colduser Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 You still have great raw talent for writing Ari :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 thanks a lot aaron. :) i would like i can post here some of the short stories or plays i wrote but all them are in spanish so i must translate them previously :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 Don't worry about that Ari. :) Translations sometimes fiddle with the words and order. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 may be but some times is not easy.. sometimes i lose the main sense and others it even lose the rhyme (is is a poem). :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted August 26, 2005 Author Share Posted August 26, 2005 "if i cry alone today everybody will think i'm fool i don't mind about it now " I loved that line, there was a time i could relate to that one.. its so beautiful beita ..hope to read more of your poems soon :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olive Posted August 26, 2005 Share Posted August 26, 2005 nice poem Ari but so sad :cry: I should read the others some day... :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 26, 2005 Share Posted August 26, 2005 "if i cry alone today everybody will think i'm fool i don't mind about it now " I loved that line, there was a time i could relate to that one.. its so beautiful beita ..hope to read more of your poems soon :kiss: aww ren i know, i'm glad that you read them ren :kiss: nice poem Ari but so sad :cry: I should read the others some day... :) I know is a sad one, but none all of my poems are sad, i was re-reading the first ones i posted here and aren't that sad :) feel free to read them. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted August 28, 2005 Author Share Posted August 28, 2005 aww ren i know, i'm glad that you read them ren But of course, i luff them! :heart: I'm looking forward for a new one :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 there will be a new one soon i think :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted August 28, 2005 Author Share Posted August 28, 2005 wooo hooo!! I cant wait to read it :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingtoseehere Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 Oh Ari, I always use the word beautiful when reading your work, but they really truly are. They keep getting better, too. Great work. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 thanks a lot pai :blush: :kiss: yours very nice too. :cool: :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kekita Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 Wow just found this thread! Poetry the food of the soul. I really like Leaf on the Forest :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 thanks a lot kekita :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 i re-read my own poems that i posted here some days ago and leaf on the forest is one of my faves one.. i guess somebody can have her/his own faves works? :uhoh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kekita Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 of course! yay i like the authors fav :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 :D yesterday two poems come up :surprised: more or less at the same time... that was when i was re-watching live 8 concert :o, here on the telly at 3 am there's a short programme that show the concerts again, but just like 6 or 8 songs a day because is a 90 mins programme :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 Your eyes You woke up too early today you wish it was a dream but your eyes are red and your face is covered by tears someone asked you are you right honey you seem tired this morning you said everything's right you know it wasn't true but that the best you can do you think, but that's wrong it won't help you you wish it were true again but obviously you are wrong you don't recognize we made a mistake i know the truth hurts but lies hurts many more that's why your eyes are sad you lied your friends everyday saying everthings was right there was no problem in your life but there are some that you don't know the onces you can fix alone you think you are too old to ask for any help you thought you can fix it but some other came behind this one someone said he loves you and his words weren't right honey you know it, when is too late you wish it were true again but obviously you are wrong you don't recognize we made a mistake i know the truth hurts but lies hurts many more that's why your eyes are sad what you can do today? just hide on your room and cry, nothing more you think there's nothing i can do now never is too late honey tell me the truth friend i'll help you the best i can tell me what happened you though you were strong but you aren't, none is enough strong to go on alone with all his troubles both us can find how to fix it you wish it were true again but obviously you are wrong you don't recognize we made a mistake i know the truth hurts but lies hurts many more that's why your eyes are sad no more tears now let's we find an answer for your trouble friend everything will be fixed no hurts today, you'll feel if you want i help you and that'll be gone forever. Ariadna Squire Damique (Wednesday 31/08/2005) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 The last 2 poems are amazing! That last poem feels so familiar :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 14, 2005 Share Posted October 14, 2005 feels so familiar why? :huh: :( well i tried to find this thread days ago and i couldn't till now.. well ok i'm at uni now so i have less time to write... but an old story that i wrote more or less complety time ago, came up again days ago... :) that's a good thing unless that i guess i'll can't write.. i'll take notes and re-write it when i have more free time. :kiss: anyways i hope i can write poems soon. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Li_cold Posted October 14, 2005 Share Posted October 14, 2005 ari, your poems are so beautiful!I loved all of them!!good job, ari!and thanks for sharing them! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 15, 2005 Share Posted October 15, 2005 :blush: you are welcome li_cold :kiss: is a pleasure for me to can share them. :) you know that some people don't want to show their works (drawing, paintings, music, writings....) they are too shy.. i was too and sometimes i'm very shy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted February 4, 2006 Share Posted February 4, 2006 thanks a lot for thebestyoucan to find the link to this thread. I've been thinking to quit writing for ever these days ago but i think i must keep writing firstly because i love writing (i thought to quit it because i'm afraid my writings will be darker) and secondly because i want to devote m wiriting to my mum, because i'm sure that she is with me, and i want her to be proud of me wherever she is now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted February 4, 2006 Share Posted February 4, 2006 Ari.....you really should keep writing if you like it much....and if it helps you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 I really thought it won't help me now but oh well i always wanted to be a writer and recently a nice story come up, and i'm writing it slowly... about poems i don't know now... someones come up recently but i didn't wrote them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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