

Oh btw I think girl's name is Ines, I might be wrong though.

oh, it's a popular song... "inés, inés, inesita inés".. have a line like this? :idea2:

Nah, and it's a poem not a song.

I'll see who wrote it in morning. :)

ok. ;)

Mkay I found it.

It's Baltazar del Alcazar.

Yesterday i can't sleep, wo i woke up an wrote this. Is in spanish. (I'll try to translate it into english soon).

 

Cuando todo acabe

 

Acabó ya el tiempo

en que reías alegre

acabaron los días

que iluminaban tu risa.

 

Todo quedó atrás

sin remedio y rumbo

deviste avanzar

hacia ningún lugar.

 

Ya no quedan lágrimas

por derramar, y ahora

tu alma no puede serguir.

 

Paraste cansada a reposar

tras un largo caminar

que acaba en ningún lugar.

 

Quedaste atrapada en el tiempo

entre el día y la noche

entre luces y sombras

trastaste avanzar en vano.

 

Repentinamente hayaste el modo

de seguir adelante, quizás

pero ya era tarde, pensaste.

 

Esa mirada te llenó

te dijo tanto sin hablar

y ambos lo supisteis

ninguno luchó en contra.

 

El tiempo ha pasado

y debes volver a tu lugar

pero no puedes volver ahora

no quieres luchar más

 

Es tarde para volver

es tarde para seguir

lágrimas y lágrimas te mecen

y de adormeces.

 

Le ves a tu lado

os véis juntos y felices

pasaron los años veloces

y seguís siendo felices.

 

De pronto despiertas

y amarga descubres

que sólo fue un sueño

dulce e irreal quimera.

 

Sólo fue una sombra

que aparecía en la noche

y se marchaba al despertar.

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

(13/06/05 Monday night)

I need

i need a shoulder

where to lye my head on

i need a warm voice

to make me calm me down

i need a shoulder

where to cry on tonight

 

i feel i can't go on alone

i'll feeling too cold

i don't feel any warm

i can't go on like this

 

i don't know what to do

i can't decide alone

i don't know

which way to choose

 

and i must decide one now

i can't have any help

from anybody else than me

i can't ran away today

 

i need a warm voice

to help me to find

all the questions that i have

on my head since time ago

 

or my brain will explode

'cause i'm not good today

'cause i need to decide now

 

i'm feelind too cold

to do it myself

can anybody help, please?

 

i got no answers today

and tomorrow i'll have to go

all are echoes on my head

 

echoes that make me feel

i'm in the middle of this

big hole chaos, it's earing me

 

i can't decide it

by myself, friend

come on and help me

 

may be cry make me any help

please come and listen me

i was here to help you

all this time i was here

 

please come on and

do the same to me

i'm feeling so sad this night

 

i'm afraid to see the daylight

may be i'm still blind

to see all the truth

i'm looking for alone

 

come and sit down with me

help me to go on alone

show me the right way

i must choose today

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

(28/07/2005)

"i need a warm voice

to make me calm me down

i need a shoulder

where to cry on tonight "

 

That was my favourite part, the whole thing was very good. Its your best poem that I've read, I really liked it.

thanks a lot reilly. :) i'm feeling like the poem says to may be that's why is better i don't know.

I really liked that poem Ari! Especially stanza 3-6 because I can kind of relate to them :/

Glad you posted another poem! ;)

thanks a lot fifi. i'm happy to post a new one too. i wanted to post more but i didn't found the thread... :confused:

Well I liked the spanish one ;) although I don't know what "serguir" is...? :huh: to continue? :huh: Whatever it means, I liked the poem :D

thanks a lot josce. sorry i think i wrote it mistaken.. well i also write english mistaken so.. sorry :embarrased:

aww don't worry about it Ari ;)

beautiful poem ari! Thank you for sharing it with us.

Wow Ari, nice one :)

Ari, what a great poem. Great imagery throughout. :) Thank you.

thanks a lot Mary, Irene and Aaron. ;)

You are welcome Ari :) I'll be reading the rest while I am at work today. Thanks.

ok no problem aaron, thanks a lot friend. :) :kiss:

Absolutely Coldplay, Ari. Chris could write something like that... :)

:blush: thank you very very much There :kiss:

wow these poem really made me feel like all the ppl who reach out for the one who completes them and secure them

it was really beautiful i mean it

i read three times now listenin to goodbye my lover for james blunt and it made a magical atmosphere

thx alot for this great poem

and thx for lettin me know that u wrote this new poem :)