:blush: thanks to you for taking your time to read it yanni ;)

:) really np

 

keep them comin my friend ;)

i'll do. ;)

Your false came back

 

you came back again

like a shadow

and are flying

over my head

 

all this time

you were hidding

on the shadows

looking at me with

you deep red eyes

 

i thought you were lost

all this time i didn't had news from you

then you come here again

and you laugh on my face

 

why you came here today?

what you want from me now?

you just came here and laugh at me

like you used to do

 

i know you lied me all this time

you came here just to have fun

when i needed you

you never were there to help

 

when you needed me

i always was there

to listen you everyday

why you came back again?

 

i know you'll do the same

you come here

and get what you want

then you'll go away

 

i won't wait you more

i don't want anything from you

i won't talk to you anymore

 

years has passed

and you still do the same

looking at me from a shadow

sitting on your chair

looking if i fall off again

and laugh on my face

 

you seem more older than me now

and you are still on your bubble

looking the world round you

i called to you again and there's not anwser

 

i needed you and you weren't there

then there's nothing to do now

you are crying now like a baby

pretending you are deeply sad now

 

and i know you lied me again

your tears were the biggest i saw

but i still know that

in your heart you are laughing at me again

 

you came to visit me for the last time

crying and wearing a black dress

your eyes are red as usual

there's too late to change now

 

i won't believe anymore

anything you will say to me

i know will not be true

 

you just came to my last walk

to pretend you were friend of mine

i know you always lied at me

i thought you'll change one day

 

but this day never came

and now is too late

i won't be here anymore

and your heart still said me

 

you are not sad cause it

what will you do now?

which muppet will you find now?

 

you broke that doll

what will you do tomorrow?

which one will you lie again?

 

Ariadna Squire Damique (15/08/2005)

Beautiful.

Adri i got to ask u this

where do u come up with these poems? i mean really? wt do u feel when u write these poems?

especially this one i liked the last part where he came in a black suit pretendin he is ur friend when the charecter in the story died and left that bastard who was laughin at her like this

 

i mean in this poem did u feel angry? agressive? sad? or somethin completely else?

if this is a personal question then sorry for askin :( just ignore my question

:embarrased: beautiful but so sad :embarrased:

thanks a lot pai, yanni and fifi.

 

yanni no problem, you can ask everything you want. well i was a bit angry with a friend yesterday... we don't use to talk a lot, the last time we talked we ended arguing about the nick i had on my msn, so that's why this poem come up.

 

once i was anrgy with a friend time ago i wrote a poem similar like this, but that's life you know life is a lot of feelings, good and bad feeling and everyday is different, i don't only write love poems as you see. :)

 

my friend just like my love poems :/ but i think both are as good as the other, don't you think?

don't make you feel the same the poem is about when you read it? so that's poetry too. :)

 

and remember yesterday i was a bit angry too because i had a terrible headache all the day :cry: and i'm reading some horror and mystery stories by Allan Poe. :)

Ari, your new poem is haunting and dark. I like it very very much. ;)

thanks a lot pai, yanni and fifi.

 

yanni no problem, you can ask everything you want. well i was a bit angry with a friend yesterday... we don't use to talk a lot, the last time we talked we ended arguing about the nick i had on my msn, so that's why this poem come up.

 

once i was anrgy with a friend time ago i wrote a poem similar like this, but that's life you know life is a lot of feelings, good and bad feeling and everyday is different, i don't only write love poems as you see. :)

 

my friend just like my love poems :/ but i think both are as good as the other, don't you think?

don't make you feel the same the poem is about when you read it? so that's poetry too. :)

 

and remember yesterday i was a bit angry too because i had a terrible headache all the day :cry: and i'm reading some horror and mystery stories by Allan Poe. :)

 

i knew it :P u was angry

well Ari my friend any poem that shakes ur feelings and emotions is a briliant poem, no need to be a love poem

i hope u get better from ur headaches and sorry to hear that u are arguin witha friend of urs about a stupid nick name :/

