Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 3, 2005 Share Posted August 3, 2005 :blush: thanks to you for taking your time to read it yanni ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnny_t Posted August 3, 2005 Share Posted August 3, 2005 :) really np keep them comin my friend ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 3, 2005 Share Posted August 3, 2005 i'll do. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 15, 2005 Share Posted August 15, 2005 Your false came back you came back again like a shadow and are flying over my head all this time you were hidding on the shadows looking at me with you deep red eyes i thought you were lost all this time i didn't had news from you then you come here again and you laugh on my face why you came here today? what you want from me now? you just came here and laugh at me like you used to do i know you lied me all this time you came here just to have fun when i needed you you never were there to help when you needed me i always was there to listen you everyday why you came back again? i know you'll do the same you come here and get what you want then you'll go away i won't wait you more i don't want anything from you i won't talk to you anymore years has passed and you still do the same looking at me from a shadow sitting on your chair looking if i fall off again and laugh on my face you seem more older than me now and you are still on your bubble looking the world round you i called to you again and there's not anwser i needed you and you weren't there then there's nothing to do now you are crying now like a baby pretending you are deeply sad now and i know you lied me again your tears were the biggest i saw but i still know that in your heart you are laughing at me again you came to visit me for the last time crying and wearing a black dress your eyes are red as usual there's too late to change now i won't believe anymore anything you will say to me i know will not be true you just came to my last walk to pretend you were friend of mine i know you always lied at me i thought you'll change one day but this day never came and now is too late i won't be here anymore and your heart still said me you are not sad cause it what will you do now? which muppet will you find now? you broke that doll what will you do tomorrow? which one will you lie again? Ariadna Squire Damique (15/08/2005) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingtoseehere Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 Beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnny_t Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 Adri i got to ask u this where do u come up with these poems? i mean really? wt do u feel when u write these poems? especially this one i liked the last part where he came in a black suit pretendin he is ur friend when the charecter in the story died and left that bastard who was laughin at her like this i mean in this poem did u feel angry? agressive? sad? or somethin completely else? if this is a personal question then sorry for askin :( just ignore my question Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 :embarrased: beautiful but so sad :embarrased: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 thanks a lot pai, yanni and fifi. yanni no problem, you can ask everything you want. well i was a bit angry with a friend yesterday... we don't use to talk a lot, the last time we talked we ended arguing about the nick i had on my msn, so that's why this poem come up. once i was anrgy with a friend time ago i wrote a poem similar like this, but that's life you know life is a lot of feelings, good and bad feeling and everyday is different, i don't only write love poems as you see. :) my friend just like my love poems :/ but i think both are as good as the other, don't you think? don't make you feel the same the poem is about when you read it? so that's poetry too. :) and remember yesterday i was a bit angry too because i had a terrible headache all the day :cry: and i'm reading some horror and mystery stories by Allan Poe. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 Ari, your new poem is haunting and dark. I like it very very much. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnny_t Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 thanks a lot pai, yanni and fifi. yanni no problem, you can ask everything you want. well i was a bit angry with a friend yesterday... we don't use to talk a lot, the last time we talked we ended arguing about the nick i had on my msn, so that's why this poem come up. once i was anrgy with a friend time ago i wrote a poem similar like this, but that's life you know life is a lot of feelings, good and bad feeling and everyday is different, i don't only write love poems as you see. :) my friend just like my love poems :/ but i think both are as good as the other, don't you think? don't make you feel the same the poem is about when you read it? so that's poetry too. :) and remember yesterday i was a bit angry too because i had a terrible headache all the day :cry: and i'm reading some horror and mystery stories by Allan Poe. :) i knew it :P u was angry well Ari my friend any poem that shakes ur feelings and emotions is a briliant poem, no need to be a love poem i hope u get better from ur headaches and sorry to hear that u are arguin witha friend of urs about a stupid nick name :/ have u ever writen a poem that u regretted? i know it sounds wiered, but maybe some ppl write down stuff and then when they read it, they feel foolish for feelin like this or writin this poem well for example when i used to write a diary(ages ago :P ) i sometimes was surprised of wt i wrote and i was scarin myself hehe but i learned one thing that it is good to write down how u feel no matter how hard it is...i donnu y i stopped writin diarys :S ah well great poem :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 thanks a lot aaron --------- thanks a lot yanni. well i prefer to write it and don't really argue with my friend, she said me something i didn't like how it sounded that was all and now she wants to be in contact with me again and i stil remember the last time we talked so i feel she has changed a lot and is not the same girl i knew :/ that's sad, so i felt like she lied me all this time. thanks a lot, seems i have no headache today. well sometimes when i re-read an old poems i wrote i think 'how i could wrote this?' sometimes cause is a bit weird and sometimes cause is too good to me mine lol but i go on and it make me feel the same of what the poem is about and so i think that's the thing of a poem make you feel anything and if it make me feel the same that what the poem is about, years ago it means is a good one, so i never destroy any poem of mine even when i was tempted to, cause it hink this, it at least makes me feel something so it works. but i don't use to re-read very often, i used to do it time ago and i used to change them later so that's why i don't re-read them. :) i used to write a diary years ago but not now i don't know what to say.. but at least some blogs works like a diary to me so.. well i still write a diary sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reilly Posted August 17, 2005 Share Posted August 17, 2005 Ari I just saw your PM The poem is very beautiful, as always, I can relate to it. Im gonna read it again tomorow cuz I have to go right now, I'll seeya later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 ok reilly thanks a lot. ;) i listened your band, is cool i'm going to download more songs soon. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 If i cry now If i cry now it'll be for you because i'll miss you loads but doing it, i'll remember you that's a weird thing i know but there's what i can do now if i cry alone today everybody will think i'm fool i don't mind about it now those words have a meaning now i'm sure i will miss you loads i didn't expected to lose you that soon i'm sure you'll be doing fine oh my, were you who tried to cheer me up and now i still have your nice words in my memory and i'll have them always because that song have a meaning now it will make me cry i don't mind if i'm a fool is cause i miss you loads i didn't expect to be like this but today i feel i lose a part of me i know you'll be doing fine but nothing will be the same without you i told you how i feel the last time we talked but there's nothing i can do now just wish you the best and keep the good moments we had i don't mind now if i cry like a fool all the day but i will miss you loads dear friend, i wish you the best Ariadna Squire Damique (wednesday 24/08/2005) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lore Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 that's a nice poem.. but sad... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 thanks a lot loreto :D i know it's sad, but not all writing have to be happy i think :) well i noticied most of my poems are a bit or too sad :confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 Wow Ari. Beautiful and sad. I really enjoyed reading that. Thanks much :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*Jess* Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 That poem is beautiful Ari,so sad. :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 thanks a lot aaron and jess, i was feeling very sad when i wrote it :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 Sometimes sadness helps us create beautiful things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 yes i know, it helped me to feel better later. :) i guess the person who the poem is about won't know it was 'cause him/her :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 That is usually the case. Your writing seems to be a good emotional outlet for you Ari ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 yes luckily it makes me good, i mean may be some writers write a sad poem and are more sad later :stunned: well when i read them later it make me feel (even years later) how i was feeling, and what the poem is about :) so that's sad or happy. :D i also have lovely happy poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 I know you have happy poems to :) It's good to have a wide array of emotional poems. I really like reading your work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 :blush: thanks a lot aaron. :) but i still think i have to do some courses to improve it. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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