it's ok... it's just that is easier for me to remember names than usernames :P

 

I'm Loreto, but you can call me Lore (as you can see in my username :wacky: )

 

nice to meet you!

haha, you guys are too nice :blush: :D

but it DOES need an ending, a good one. i suck at endings. so i need help with that :D.

 

i have a lot of work this week, but as of friday afternoon i'm free for four days and can really work on this if need be. that's not to say i'm dropping helping now (i need SOMETHING to procrastinate with! :P), but i can really do more this weekend.

 

don't worry we'll need a few days to let all the board members know about this and contribute with ideas... :D

 

Awww Chelsea, the letter is so perfect :heart:

 

I'm just not sure if we should thank 'The Oracle' and 'Debs' :P

 

 

:lol:

Hmm, maybe the ending should be something really sappy like "we hope you enjoy these as much as we've enjoyed all of your music over the years", etc... :P

Soooooooooo does that mean no one liked my idea or i dont know???:)

Aww, that's a good idea.... Zoe! :D

it's ok... it's just that is easier for me to remember names than usernames :P

 

I'm Loreto, but you can call me Lore (as you can see in my username :wacky: )

 

nice to meet you!

 

Nice to meet you too!

Soooooooooo does that mean no one liked my idea or i dont know???:)

 

it's a good idea... :)

 

it's great that everyone is trying to contribute to this! so we'll choose the best alternative possible :)

I think shipping them in one big package was one of the possibilities, right? I can't even remember anymore :P

it's a good idea... :)

 

it's great that everyone is trying to contribute to this! so we'll choose the best alternative possible :)

 

Thank you...Im not really good at ideas and im really shy.....so it took alot to come and say what i thought!! haha:D

Ok ive got some critism. Maybe the thanks was a bit overused. I feel the same way about how much they have given us but I also feel that to cut it a bit shorter, we could stop repeating ourselves a bit in the letter. THats all.

 

Ending- I hope you enjoy our early christmas present to you and that you are suprised that we know where the bakery is....

an ending i came up with. you don't have to use it, but it's just a slight idea for a proper ending. mind, i am no native speaker.

 

Concluding, we wanted to express our love and appreciation.

We hope the large amount of postcards will not keep you from working on further songs and ideas but be a great inspiration and motivation provided by your fans.

yes, i'm very good at repeating myself. i thought the same thing. any suggestions of lines to take out/rework?

Zoe- I think so... but I think the official position as of now is to wait and see what kind of response we get from the other Coldplayers (when the rest of Europe wakes up! :P) and run the idea by Debs...... right?

We hope the large amount of postcards will not keep you from working on further songs and ideas but be a great inspiration and motivation provided by your fans.

 

 

 

:whip: we love you guys but don't stop working :whip:

 

:lol:

Hmmm... maybe we can combine the first and third paragraphs a little? We definitely need to keep the thanks to the management etc., but maybe some of the other stuff can be mixed together.

:D

perfect! :P

Zoe- I think so... but I think the official position as of now is to wait and see what kind of response we get from the other Coldplayers (when the rest of Europe wakes up! :P) and run the idea by Debs...... right?

 

right :P

Great idea Lore!!!!!!!!!!!

maybe we can send them in Christmas or november

to say thanks for prospepkt march!

=D

^ ur a funny one...

 

Im lucky being in aus. Its the middle of the day over here. So have we decided who is delivering the post cards or how they are getting to CP?

i changed one line so far:

"Wherever Coldplay fans live and whatever languages they speak, something every one of us could do was drop a postcard in the post with a short message in any language sharing a personal Coldplay experience."

(i took out one of the many instances of the word "thanks," so maybe that makes it better?)

:whip: we love you guys but don't stop working :whip:

 

:lol:

 

Haha- "don't use this as a distraction or we'll take them all back" ;)

 

We should combine all of the ending ideas into one paragraph... if we can do that and still make it coherent.

My posts are way out cause everyone can type faster....

Are u guys gonna send them seperate or together???

 

Sorry im lost!!

Are u guys gonna send them seperate or together???

 

Sorry im lost!!

 

we still need to discuss most of the project... but we will let you all know about it :P

Haha, it's amazing how quickly this thread is going.... and at such a weird time of day/night! :P