 

have u ever writen a poem that u regretted?

i know it sounds wiered, but maybe some ppl write down stuff and then when they read it, they feel foolish for feelin like this or writin this poem

well for example when i used to write a diary(ages ago :P ) i sometimes was surprised of wt i wrote and i was scarin myself hehe

but i learned one thing that it is good to write down how u feel no matter how hard it is...i donnu y i stopped writin diarys :S

ah well

great poem :)

thanks a lot aaron

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thanks a lot yanni. well i prefer to write it and don't really argue with my friend, she said me something i didn't like how it sounded that was all and now she wants to be in contact with me again and i stil remember the last time we talked so i feel she has changed a lot and is not the same girl i knew :/ that's sad, so i felt like she lied me all this time.

thanks a lot, seems i have no headache today.

 

well sometimes when i re-read an old poems i wrote i think 'how i could wrote this?' sometimes cause is a bit weird and sometimes cause is too good to me mine lol but i go on and it make me feel the same of what the poem is about and so i think that's the thing of a poem make you feel anything and if it make me feel the same that what the poem is about, years ago it means is a good one, so i never destroy any poem of mine even when i was tempted to, cause it hink this, it at least makes me feel something so it works.

 

but i don't use to re-read very often, i used to do it time ago and i used to change them later so that's why i don't re-read them.

:)

 

i used to write a diary years ago but not now i don't know what to say.. but at least some blogs works like a diary to me so.. well i still write a diary sometimes.

Ari I just saw your PM

 

The poem is very beautiful, as always, I can relate to it. Im gonna read it again tomorow cuz I have to go right now, I'll seeya later.

ok reilly thanks a lot. ;)

 

i listened your band, is cool i'm going to download more songs soon. :D

If i cry now

If i cry now

it'll be for you

because i'll miss you loads

but doing it, i'll remember you

 

that's a weird thing i know

but there's what i can do now

 

if i cry alone today

everybody will think i'm fool

i don't mind about it now

 

those words have a meaning now

i'm sure i will miss you loads

i didn't expected to lose you that soon

i'm sure you'll be doing fine

 

oh my, were you who tried to cheer me up

and now i still have your nice words in my memory

and i'll have them always

because that song have a meaning now

 

it will make me cry

i don't mind if i'm a fool

is cause i miss you loads

 

i didn't expect to be like this

but today i feel i lose a part of me

i know you'll be doing fine

but nothing will be the same without you

 

i told you how i feel the last time we talked

but there's nothing i can do now

just wish you the best

and keep the good moments we had

 

i don't mind now if i cry

like a fool all the day

but i will miss you loads

dear friend, i wish you the best

 

Ariadna Squire Damique (wednesday 24/08/2005)

that's a nice poem.. but sad...

thanks a lot loreto :D

i know it's sad, but not all writing have to be happy i think :) well i noticied most of my poems are a bit or too sad :confused:

Wow Ari. Beautiful and sad. I really enjoyed reading that. Thanks much :kiss:

That poem is beautiful Ari,so sad. :cry:

thanks a lot aaron and jess, i was feeling very sad when i wrote it :(

Sometimes sadness helps us create beautiful things.

yes i know, it helped me to feel better later. :)

 

i guess the person who the poem is about won't know it was 'cause him/her :rolleyes:

That is usually the case. Your writing seems to be a good emotional outlet for you Ari ;)

yes luckily it makes me good, i mean may be some writers write a sad poem and are more sad later :stunned:

 

well when i read them later it make me feel (even years later) how i was feeling, and what the poem is about :) so that's sad or happy. :D i also have lovely happy poems.

I know you have happy poems to :) It's good to have a wide array of emotional poems. I really like reading your work.

:blush: thanks a lot aaron. :) but i still think i have to do some courses to improve it. :)